Reviews of Rebirth : Naruto's World With Helper System by Morvian - Webnovel

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BILLY_Dores

Chapter 18-49 destroyer this novel Chapter 18-49 destroyer this novel Chapter 18-49 destroyer this novel 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😞😞😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😞😞😞😔🤩

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manas1234u

its very nice story....just read it all at once...love the journey of lead characters...he is too much powerfull but still i love it...i would love to watch his siblings development....and what about new chaeacter wich also got reincarnated????please some of his journey

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Irhysa

Okay, so. To a person that doesn't really know much about the jutsus, plot, characters in Naruto (I've only watched a few episodes of Naruto in my lifetime) - this novel is great! I love that Neji is the MC; definitely a change from the 'reincarnated as Naruto' or 'reborn in the Naruto universe'. Really good pacing of action and plot events. Overall nice read, would recommend :)

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kuro58

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Kolarvis

Daily task before I forgotten about it again hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Btw where new chapter?

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Dinoz

For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task! For daily task!

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Radista

Usual fanfic which seem yo be dropped because defamer! I hope you will resume this! I know that author is focusing on his / her original so I expect this would be continued when he done later! Unfortunately I can't help much in material like money! I would only try to give you support with this 5 star!

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Gesta

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Elainez

Just for daily task! BTW, where the new chapter?? Just for daily task! BTW, where the new chapter?? Just for daily task! BTW, where the new chapter?? Just for daily task! BTW, where the new chapter??

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Hocolate

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aysdrap

the start of the story is okay , but in the process its turning wild and its not beautiful the story development is poor as in you do not have focus . you should focus is naruto story or his sister and brother you should not have give the mc very powerful because its gonna be boring if its so fast pace story just slow it down . you can re-write it . its good man try harder .

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Heiss

Long story short, the MC is a fucking ***** who always said 'It is not me who us wrong, but the world' just because he is average man, who DID nothing in his life because he is not a perfect type person, and blaming ALL OF IT to the WORLD, GOD, ANYTHING that do nothing to him at all, afterall he is just a ***** who whining all the time. Summary : MC is a brat who ran away from reality while blaming ALL THE THING HAPPENED TO HIM BECAUSE OF THE WORLD REJECTING HIM, NOT HIM HIMSELF. I dont know about the story, but from the other review, it seems pretty good, but I quit. Hate the MC, just another brat thrown into Naruto world. I bet when he dont know chakra manipulation he will blame the world again.

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iReading

Naruto(original series) has been destroyed. The authoe probably is a mouse since I can taste the cheese... MC is too OP and it just ruins the balance, especially the negative emotion absorber, without both sides of good and evil, there is no ******* beacuse desires fuel on such feelings. Terribly optimistic author with a mindset of a pure infant, not IQ but this novel is just too unrealisitc and it totally destroys all convention just to twist the plot in a way that causes nausea.

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AcediaZebu

Doesn’t even bother to try and improve his English/grammar as a writer. Not worth reading.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩Plus it looks like pretty much the only power stones for the story are from the author...

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Elder

Many confused thoughts are crumpled and thrown at the reader. In short fic far below the average. Not recommended for reading. The first chapters where he gives himself more strength are still readable but further horror and nightmare.

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Native

I like the story and effort put in plus the changes the mc made to canon. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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sakurajean

Hmmm!! I can't give a higher star for now coz i don't know yet what's inside. Since im a big fan of naruto so im being curious what the story will be, so i will read and let see how many star i can give. 😉

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OpinionatedPotato

I'm gonna give this novel a really low rating for a very ****** reason. The author has completely broken the entire world story. 10 Chapters in and the MC (who is 6 years old) can already fight 1 on 1 with Obito, literally. MC also prevented the death of certain important characters who should have died during such and such attack on such and such village. If this world breaking nonsense isn't enough, the grammar for the entire thing leaves much to be desired. It's not so bad that it's unreadable, but it's bad enough to where you have to read it two or three times before you understand what's going on, and if you try to skim read, good luck. Overall, the only thing that I can say that it decent about this novel is the release rate. If the author rewrote the story and opted to not break the entire naruto universe and also got a real editor, this novel would probably be much more popular.

