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NarutoAuthor

The Author here, i just made this review so you could leave any questions you wanted me to answer in the comments. This is my first fanfiction so please bear with my if i make any mistakes. <3

3mth
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Divya_zala

I have just started but the fact that this series is a no romance i an automatically gives it the 5star in my book because i love no romance novels but there are only a few of them and they all are boring

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Fang_Uzumaki

I really like the way the story is progressing . Mc's way of handling various issues and his repeated death makes it more appealing. Mc's view on Minato being a killer is something that I have been thinking for a long time. The entire Shinobi Village Sytem is actually a big War machine that killed hundred or thousands of civilian Ninja. Let's not talk about ninja clans that were destroyed systematically, just because some higher ups in this rotten system wanted that clan's bloodline power or secret technique or simply was a racist . I sometimes wondered, did Hashirama ever think the consequences of his idealistic dreams that he simply imposed on this war torn world.

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Well_In_a_Frog

Really good sh*t. Really refreshing. And the way in which the author was able to showcase the difference between the power of Minato to others it is amazing!

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Moha_bz

Finnaly a good fanfiction with the return by death. He is not op,verry weak if you compar the other mc of fanfic naruto. To resume he is a sociopath with the return by death and have a system who give him some quest

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Salazarson

Good story but I'm dropped. (ch.60) I appreciate the intelligence and cunning of the main character, but the question of why remains and I also saw that his most powerful trick, Time Loop, was not developed, he could have gone back to the first day by increasing it by 'one' level and got rid of all the doubts about him and got rid of many things with his image of 'a young genius whose awareness and ambition increased due to the war'. Why do I want him to get rid of the doubt, because the story in its current state is not encouraging at all, on the contrary it is depressing. Is it fun that Minato, who is cheerful, strong and responsible, only suspects you and all your interactions are mutual 3d chess? I would rather read a character as broken, strong but pure as Naruto. MC has to be smart and cunning or he will die, he's starting to sound like a Sasuke and I'm wrong to think that way, so I'm dropping it

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Moha_bz

BRO I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I WANT SO MUCH A STORY WITH A RETURN BY DEATH (like eternally Regressing knight or re zéro) I want to write one but i dont have the time so thank you to be here

7d
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Monster_Progenitor

Dear author, please increase the frequency of updates. I like the style of mc. I want to see what he will do next very badly. At least make sure to upload a single chapter daily. Also check this review. The only reason that you get a low review from me is stability of updates. Also communicate with readers more and ask questions about something you find difficult, we will answer and give our full support.

10d
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NHyper

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Abn0rmal_Silence

I got to say it is really good, while still maintaining integrity of the characters and story plot line. However there are still minor disagreements. Overall it is worth read. But I finished all the chapters upto 84 (which is current one) within apprx. 5 hrs. I want more dude.

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Monster_Progenitor

Author, this story is lit. I mean literally. I enjoyed it so much that i can't wait for reading it anymore. If i was financially stable then would have donated 2 months salary just to read more. I like the character design of mc not giving a damn about anyone and not becoming a liking dog like a harem protagonist. He faces new challenges and improves and the thing i like the most about mc is his love for explosive tags. Please make him a sealing jutsu expert. Seals are the most difficult, underrated and most overpowered power available in Naruto world but no one utilizes that power and run after bloodlines and pink eye disease. Make our mc a super genius in sealing art and show the world just how beautiful an explosion can be. Thank you author. Please make sure to upload regularly. Your work is the necessary tonic for crazy people like me.

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Fluf_Bacon

Writing quality is pretty good. Small errors here and there, but it doesn't distract from the reading. Overall this novel has a few uniques that I haven't read in a Naruto ff before. Haven't read a time looping naruto FF so I thought that was pretty interesting. And I like his fighting style on top of him integrating his time looping aspects in it to survive.

13d
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Mister_Robot

one of the most enjoyable Naruto fanfics. The existence of a system might throw you off in the beginning but the storytelling is so good that you eventually end up asking for more chapters. The MC is sorta unhinged but not the over the top kind of mindless antihero. It's a solid 5/5.

15d
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ZephyrZepar

Definitely hits the death loop itch, not bad at all

15d
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Willdgrad

Avaliacao ch 82 Acredito que a única coisa que falta nessa obra é mais capitulos Um protagonista realmente esperto, a obra é envolvente e muito interessante de ler 9.7/10

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Sphnqs
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I personally think the mc ruined the entire story. his personality is shitty and there is nothing about him that is redeemable. even tho he is a leaf shinobi he killed another for no reason and he is a coward who if he knew he could run away would. only reason he doesn't if bc he knows it either will lead to a more danger or he'd be executed. the story itself is ok just ruined by the mc

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HadesAizenveil

It's a very well written story and I keep wanting to read more. Don't let us wait too long for more chapters please 🙏🌹🌹

17d
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Everton_Vale_0216

analysis up to chapter 82. the author manages to put a good immersion in the difficulty of surviving in the ninja world. However, I see some flaws. mainly in the rapid progression in the character's strength through the system. overcoming the challenges only with a looping system would be interesting for a future work. in addition, the MC becomes very cold and clings to Canon. working better on how deaths affect the MC's psychology is something to think about

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josuemandrak

this is peak and a hidden gem

20d
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Fuck_the_harems

I hope the author starts to change things, 80 chapters have passed and absolutely nothing has changed, as if the author was afraid to START a fanfic, and not just a first-person account of the 3rd ninja war.

