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Yun Shi is a postgraduate IT student, after completing university he didn't manage to get a single job. And so he became a NEET. For two years playing only games and living off what little savings he had. When he was at his ropes end the first VRMMO was released its name was AWO. And so Shi said "I will try it, after all, life is just crap"
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It's easy to read It's fun It's a VRMMO And unlike other VRMMO's that are on this site, it comes with a twist, the twist is revealed in the first chapter. Go read it and find out, what it is
1.The novel is not well though out and the characters interaction with each other are extremely synthetic and cliche 2.The world history and background is extremely shallow and not fully flesh out 3.Inhuman actions from the MC Example: Girl: hey whats the quest that guy just give to you? MC: Oh here have a look it's a 'hidden quest' BTW Girl:Wow nice can we share? MC:Sure The MC is in F*** death game BTW Atleast the update is fast (I'm not saying this to discourage the author but to help him improve and accept criticism) Reading this novel is like eating fast food it's not good but it will fill you up Note: Sorry if there is some grammar mistakes in my review I just woke up 😂 😂 😂
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dude. thank you. let those readers say what ever they want. just be yourself and dont give up. for those who says bad things about this novel. better dont read it at all, the writter didn't force you to read this. so better shut up, and we all have our own point of view. let there be peace on earth. Amen hahahaha 😆😆😆😆
So stupid i fine with story but when that nightside Girls come and bossy around and mc like idiot just folow around im drop this shiit he just like pushover man dont have dick or maybe autor is one of M lot autor M this day like violet girls or bossy girls mc like slave do what ever she say like idiot
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Needs a little work on spelling and grammar, but if the author gets Grammarly or something similar it'll be fine. Only 3 chapters in so I can't quite have a solid review but I'll go with it. So far, its only been mentioned that MC is a neet, poor (even though he has 100,000 dollars left), yet smart. He's got a "go with the flow" attitude, and seems like the type of guy who would be relaxed even in dangerous situations. Also, this realllllyyyy copies Sword Art Online, except it has some unique things, such as the GMs actually answering a help call, and unique classes (I don't remember if SAO had unique classes actually). The MC even references sword art online when he's entering AWO too... There hasn't been much world building, actually, more like none at all. It has a good update schedule, but like I said before, it's only 3 chapters in so I can't have a firm view on it, not to mention this is a side novel with the author focusing mainly on his other novel World: The Beginning, with over a 100 chapters written.
Great novel but story progressing feel to haste and lack of detail. It's should explain a little bit detail assume reader don't have any gaming experience even tho it's about game. The beauty of RPG in it's detail, game introduction, skill explanation and style when execute and etc. Adding climatic scene
i've a bi problem with this novel : It takes place in an "absurd" world ( 'v got no problem with that, it's just a fact, it's not realist) but the people are incoherent in this world, there is an absurdity in the absurd, it would have make sens if it had been done with the intention to, but i fear it's not the case. It degrade severly the novel
Very bad imitation of SAO. I don't mind if the author want's to have a roguish MC but outright villains should NEVER be the MC. The storyline is badly developed and poorly thought out.
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I enjoyed reading the concept and the story yet.. the most confusing part is the amount of disparity between the protagonists behavior and what would be expected by him in the game world. My frustrations stem from his attempts at farming the game. For one, what's the rush? For another I do see the point in spending time farming weaker monsters. Yet his behaviour is to limit himself, not read any instruction manuals. Or even ability descriptions. Plus in game terms -50 light affinity is pretty self explanatory. ... Other than his bumbling. Having unforgiving NPCs is funny and having him be penalized for etiquette is refreshing. However for him to not realize that is exasperating. Honestly if the main character was more... Attentive and driven or at the very least more intelligent I'd much prefer how the story is progressing. Especially the moment where stats allowed him to increase or decrease intelligence. Such an event ah! I was really looking forward to it. Yet upon getting his stats multiplied I failed to see any change in his behaviour. This feels like it was a potentially really good story forced into being a parody. The story itself is filled with a lot of potential as an action or wish fulfilment or self discovering story. Personally I thought it was going to go the way that he'll grow up and find reason for living through the story through his defeatist attempts to stay in the game forever. I'll check back in regularly but I just feel like the story is to much of a parody compared to both the quality of writing which is very good and the world building which is also really good.
