Marvel: Start at The New York War with Whitebeard's Ability

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Lostleg

So he used freaking shok ability to change direction of nuclear missle? I think its not how it works right? Missle should have exploded after first air shok.

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Baldysalino

first off, don't let the title trick you. the white beard power was only a 2-hour thing, and the experience card was finished. second, it was written terribly. the style was based on Chinese ff, so basically lots of Hiss! Silence! etc. and it's just the other superheroes getting amazed by Mc constantly, which even that was done badly. all in all, my disappointment is immeasurable, my day is ruined.

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asaade

this is actually bad the mc is just a side character and nothing actually gonna change in the plot, only some minor change like the one where the MC put the nuc bomb in the portal instead of ironman, thats the only thing that change

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CIiff_Hanger

Can you link the raws and give credit to the author of the fan-fiction? As it is right now your current actions are quite low seeing as you are of profiting his work. Review will be removed/editted once done.

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MrSleepyAsh98ij3g

This is really bad...Don't waste your time on it..The characters are really shallow with no real reassemble of their original...Their reaction is overdramitic and their whole being is screaming 'Chinese'...Don't get me wrong there are many good book with chinese author but these is not one of those..The story is also really cringe..

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ElG0hary

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Ashmodai

This is a really bad Story. The title is basically click bait since whitebeards power lasts only 2 hours. The most pathetic thing about this is, that this just a translation some thief puts on Patreon without crediting the original author. Don't support such people.

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Ivan_Accosano

The title is one of the largest clickbait i have seen, the whitebeard power only lasts for two hours. Also it reads like a chinese novel specially a badly written one

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EclipseKing

man whan i read this its like i read Chinese novels

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Carlos_Balbizan

it's basically a novel that was stolen from mtl, it's garbage... in the middle of the war/fight the mc uses power and the guys just decide to stop and talk while thousands of people die? author didn't even bother to translate properly... it's more like an automatic translator

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SAINT_GABRIEL

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0Gilgamesh0

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Herbivore

vraiment c'est pas ouf, le développement de l'histoire est bancal et ce résume par ; random : ho il est trop beau trop fort whoula Nick Fury qui est sensé être paranoïaque et méfiant de tout le monde ( surtout radin) l'acclame comme un petit toutou qui a retrouvé son maitre et lui file 200k dollars, un grand merci a M. facilité scénaristique pour ca je suppose. L'histoire avance pas et est fade, j'ai gouter des ostiques avec plus de gout que cette histoire ... perte de temps

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Over_Lord_9904

Clickbait. Trash Mc. . .

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Sprewks

Don't read this. Feels like it was written by a 14 year old Chinese kid. My braincells were dying as each chapter passed. As of Chapter 35, I swear they spent 5-10 chapters on the MC punching a machine! Characters are 1 dimensional af, and there is a lot of nonsense that is written. Where I dropped off, the DIRECTOR OF SHIELD tells the MC there is an interview he can do. Not CNN, BBC, ABC, FOX or something, no some random internet girl. Let's not delve into the fact that SHIELD would need to do MASSIVE damage control, not let a 19year old brat speak to any public media, they're just like "go ahead, don't worry about it". And then everyone is like "He's my hero" "He is my Idol". It's so contrived my ancestors coughed up blood

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DURJOY_Barua

Terrible writing quality and author likes to do the face slapping thing from chinese novels. Author makes it look like Avengers are ignorant and never seen the world, like come on man they have a god among them and a guy who can turn into a gaint monster and a guy had a freaking reactor in his chest 😑😑😑 this doesn't even deserve 2 star

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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Ymmmechai

aka i have god level experience card (marvel) aka i have god level experience card (marvel) aka i have god level experience card (marvel) aka i have god level experience card (marvel) aka i have god level experience card (marvel)

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Red_baron

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