One piece: Establishing a Pirate Family

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Dani

Charlotte is a 100% woman name.... Better luck next time in choosing a translate name. Feel kind of confusing.

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Nuh_Uhh

Please change his name bro, Charolette is definetly a girls name. Unless that’s his last name like Charolette Katakuri or Charolette Linlin. Other then that it’s good

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Robel_Isaac

you have zero excuses to justify keeping the name Charlotte. i can't read it like this. literally any name would be better. seriously.

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MAJUNEPea

I am loving this fic It has almost all the things I want from a one piece fan fic

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hairyniggaballs343

good story with proper strength development liked it.

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Ancient_

That definitely is a woman's name and not the correct translation

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Ali_Karamnejad

I feel that the story is moving fast. It would be best if it went a little slower and more work was done on relationships and emotions. But overall it's fun

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Mathaw

A fantastic One Piece fict. The mc's character is compelling, and their growth is written in a engaging and natural way, as natural as One Piece's posible. The story captures the lively, adventurous spirit characteristic of OP, making it feel authentic to the original while still adding its own unique perspective, i think that the premise of building a pirate family has already been used but is not burned tho, this story is not bad at all. The pacing is smooth, and the narrative keeps you hooked with every chapter. So far, I’m completely invested, and I can’t wait to see how the story develops further. Highly recommended.

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miz7n

Misinformation at every corner makes it unbearable and extremely hard to read but yet again I don't blame you One Piece has too many uncovered plot holes that Oda hasn't released yet. The character design of Charlotte could do some work he has almost no character and every action he does is a surprise, he could be a blood-thirsty swordsman or just a random chinese guy getting a harem.

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SirLeonNightstar

Chinese Heaven. I can’t bear it anymore.

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tiago_santos

Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.

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Joshp447

Keep up the good work. Its been a really good story so far.

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Demon_Gouhl

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Mahruf_Hassan

Please update more the translation is good the story is good too 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