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Slow going plot MC claims to have bad luck but in fact he’s really stupid because he keeps making obviously bad decisions. You’re a vampire why would you turn your vampire spawn into a werewolf your races most hated foe
Writing quality, random errors here and there. Skill names sometimes changes between chapters with no warning. Update rate is a bit slow. Almost no story development. World background isn't thought out at all. Character design is pure nonsense. I'll summarize the parts of the story's beginning, everything after is a spoiler. MC tries to get a class, instantly rejected and banned from all the guilds (Paladin, Hunter, Swordsman, etc) one after the other. No reason at all, steps in through the guild doors, rejected and banned. Forced plot happens, he teleports to the vampire continent. Offends all the vampire class instructors instantly. Saved by the Queen, magically becomes one of the 2nd highest ranked vampires serving the Queen. MC has free beginner gear, when buying new gear later, discovers that the beginner sword (does around 10 dmg?) costs 1 gold coin in the shop, in an era with bronze/copper, silver, and gold coins. He also got an extreme discount because of his special status as vampire nobility. How are players suppises to survive? How do the peasants in those kingdoms survive? You only get a few copper coins from killing mobs, and peasants live happily on farming wheat? Later encounters human girl (abandoned by human family or something) adopted by werewolves. Slaughters her beloved family (few dozen people) and the father she adores brutally right before her eyes. Heavily damages her, forces her to become his pet. System does some brainwashing for loyalty. Later murders her foster mother. Decides to evolve her werewolf bloodline so she becomes some sort of Alpha Wolf, probably something like royalty. She breaks free from the system's mind control and runs away. Later MC goes to the werewolf kingdom, murders the royal family, massacres a bit less than half the kingdom. Eventually captures the girl, brings her to the Vampire Queen. Queen decides to kill the werewolf on the spot. MC asks Queen to spare girl's life. The Queen's favorability (relationship, affection, good feelings, etc) towards him instantly plummets into the negatives. Yet he continued asking another 3/4 times. Magically, the werewolf girl, seeing her mortal vampire enemy, asking the Vampire Queen to spare her life. Her hate for him instantly disappears and her love for him reaches infinity within a spilt second. I asked about this in the comments, and to summarize the Author's response. "You see, child. Anyone with a heart would have feelings towards someone who saved their life." One major problem, MC murdered her family and slaughtered half her kingdom, he's only saying some words, no saving happened, it's highly likely it's just a show the VAMPIRES are putting up to mess with her, the (alpha) WEREWOLF girl. But no, she's not suspicious at all considering vampires and werewolves are absolute mortal enemies, and apparently that's how love works. That's barely a tenth of the twisted reasoning and the nonsense that happens within this story.
Don't read this ****. The author is fickle, he changed the skills every now and then, the story jumping around to much the MC goes one place then 5 minutes later goes to other place. Bruh that's not how gamers play. And what's with the MC Questionable IQ?
Quite a refreshing read its actually surprising thw low power stone rank even though i just read 82 chapters straight and still whanted more so the million dollar question is did the autor drop this lovely novel? If so its a shame cause i could actually see the love and dedication put in to this
It is a Great story, with some interesting and sexy developpements. Surprise races. Fun changes.lots of good content. Then rewrite is even better!
The VRMMO game in this novel really like SAO but the choice was given to player to play it. Those who choose to play this game really have the guts or really stupid. MC is like a newborn killer in this game. Blaming everything on his bad luck but continuously making wrong choice without thinking of the consequences. Even without PK his choice of action at least kill 60% of the player in the same maps for his own level up and item upgrades. new player will automatically will sacrifice their own life playing on a map without quest NPC in beginner village. A real tragedy for player indeed.
The story mc/author reasoning is not good, if the grammar and character decision was a little better it would have been a 3.5 novel. Story world background was the only thing good.
I honestly liked the novel. It is by far my second best to read next to MMROPG: Martial Gamer. I very much enjoyed your content and hope the work continues onwards.
Mc dumb af thats why i dropped when he choses fina race to be ww... plus he accepts the girl party invite realyy secret quest and he shares his quest with her...
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Still on the first 6 chapter and looking forward to the rest. Even though the MC is kind of dull the twist is interesting, as this is still his first day in the game is to soon to judge but definitely an invasion and using some anime ideas......very curious to see if the MC will really make good use of the Pets/ minion feature.
I don’t think much effort went into thinking of the plot of this, with next to no world building at all or even character development all that much, we have a supposedly unlucky protagonist that’s as bland as saltine crackers lose his class because the warrior instructor doesn’t like it when he wants to use a sword instead of a axe, wtf? What kind of stupid **** is that? Don’t worry it gets even more ridiculous because then out of nowhere the gms just give him a special class and race for seemingly no reason other than that he asked for one, cause you know it’s not like this is a death game where the devs literally don’t give a **** about human life at all, and that brings us to problems with the storyline, it makes no fucking sense at all, why in God’s name would a company make a death game that would have instant consequences to said company in the form of hundreds of lawsuits and the imprisonment of every person in on the games function, second is that the main character is overly calm, now dont get me wrong, calm protagonists are cool and usually are ahead of every one else in mental strength but when you have a character who is a ordinary preffesional gamer be calm even with the realization that there’s now a serious chance that he’s gonna die if he fucks up or does something stupid in game, it’s kinda fuckin dumb, not to mention the fact that every player he meets is for some reason not taking it seriously even when it’s confirmed to be true is even dumber, in my honest opinion the only saving graces of this novel are that it supposedly has a steady update of 2 chapters per day and alright grammar
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