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The King Of Arsenal

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Witness the extraordinary journey of Francesco Lee, who loved football, but fate had different plans. When he was still in the youth academy in his playing days, a sudden knee injury ended his dreams. He often wondered if he could've done things differently. Little did he know, life had more in store for him, as he was reborn into a new life with a gift from ROB that would make him the next football superstar like Lionel Messi & Christiano Ronaldo

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Hwangze
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I can only say one thing,the main character is a npc.He gives out such chatgpt responses like he wins man of the match and in his interview he just says things that scream to me this guy does not have emotions.He says the same phrases over and over again like im grateful to the fans,manager.Once you hear one time you're like alright no problem but this guy only has that response.Updates are very stable though so thats a plus.

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John_Paul_Sumawang_1989

keep up the good work bro can you add more chaps it's promising

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Bouncy_Beast

I gave your writing quality and character design 2 and 3 stars (5 stars to other 3 categories). I've read your wrestler fic and this one and in both the stories I've seen same problem. in every single chapter you upload the MC feels rush of emotion once, feels grateful for everything twice, take a step in long journey thrice, think about the dedication of past, feels grateful for partners/ teammates, feeling surreal ffs he is a reincarnated soul. after reading two three chapters it becomes very repetitive. it would be okay for someone who reads and forget in next ten minutes but for anyone else it makes the story stale. I like where the story is going and I also like how you develop the story just don't repeat the same thing over and over again in different words in every single chapter.

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Billy_Agustian17

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TeaTop
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It had a lovely bit of potential at the start, I guess I just really liked the concept as an Arsenal fan. Its flaws are too many to ignore though. The main character is as stiff as a wooden board, there is zero variation in his personality, he comes across as quite robotic in his responses. Then there's the pacing, every single match so far is written about over about 3 chapters and they all have the exact same energy. Which means literally every match feels the same, the opponents might as well be the same people because there is no real life to them, neither is there any life to the press or even any aspect of the footballing community at large. Everything in this rather LukeWarm.

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uncreativeguy

It's honestly a pretty enjoyable read. The man character is pretty talented, going through Arsenal's junior teams and has made his debut for the senior team. It is a breath of fresh air, seeing a non-translated football book of an English player who starts in the Premier League with big players. Let's hope the Author keeps the chapters coming.

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HellDaoist12

Great work! Keep it up! Have great premises while it was somewhat slow paced but I like how it builds up! It's like we follow the character's journey from the MC was a child and slowly growing, of course, there were some time skips that helped in advancing the story much faster!

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LastGod

The big problem with sport fanfic. Is they normally focus on writing about every match. So u get maybe one chapter every 5 chapters about the MC life. Litterally the novel becomes a running tally of every game he plays. While his life get put on hold and all he does is play a sport. It would be soo much better if u only describe the most important games and tell us about his life around them. otherwise it gets super boring and we get used to the games and never have any suspense built for any wins or loses.

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uchiha_satoru

I like the premise but give the mc a personality and the pacing of the story is very slow

