Zusammenfassung
Xazch who feel rejected by world feeling dejected because no one want to be near him, all of them seeing him with disgust or fear since they know all unfortunate event will happened to everyone who's close to him.
He didn't know about the real reason why all people did that to him since he didn't remember much his memories when he's child until he's teen.
So after thinking his life is really unlucky and dull, he's walking around the park, when he's standing beside the tree while seeing people with envy.
There's bunch of children which doing some seal with their hand while shouting something like bla...bla... Jutsu.
Then with his curiousity winning over his indifference feeling to life, he ask them from afar while telling them to answer from there since he didn't want their parent scolding them because being close to him.
After their answer given, he know there's existence like anime with video format which unlike pleasure video which he currently have within laptop.
With that he is going to home with rush, then turning his laptop on just to find Naruto Anime.
After that he's downloading all video which available then he watch the finished downloaded video while waiting for the rest of video downloaded.
While he just watch Naruto animation for research’s sake, he finds it's good to spend his time but the world say otherwise.
After he's killed by meteor which Earth guardian sent to erase his existence since his pendant which always steal the world energy around him.
He's reborn into the world which he know since the anime he watch is about that current world which he born to.
With restless mind knowing this world is in chaos for a month, then suddenly
*Ding soul binding has been finished!
*Ding initializing the Helper system!
*Processing data! 0%.... 10% ..... 50% ... 80% ..... 100%!
*Installing Helper's feature, applying data & saving data.
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Author's Note :
• Since Webnovel APK has writing novel feature added, I can update whenever from phone.
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Update Schedule :
• 3 Chapter Weekly - Maximum
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The chapter will vary from 1000 – 1500 word.
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Disclaimer :
All character except those that didn't appear on author work is not mine.
No infringement of these copyrights is intended, and is not authorized by the copyright holder.
All original characters are the property of Masashi Kishimoto the Author of Naruto's series and manga.
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because you constant apology about bad grammar, so it's should your obvious flaw in writing. though my grammar is also bad, so don't worry there's no way i'm criticizing your grammar. Just make sure you will write this fanfic until it's finished, don't copy other people style who's always dropping it when the fans already gathered for them but all they could give is just disappointment because their fanfic is dropped without reason.
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Great story although its a little to fast with the plot..... I wish you make rhe part where thei fighting a little more with details Maybe it will give more satisfaction when reading it Hehehehe....just my little wish
Shameless review from it's own author hehe. so this fanfic timeline is started same with itachi generation, and his personality is rotten because he didn't care about unrelated people but he care for his close people and family. He's an orphan who's never get warm of family, so within Naruto's world where he has everything that he didn't possess in the past and it's causing his childish personality sometimes appear when he's with his family or his close people like trusted comrade and friend. Although he can become cold-blooded if it's needed, this personality is appeared because his past life experience so his trust will be hard enough to be gained unless his instinct tell him the person is really could be trusted.
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Keep up with your writing pace, just this week you give us 20 chapter release!! Good Job!!~ So can you stay like this and finish it till the end, this fanfic of your is unique! I don't know why but its feel like you really interact and listen to the fans of your fanfic! because you've sometimes give us big surprise that you took other advice on your next chapter. like there's some comment who's want you save Itachi and shisui then create good future for them to be alive then boom you gave it. though earlier i did check there's seem someone who's quite alike with teacher within the school of mine. My teacher who's should teach us his student himself but he always tell us to read the book and solve the question from the book and he just need to give rank for each of us! That person tell you to learn from writer from fanfiction.net by yourself, see that he's quite alike with my teacher, that scum teacher within my school is almost same that they have same thinking with giving bad rank its should give boost for learner or student to give their best but its always have opposite effect. in fact if they did teach theirself rather than tell us to study by ourself, his heart should be good but its should be the opposite so just ignore it. that double review seem personal attack with nothing within it that has mean to help but just giving negative effect where the translator and newbie author to be discouraged. this type person, you don't need to pay attention to his comment or review because earlier when I see from his profile its almost full negative comment to other author or translator.
wow MOAR SECT leader? you should live up to your sect name, give us your fan MOAR of chapter!!! after this week 20 chapter release, it's not enough!! how about 40 chapter? then it's should be good ☻. ckckck I'm aware how shameless I am, but i'm sure all your reader who is enjoying your fanfic should have same opinion with me ☻
MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!!
I like your work. Hope you dont drop it But is one time feature like talent costumizer cannot put to use again?. Sorry for my bad english.................................
woah, 20 chapter this week? did you duped? slow down please! it's not that i want you to stop writing, but i don't want you to suddenly stop yourself from writing because your drive gone later. seeing there's 2 negative review i fear because that person you will be discouraged so please relax yourself for a while then after your brain refreshed you can continue to write again. By the way that two negative review is from the same person? is that person has his own novel that he write with perfect grammar and the so called perfect plot by him? care to tell me his work link, everyone?
