In the World of Tensura WAY TOO EARLY!!!

LV 4

BobboLobbo

It's a typical isekai story where the MC loses he's IQ. This is another fanfic just like every other 'meh' fanfic. Read it if you're out of stuff to read.

LV 1

GUNSHOTTER

So far so good, the only problem was the mistakes in some spelling and also some crucial canon info like how the war starts every 500 yrs not 1000, all in all, its good. Just refer to this pic down here.

LV 1

Ahathatha

MC is just your normal Isekai BETA MALE MC. Plus the I know that you ain't reading the LN or WN but at least get some info right about. Stop changing the characters too much man, making The Elf Emperor a s*x friend? What's up with that?

LV 11

Reinhard_t

I was quite Happy That He wont be in Cannon Timeline since its interesting But There id Alot Of Crossover which made me Drop it an Abput Gabriel Isnt be Pretty rude and idk about the Mc he should Have Wished for Some Better skills

LV 4

Evilswordmank423

too clinche for me not my preferance 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

LV 2

Seikai

I understand that it's a FanFic. However, come on man, changing them girls and twisting their personalities just for the MC to have some se– nevermind...

LV 14

lstreader

I like this fanfic. MC makes the story interesting with everything he does. I liked Yue and Alice, but I'm not really a fan of Mio and Tomoe, they are kinda copied too much, and I don't like how World Sage just gave them a personality. Overall, I hope the story continues, I can't wait to see the changes he makes and how they affect what happens with Rimuru.

LV 14

Deathsreh

5 stars full!! I love this one, hope it continues on improving, being a writer is hard but the way you make it is much better, i love his adventures and encounters with some of the notable characters in canon, the canon should not be too far now i think so, i cant wait for canon to start i mean the mc in this novel is someone the world knows and look up to add the fact that his achievements are nothing to scoff at, great novel and great start!!

LV 4

K1000

It's Good . . .

LV 2

Daoist266256

Exp. And good work.

LV 2

Vinzky

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LV 4

juanultimopoder

it's verte good a bit short though Man ..,........................................m....m...mmmmmm.m...mm....................................

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

good chapters and good history. *************************************************************************************************************************************************

LV 4

DaoOfMeat

I don’t get why people are giving this a low score, it’s really good. Give it a try, get some help.

LV 13

Justsome_nobody

this ff is good, it has some unique ideas [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 2

killjoy0519

keep it up loving the story . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 4

z_andalus

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LV 3

Buggy_The_Clown

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LV 4

rangga

Menarik, novel yang punya banyak potensi untuk digali, yah menurutku cerita nya menarik hanya saja perlu dilihat sejauh mana cerita bisa berjalan