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    1. New Beginning 3 months ago
  2. 2
    2. The Trial PT.1 3 months ago
  3. 3
    3. The Trials PT.2 3 months ago
  4. 4
    4. The Trials PT.3 3 months ago
  5. 5
    5. The Trial Result 3 months ago
  6. 6
    6. Eyes on the Future 3 months ago
  7. 7
    7. First Day of Training 3 months ago
  8. 8
    8. Debut againts Chelsea U9 Team PT.1 3 months ago
  9. 9
    9. Debut againts Chelsea U9 Team PT.2 3 months ago
  10. 10
    10. Birthday Party and Plan for the Future 3 months ago
  11. 11
    11. Time Skip 3 months ago
  12. 12
    12. Preparation Againts Manchester United U18 3 months ago
  13. 13
    13. Againts Manchester United U18 3 months ago
  14. 14
    14. Attention From Arsene Wenger 3 months ago
  15. 15
    15. First Team Training 3 months ago
  16. 16
    16. Back With the Boys 3 months ago
  17. 17
    17. Preparation Against Liverpool U18 3 months ago
  18. 18
    18. The Day Off 3 months ago
  19. 19
    19. Againts Liverpool U18 PT.1 3 months ago
  20. 20
    20. Againts Liverpool U18 PT.2 3 months ago
  21. 21
    21. Amazing Gift 2 months ago
  22. 22
    22. An Official Footballer 2 months ago
  23. 23
    23. Debut Chance 2 months ago
  24. 24
    24. Preparing for Debut 2 months ago
  25. 25
    25. Debut Day PT.1 2 months ago
  26. 26
    26. Debut Day PT.2 2 months ago
  27. 27
    27. Debut Day PT.3 2 months ago
  28. 28
    28. Post Match 2 months ago
  29. 29
    Sorry No Update Today 2 months ago
  30. 30
    29. The Spotlight 2 months ago
  31. 31
    30. The Agent: Jorge Mendes 2 months ago
  32. 32
    31. Dreams In Motion 2 months ago
  33. 33
    32. Againts Stoke City PT.1 2 months ago
  34. 34
    33. Againts Stoke City PT.2 2 months ago
  35. 35
    34. Againts Stoke City PT.3 2 months ago
  36. 36
    35. Winning MOTM 2 months ago
  37. 37
    36. First Team Contract PT.1 2 months ago
  38. 38
    37. First Team Contract PT.2 2 months ago
  39. 39
    38. The Announcement 2 months ago
  40. 40
    39. Preparation againts Newcastle 2 months ago
  41. 41
    40. Againts Newcastle United PT.1 2 months ago
  42. 42
    Sorry No Update Today 2 months ago
  43. 43
    41. Againts Newcastle United PT.2 2 months ago
  44. 44
    42. Againts Newcastle United PT.3 2 months ago
  45. 45
    43. Sky Sport Post Match Analysis 2 months ago
  46. 46
    44. Another Day Off 2 months ago
  47. 47
    45. Spending a Family Time 2 months ago
  48. 48
    46. Back To Training 2 months ago
  49. 49
    47. The Day Before Facing Liverpool 2 months ago
  50. 50
    48. Againts Liverpool PT.1 2 months ago
  51. 51
    49. Againts Liverpool PT.2 2 months ago
  52. 52
    50. Againts Liverpool PT.3 2 months ago
  53. 53
    Sorry No Update Today 1 months ago
  54. 54
    51. After the Match Againts Liverpool 1 months ago
  55. 55
    52. Champions League Draw 1 months ago
  56. 56
    53. Preparation Againts QPR 1 months ago
  57. 57
    54. Christmas Day 1 months ago
  58. 58
    55. Againts QPR PT.1 1 months ago
  59. 59
    56. Againts QPR PT.2 1 months ago
  60. 60
    57. Againts QPR PT.3 1 months ago
  61. 61
    58. After the Match 1 months ago
  62. 62
    59. Got Sick 1 months ago
  63. 63
    60. Watching Arsenal Againts West Ham 1 months ago
  64. 64
    61. Back to Training 1 months ago
  65. 65
    62. New Year 1 months ago
  66. 66
    63. Againts Southampton Again PT.1 1 months ago
  67. 67
    64. Againts Southampton Again PT.2 1 months ago
  68. 68
    65. Againts Southampton Again PT.3 1 months ago
  69. 69
    66. Winning The MOTM Again 1 months ago
  70. 70
    67. Hungry for More 1 months ago
  71. 71
    68. Third Round of the FA Cup PT.1 1 months ago
  72. 72
    69. Third Round of the FA Cup PT.2 1 months ago
  73. 73
    70. Day Off 1 months ago
  74. 74
    71. Meeting Leah Williamson 1 months ago
  75. 75
    72. Againts Stoke City PT.1 1 months ago
  76. 76
    73. Againts Stoke City PT.2 1 months ago
  77. 77
    74. Againts Stoke City PT.3 1 months ago
  78. 78
    75. After the Match 1 months ago
  79. 79
    76. Preparing to get a Provisional Driving License 1 months ago
  80. 80
    77. Francesco Regular Day 1 months ago
  81. 81
    78. Before Facing Manchester City 1 months ago
  82. 82
    79. Againts Manchester City PT.1 1 months ago
  83. 83
    80. Againts Manchester City PT.2 1 months ago
  84. 84
    81. After Facing Manchester City 1 months ago
  85. 85
    82. Relaxing Day 29 days ago
  86. 86
    83. Before Facing Brighton for Fourth Round of the FA Cup 28 days ago
  87. 87
    84. Fourth Round of the FA Cup PT.1 27 days ago
  88. 88
    Sorry No Chapter Today 26 days ago
  89. 89
    85. Fourth Round of the FA Cup PT.2 25 days ago
  90. 90
    86. Fourth Round Of the FA Cup PT.3 25 days ago
  91. 91
    87. After Facing Brighton 24 days ago
  92. 92
    Sorry No Update Today 23 days ago
  93. 93
    88. Getting the Provosional Driving License 22 days ago
  94. 94
    89. Choosing for The First Car 22 days ago
  95. 95
    90. Buying the First Car 21 days ago
  96. 96
    91. Againts Aston Villa PT.1 20 days ago
  97. 97
    92. Againts Aston Villa PT.2 19 days ago
  98. 98
    93. Againts Aston Villa PT.3 18 days ago
  99. 99
    94. After Facing Aston Villa 17 days ago
  100. 100
    95. Another Step Towards Independence 16 days ago
  101. 101
    96. Date with Leah 15 days ago
  102. 102
    Sorry No Update Today 14 days ago
  103. 103
    97. The North London Derby PT.1 13 days ago
  104. 104
    98. The North London Derby PT.2 13 days ago
  105. 105
    99. The North London Derby PT.3 12 days ago
  106. 106
    100. Post Match Conference 11 days ago
  107. 107
    101. Moving Out 10 days ago
  108. 108
    102. Sponsorship Contract 9 days ago
  109. 109
    Sorry No Update Today 8 days ago
  110. 110
    103. Against Leicester City PT.1 7 days ago
  111. 111
    104. Against Leicester City PT.2 7 days ago
  112. 112
    105. Againts Leicester City PT.3 6 days ago
  113. 113
    106. Targeting The League, Champions League, and FA Cup 5 days ago
  114. 114
    Sorry No Update Once Again 4 days ago
  115. 115
    107. The Fifth Round of the FA Cup PT.1 3 days ago
  116. 116
    108. The Fifth Round of The FA Cup PT.2 3 days ago
  117. 117
    109. The Fifth Round of The FA Cup PT.3 2 days ago
  118. 118
    110. The Aftermath after the FA Cup 1 days ago
  119. 119
    111. Againts Crystal Palace PT.1 7 hours ago
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