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xAr4m1s

I simply don't like villains who let innocent people die in front of them, they are robots that only follow the plot because the author has no fucking idea how to write a story without leaving the canon.

25d
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HaremHater

This is a good story. The MC is a sociopath but not that unlikable. The story development is great and funny too at certain times. The only real problem i have is just punctuation and sometimes grammatical errors. It just ruins the flow of the story when i notice errors like this. Overall definitely worth the read although the first 2-3 chapters arent all that please continue reading.

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covestar

Pretty freaking awesome. The beginning was a bit supbar, after reading about 10 chapters did I finally get a flow of the novel. From then on, it was just perfect, the plot is quite progressive which is quite impressive for a time loop novel. I would’ve hated it if it was slow but the progression rate of mc and plot is just perfect. Writing quality isn’t perfect but not quite bothersome. Great job on this novel fanfic author!👍👏

1mth
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Bertinho_Gamer

astonishingly good. keep it up author

1mth
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Ali_Ougad

keep updating one of the best naruto fanfic I ever reada

1mth
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LazyReaderAlways

Peak. Perfect execution of a great plot idea. Love it.

1mth
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SongOfSilenceee

Very good, I hope he finds something to hold on to amidst the madness, the initial insensitivity makes sense. Keep it up

1mth
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Leon_Luis_

A+ Simply Masterful Chefs Kiss . Fast Paced, Story oriented -MC is Neutral Evil, He just does anything he can to survive and Flourish in his situation. -MC's cheat as the name suggests is Return from death but back in time (if you aren't familiar with the concept, its basically like this MC dies gets sent back in past at the beginning of the day to repeat/or change the day however he wishes, Infinitely) along with a System and a bloodline(which is a mystery and will remain a mystery untill the final leg of the story) ps. (this is me after reading 62 chapters in 3 days)(for reference i only read 1 chapter a day of my fav stories so 3 chapters a day and i read through this just cause i was hooked)🙂 pss. Spoiler cause of the info

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1mth
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NarutoAuthor

The Author here, i just made this review so you could leave any questions you wanted me to answer in the comments. This is my first fanfiction so please bear with my if i make any mistakes. <3

3mth
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Divya_zala

I have just started but the fact that this series is a no romance i an automatically gives it the 5star in my book because i love no romance novels but there are only a few of them and they all are boring

4d
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Fang_Uzumaki

I really like the way the story is progressing . Mc's way of handling various issues and his repeated death makes it more appealing. Mc's view on Minato being a killer is something that I have been thinking for a long time. The entire Shinobi Village Sytem is actually a big War machine that killed hundred or thousands of civilian Ninja. Let's not talk about ninja clans that were destroyed systematically, just because some higher ups in this rotten system wanted that clan's bloodline power or secret technique or simply was a racist . I sometimes wondered, did Hashirama ever think the consequences of his idealistic dreams that he simply imposed on this war torn world.

Spoiler enthüllen
4d
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Well_In_a_Frog

Really good sh*t. Really refreshing. And the way in which the author was able to showcase the difference between the power of Minato to others it is amazing!

4d
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Moha_bz

Finnaly a good fanfiction with the return by death. He is not op,verry weak if you compar the other mc of fanfic naruto. To resume he is a sociopath with the return by death and have a system who give him some quest

6d
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Salazarson

Good story but I'm dropped. (ch.60) I appreciate the intelligence and cunning of the main character, but the question of why remains and I also saw that his most powerful trick, Time Loop, was not developed, he could have gone back to the first day by increasing it by 'one' level and got rid of all the doubts about him and got rid of many things with his image of 'a young genius whose awareness and ambition increased due to the war'. Why do I want him to get rid of the doubt, because the story in its current state is not encouraging at all, on the contrary it is depressing. Is it fun that Minato, who is cheerful, strong and responsible, only suspects you and all your interactions are mutual 3d chess? I would rather read a character as broken, strong but pure as Naruto. MC has to be smart and cunning or he will die, he's starting to sound like a Sasuke and I'm wrong to think that way, so I'm dropping it

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6d
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Moha_bz

BRO I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I WANT SO MUCH A STORY WITH A RETURN BY DEATH (like eternally Regressing knight or re zéro) I want to write one but i dont have the time so thank you to be here

7d
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Monster_Progenitor

Dear author, please increase the frequency of updates. I like the style of mc. I want to see what he will do next very badly. At least make sure to upload a single chapter daily. Also check this review. The only reason that you get a low review from me is stability of updates. Also communicate with readers more and ask questions about something you find difficult, we will answer and give our full support.

