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Zusammenfassung
Just a random fanfic novel with two cliché systems and big plot on the way.
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All pictures that taken and the disclaimer from the novel's are not from me. I'm just taking them as a reference.
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This is my first ever novel writing and my english is my second language so you may see some grammer mistakes in the novel so do let me know. And if your enjoying what your reading, you might as well drop some stones and cheer me up to continue the novel!
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HollyRisk Beigetragen 44 -
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Nekomiko_succubus Beigetragen 14 -
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NO_GUD Beigetragen 11
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I won't be too harsh since it's your first book but i think pointing out faults in your writing style will make you much better rather than hurt your feelings so here goes nothing repetitive words ( ex. the young boy, if you look, etc) not so fluid writing - can't put it in properly but yeah reading feels odd
I have a lot of hope on you author don't disappoint me p.s when will you make the lemon p.s.s heheheh that's all I think that I got to say hm
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The shameless author is dropping a shameless 5 stars for no particular reason. If you enjoyed this fanfic novel drop some stone on the way and let me know your thoughts :D