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flownight

Good fan fic well it's used system too op actually but well that's part make it easy to predicted though personally i love fan fic so i love this one too

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AJ45456

Hey I really like the development of the plot and the story is good although rushed it's very good. Please don't drop the novel midway since it is a really good story.

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Andre_Sec

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LordBoreas

I know you have already said that the grammar is bad, however as a word of advice I suggest that you get the grammar right in the synopsis. Otherwise the story is good and while it is developing slightly quickly it is a good read.

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neobenmike

I have read all the chapters and the grammar is horrible, the author is doing nothing but apologize, instead of finding ways to improve the grammar on this fanfic. Do not read it until the grammar is fixed

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soumabha

I like the way the story and mc is going . A selfish and little evil mc who's willing to kill any threat to his family. Please to make a ant- hero type mc for long run. Please keep up the good work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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anotherfan

I'm giving you a five star because I want to cheer you on, it is making me happy that a lot of fanfic writers here in webnovel/qidian is taking on the Naruto verse, just like you I'm writing one as well. I'd like to share my experience with you maybe we could also exchange notes so we could better our own stories. One there will definitely be crazy fans of the original series who would notice even the slightest mistake it could be on techniques, timeline or touching specific characters. That's ok, it's your story keep on writing but it would help a lot if you research on the characters who are already existing in the canon so that you could better write your plots not just that but also consider their impact on the whole series, again it is just my opinion you are free to do what you want. I also have my troubles with the English grammar since like you I'm not a native speaker, it would really help though if you could read western novels since they sort of enhance your skills in English while reading it. Reading up online in subject verb agreements and other rules would help too there are online quizzes that are not so hard to access it would probably increase your readers once they could better understand your writing... I'm still trying to improve on my English Grammar as well like everyone is I'm not perfect, I'll never be. Try to make an outline so that you have a clear goal on where your writing will take you and not to write blindly base on your whims... I once did that I sort of release a few not so good chapters. It would also help if you have designed your characters and other important characters end goal like what techniques can they use, what kind of mastery they have how strong could they be... clearly your novel has a system that could make a lot of things possible so you have to keep track of that. Compile your crazy ideas in a notepad or word file it helps, I've been doing it a lot. Don't look at the word count... it sorts of limit you as well, I think you should base the end of a chapter base on your feeling as a writer. It's just my opinion though. :) Be more descriptive in writing, I guess it is quite hard since we are not native speakers of the language but like what they all say the start is always the hardest. Once you get used to it everything will be more free flowing for you... I'm not saying it's already like that to me because like you I'm also a journeyman in writing, I guess my big flaw would be I'm very detailed with my chapters that it takes too long for a one chapter to end to the point that it might bore my readers. just like this review its really long now hahaha. Bad reviews and criticisms are your friends they would help you on what you could improve on, since they took the time to scrutinize your work why not use it for yourself and improve your novel. That's what I did I never took their criticism as an attack instead I liked it because they point out things I could improve on. I think of them as my best friends while writing the webnovel. Again you have a great Idea keep on writing and just like everyone else I'm also fan of your work waiting for what's going to happen next. If I said anything that offended you in this post/review I apologize it is not my intent it never is, I only wanted to share my experience and hoped that you could share yours as well. like you it is also my first time writing a webnovel I would really love it if someone out of nowhere give me suggestions and criticism on how I could improve my work basically an editor right... Good luck and God bless!

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Roktah

you desperately need an editor. I cannot read one sentence without reading multiple mistakes. As you can see i only made it halfway through chapter 1 before i decided to stop.

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Kling

Super merci beaucoup un univers très riche et une bonne compréhension de l'univers de naruto, je ne donne pas la note max pasque j'aime lire et tu sortes pas assez mais prends ton temps