10d
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NHyper

NiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNiceNice

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Abn0rmal_Silence

I got to say it is really good, while still maintaining integrity of the characters and story plot line. However there are still minor disagreements. Overall it is worth read. But I finished all the chapters upto 84 (which is current one) within apprx. 5 hrs. I want more dude.

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12d
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Monster_Progenitor

Author, this story is lit. I mean literally. I enjoyed it so much that i can't wait for reading it anymore. If i was financially stable then would have donated 2 months salary just to read more. I like the character design of mc not giving a damn about anyone and not becoming a liking dog like a harem protagonist. He faces new challenges and improves and the thing i like the most about mc is his love for explosive tags. Please make him a sealing jutsu expert. Seals are the most difficult, underrated and most overpowered power available in Naruto world but no one utilizes that power and run after bloodlines and pink eye disease. Make our mc a super genius in sealing art and show the world just how beautiful an explosion can be. Thank you author. Please make sure to upload regularly. Your work is the necessary tonic for crazy people like me.

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12d
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Fluf_Bacon

Writing quality is pretty good. Small errors here and there, but it doesn't distract from the reading. Overall this novel has a few uniques that I haven't read in a Naruto ff before. Haven't read a time looping naruto FF so I thought that was pretty interesting. And I like his fighting style on top of him integrating his time looping aspects in it to survive.

13d
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Mister_Robot

one of the most enjoyable Naruto fanfics. The existence of a system might throw you off in the beginning but the storytelling is so good that you eventually end up asking for more chapters. The MC is sorta unhinged but not the over the top kind of mindless antihero. It's a solid 5/5.

15d
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ZephyrZepar

Definitely hits the death loop itch, not bad at all

15d
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Willdgrad

Avaliacao ch 82 Acredito que a única coisa que falta nessa obra é mais capitulos Um protagonista realmente esperto, a obra é envolvente e muito interessante de ler 9.7/10

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16d
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Sphnqs
LV 14 Badge

I personally think the mc ruined the entire story. his personality is shitty and there is nothing about him that is redeemable. even tho he is a leaf shinobi he killed another for no reason and he is a coward who if he knew he could run away would. only reason he doesn't if bc he knows it either will lead to a more danger or he'd be executed. the story itself is ok just ruined by the mc

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17d
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HadesAizenveil

It's a very well written story and I keep wanting to read more. Don't let us wait too long for more chapters please 🙏🌹🌹

17d
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Everton_Vale_0216

analysis up to chapter 82. the author manages to put a good immersion in the difficulty of surviving in the ninja world. However, I see some flaws. mainly in the rapid progression in the character's strength through the system. overcoming the challenges only with a looping system would be interesting for a future work. in addition, the MC becomes very cold and clings to Canon. working better on how deaths affect the MC's psychology is something to think about

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18d
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josuemandrak

this is peak and a hidden gem

20d
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Fuck_the_harems

I hope the author starts to change things, 80 chapters have passed and absolutely nothing has changed, as if the author was afraid to START a fanfic, and not just a first-person account of the 3rd ninja war.

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23d
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xAr4m1s

I simply don't like villains who let innocent people die in front of them, they are robots that only follow the plot because the author has no fucking idea how to write a story without leaving the canon.

25d
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HaremHater

This is a good story. The MC is a sociopath but not that unlikable. The story development is great and funny too at certain times. The only real problem i have is just punctuation and sometimes grammatical errors. It just ruins the flow of the story when i notice errors like this. Overall definitely worth the read although the first 2-3 chapters arent all that please continue reading.

29d
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covestar

Pretty freaking awesome. The beginning was a bit supbar, after reading about 10 chapters did I finally get a flow of the novel. From then on, it was just perfect, the plot is quite progressive which is quite impressive for a time loop novel. I would’ve hated it if it was slow but the progression rate of mc and plot is just perfect. Writing quality isn’t perfect but not quite bothersome. Great job on this novel fanfic author!👍👏

1mth
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Bertinho_Gamer

astonishingly good. keep it up author

1mth
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Ali_Ougad

keep updating one of the best naruto fanfic I ever reada

1mth
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LazyReaderAlways

Peak. Perfect execution of a great plot idea. Love it.

1mth
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SongOfSilenceee

Very good, I hope he finds something to hold on to amidst the madness, the initial insensitivity makes sense. Keep it up

1mth
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Leon_Luis_

A+ Simply Masterful Chefs Kiss . Fast Paced, Story oriented -MC is Neutral Evil, He just does anything he can to survive and Flourish in his situation. -MC's cheat as the name suggests is Return from death but back in time (if you aren't familiar with the concept, its basically like this MC dies gets sent back in past at the beginning of the day to repeat/or change the day however he wishes, Infinitely) along with a System and a bloodline(which is a mystery and will remain a mystery untill the final leg of the story) ps. (this is me after reading 62 chapters in 3 days)(for reference i only read 1 chapter a day of my fav stories so 3 chapters a day and i read through this just cause i was hooked)🙂 pss. Spoiler cause of the info

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