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Asta's Adventure

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Everything was going well. It was a rather ordinary day for Asta. He was helping everyone he could in the village of Hage until one day he decided to assist a strange merchant who offered him, in exchange for his help, a potion that, according to him, granted magical power. Burning with the desire to finally be able to use magic, ten-year-old Asta agreed, but instead of magic, he received something else.

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Alex_Malex_4934

Work is good! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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k1lausNamikaze

As I read the first chapters, I realized that you made the same mistake as the original author: rushing. Everything is very fast, there are no smooth transitions between one event and another, everything happens immediately, without going into depth, without an elaborate construction of the events, things happen and that's it, simple as that. You are a beginning writer, you have good ideas and a lot of room to grow, I hope this review really helps you, I would certainly like to read new Black Clover fics.

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GlN
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It's fine I guess. It's not great but it was alright until the Author changed the dialogue from "Hello" to -- Hello -- At that point just put it on wattpad.

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Zechariah_Maraima

I can't wait for more this is really good and

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Blackangelux

La historia está bien editada, los personajes y la historia se desarrolla de forma adecuada y da sentido el desarrollo de esta, no hay cambio en el desarrollo de la personalidad de los personajes, divertido y un desarrollo estable

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vitoria_carliane

I really liked Asta especially meeting Noelle and helping with her doubts. I think it's too late for Nozel to take action now. Noelle realized what a real family is. I hope Noelle says a lot of things to Nozel and the other Silvas. Nozel always spoiled Solid and Nebra and treated Noelle like trash, even knowing the truth about Acier's death. He's even worse than Solid and Nebra. Hi, I have a question, when will the next chapter be?

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    Beginning 3 months ago
  2. 2
    A Strange Potion 3 months ago
  3. 3
    Strange Feeling (1) 3 months ago
  4. 4
    Strange Feeling (2) 3 months ago
  5. 5
    New Friend (1) 3 months ago
  6. 6
    New Friend (2) 3 months ago
  7. 7
    What's your name 3 months ago
  8. 8
    Sparring (1) 3 months ago
  9. 9
    Sparing (2) 3 months ago
  10. 10
    Stranger 3 months ago
  11. 11
    David 3 months ago
  12. 12
    Three-meter boar 3 months ago
  13. 13
    A Dungeon 3 months ago
  14. 14
    Trials(1) 3 months ago
  15. 15
    Trials(2) 3 months ago
  16. 16
    Trials(3) 3 months ago
  17. 17
    The treasure vault, and then back home. 3 months ago
  18. 18
    The beginning of an adventure for a year 3 months ago
  19. 19
    Bandit in a Tie 3 months ago
  20. 20
    Incident at the Tavern 3 months ago
  21. 21
    The Great Magic Zone(1) 3 months ago
  22. 22
    The Great Magic Zone(2) 3 months ago
  23. 23
    The Great Mana Zone(3) 2 months ago
  24. 24
    Mad Lioness 2 months ago
  25. 25
    The Kikka 2 months ago
  26. 26
    The Black Market 2 months ago
  27. 27
    Magic Knights Colosseum(1) 2 months ago
  28. 28
    Magic Knights Colosseum(2) 2 months ago
  29. 29
    Magic knights Colosseum(3) 2 months ago
  30. 30
    Magic knights Colosseum(4) 2 months ago
  31. 31
    Magic knights Colosseum(5) 2 months ago
  32. 32
    Magic knights Colosseum(6) 2 months ago
  33. 33
    Royal Capital 2 months ago
  34. 34
    A Girl With Silver Hair(1) 2 months ago
  35. 35
    A Girl With Silver Hair(2) 2 months ago
  36. 36
    A Girl With Silver Hair(3) 2 months ago
  37. 37
    Problem 2 months ago
  38. 38
    Solution 2 months ago
  39. 39
    Journey to the South 2 months ago
  40. 40
    A conversation between brothers 2 months ago
  41. 41
    Swimsuits 2 months ago
  42. 42
    Beach 2 months ago
  43. 43
    Development in magic 2 months ago
  44. 44
    Hurry Up 2 months ago
  45. 45
    Asta's Return and The Grimoire Tower 2 months ago
  46. 46
    News 2 months ago
  47. 47
    Brother from another mother 2 months ago
  48. 48
    Grimoire Theft 2 months ago
  49. 49
    Reuniting 2 months ago
  50. 50
    Timeskip For Six Months 2 months ago
  51. 51
    Magic Knights Entrance Exam(1) 2 months ago
  52. 52
    Magic Knights Entrance Exam(2) 2 months ago
  53. 53
    Magic Knights Entrance Exam(3) 2 months ago
  54. 54
    Magic Knights Entrance Exam(4) 2 months ago
  55. 55
    Magic Knights Entrance Exam(5) 2 months ago
  56. 56
    Not dropped 6 days ago
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