Keep up the work I really like the novel I always wanted a MC with such power Just continue with your work and don't drop it Its best that it's the the same time line with itachi
Good fan fic well it's used system too op actually but well that's part make it easy to predicted though personally i love fan fic so i love this one too
Hey I really like the development of the plot and the story is good although rushed it's very good. Please don't drop the novel midway since it is a really good story.
I'm giving you a five star because I want to cheer you on, it is making me happy that a lot of fanfic writers here in webnovel/qidian is taking on the Naruto verse, just like you I'm writing one as well. I'd like to share my experience with you maybe we could also exchange notes so we could better our own stories. One there will definitely be crazy fans of the original series who would notice even the slightest mistake it could be on techniques, timeline or touching specific characters. That's ok, it's your story keep on writing but it would help a lot if you research on the characters who are already existing in the canon so that you could better write your plots not just that but also consider their impact on the whole series, again it is just my opinion you are free to do what you want. I also have my troubles with the English grammar since like you I'm not a native speaker, it would really help though if you could read western novels since they sort of enhance your skills in English while reading it. Reading up online in subject verb agreements and other rules would help too there are online quizzes that are not so hard to access it would probably increase your readers once they could better understand your writing... I'm still trying to improve on my English Grammar as well like everyone is I'm not perfect, I'll never be. Try to make an outline so that you have a clear goal on where your writing will take you and not to write blindly base on your whims... I once did that I sort of release a few not so good chapters. It would also help if you have designed your characters and other important characters end goal like what techniques can they use, what kind of mastery they have how strong could they be... clearly your novel has a system that could make a lot of things possible so you have to keep track of that. Compile your crazy ideas in a notepad or word file it helps, I've been doing it a lot. Don't look at the word count... it sorts of limit you as well, I think you should base the end of a chapter base on your feeling as a writer. It's just my opinion though. :) Be more descriptive in writing, I guess it is quite hard since we are not native speakers of the language but like what they all say the start is always the hardest. Once you get used to it everything will be more free flowing for you... I'm not saying it's already like that to me because like you I'm also a journeyman in writing, I guess my big flaw would be I'm very detailed with my chapters that it takes too long for a one chapter to end to the point that it might bore my readers. just like this review its really long now hahaha. Bad reviews and criticisms are your friends they would help you on what you could improve on, since they took the time to scrutinize your work why not use it for yourself and improve your novel. That's what I did I never took their criticism as an attack instead I liked it because they point out things I could improve on. I think of them as my best friends while writing the webnovel. Again you have a great Idea keep on writing and just like everyone else I'm also fan of your work waiting for what's going to happen next. If I said anything that offended you in this post/review I apologize it is not my intent it never is, I only wanted to share my experience and hoped that you could share yours as well. like you it is also my first time writing a webnovel I would really love it if someone out of nowhere give me suggestions and criticism on how I could improve my work basically an editor right... Good luck and God bless!
woah, love your mass release! its best if you do mass release again!! woah, love your mass release! its best if you do mass release again!! woah, love your mass release! its best if you do mass release again!! woah, love your mass release! its best if you do mass release again!!
I’m always up for a naruto fanfic and you author a one of a kind man, you did the impossible and let the family alive, I’m really thankful you took a different turn from other authors.😭😭
you always say sorry about grammar? but i dont know what is good grammar so i dont care at least your fanfic is good to read. by the way is grammar taste is good?lol keep up your writing, just avoid getting hurt because obvious critic like something negative review about your grammar. because that type of critic always chase away author, especially newbie author like you. so just see us who enjoy it, don't focus on the one who dont enjoy it. Ganbatte Kudasai!!
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I like the way the story and mc is going . A selfish and little evil mc who's willing to kill any threat to his family. Please to make a ant- hero type mc for long run. Please keep up the good work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Super merci beaucoup un univers très riche et une bonne compréhension de l'univers de naruto, je ne donne pas la note max pasque j'aime lire et tu sortes pas assez mais prends ton temps
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Honestly this 'righteous' mc(is how i see it or its just the mc pitying Naruto characters and changing what made them who they were in the anime) is annoying, but its not the main reason on why the rating is so low. I've been around the block and read a ****-ton of fanfics from the happy go lucky to the heavy angst/insane character, the main reason i've rated it so low is because its so generic. I don't know how many fanfics I dropped because of the same plot each time, the only advice I could give to you haven't been to fanfiction.net go there and read what you shouldn't do. If i'm guessing right this might be your first novel so yeah its not gonna have the best writing quality but try to be unique.