Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template

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T_Smith_7285

This story has potential. The Wolverine and his X-men.

LV 15

MadFool

So far so good. The MC has a "transmigration benefit" that does not completely break the power balance of ASOIAF world. Mc is relatively smart and ruthless, but has clear boundaries that he doesn't cross. Start has been promising so I hope the quality doesn't drop but so far plot hasn't progressed much so it's too early to tell.

LV 11

Geralt_The_Jagger

To start off, I'll say that I'm writing this while I'm in the middle of work, because I can't get your story out of my head, so that's a sign of its quality. Before I go with a review I'll say it's a silly thing out of frustration that there are less than 100 chapters instead of 500 as I would like. AUTHOR! GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!. After this silly thing I'll go with the actual review: The first chapters are too influenced by AI, but the author read the comments and fixed it and that improved the story to the point that I don't remember if it was just the first chapter or it was 5, but no matter the quality of the story improved enormously. Let's talk about the MC, when I saw the story I thought it would be the typical cliché, a protagonist dies and reincarnates in the body of a native, but the author did something really surprising for any fanfic. He did something original. The soul of the earth dweller that should inhabit the MC's body (an obese, useless, and disgustingly perverted guy) is consumed, giving him memories of Wolverine's plot and template. Just the fact that he didn't make another Mushoku tensei made the story 100% better, a lot of people treasure that story, but Rudeus' character is so unpleasant in many ways that it makes me unable to enjoy it. Leaving that aside, the MC gains Wolverine's abilities, and let me tell you, in a setting like Game of Thrones, not only does it make it OP, but it's tremendously convenient (in a good way), it's incredible how the author develops the protagonist's criminal empire, very Godfather-esque and damn, you look REALLY good, it's intriguing, interesting, and very entertaining. The romance is just beginning, but it's clear that the character will aspire to at least two wives and I hope it ends there, because I like Daenerys, the harem is so cliché in these stories that it's already boring, so if the author is hesitating about doing it, the answer is probably no. To sum up, a story that's just beginning but has incredible potential, very well written, with an original plot (for an asoiaf fanfic) and deep and interesting characters.

LV 3

STEVIOL_GLY

idk if author deletes the negative reviews, but i only see outstanding reviews on a mediocre AI infested story.... the commentson eqch chapter are over the top, saying this is the best intro and yada yada, when nothing original has been introduced besides the eight year old alicent having a phd in shakespearean english so to speak

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Transhumanist

The story feels bloated filled with redundant and overly descriptive words, reading this makes my head go dizzy. I bet nearly 3/4ths of the story is filler words added by an AI.

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Iseeyou

Not bad but AI never the less so all it deserves is a two or three star at most

LV 14

Aldrighi

Was surprised by how good the story is. If you are in doubt i suggest you read it because it is very much worth it.

LV 3

1day

I’m dropping this story because the author first develops romantic stories (Cersei, Elia), and then I’m sorry, I love my childhood friend. The question is why did you do this then, you spent many chapters developing romantic relationships, so that you could then say I love only one? And this is not a pretension that I want a harem, no, but why develop a relationship in order to abandon them like that. As for me, it’s terrible, I didn’t give 1 on everything only because the story really interested me, the beginning and the future process are super. But I'm sorry, I'm dropping this. Whoever reads to the last chapter at the moment, and this is 54, will probably understand that if not, it means we have different views. Very disappointed, I gave stones every day to get this ((((

LV 4

JjhonRhayy_101

This a lot more easy to read than the other asoiaf fanfic here, and the story development is looking good for the start. Keep it up author-san his abilities is also interesting probably give him a talent for swordsmanship too. Overall this is highly recommend !!!

LV 3

Jeremy_Babb

great start, a cross between GOT world and The Godfather movies. Always wanted a GOT story the MC gets Wolverine's power set. kkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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LazyBartender

Honestly pretty good, can’t wait for more chapters, keep up the good work chief👍

LV 4

ArthasMenethil

This Story has potential Wolverine from the comics has 200+ years of Knowledge(He is the top martial artist in Marvel, in CQC only Shang Chi can fight him but not win against James), he even trained Black Widow, looking foward to the introduction of Technology, his business ventures and how he conquers the seven kingdoms of Westeros.

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Hares500

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Lester_Diaz_9435

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ORIGINofALL

well the story has potential and i already read first few chapters and i would say I definitely love this fanfic story telling is good

LV 13

Mindlessreader25

Just read the First chapter ....I have to say ....I absolutely love it .....sure some people think Wolverine is not OP enough ..but I think different ..in the 'GOT' world the MC will be the strongest being alive with his powers ...even if dragon comes in picture in later future ..he can hold his own ..

LV 4

magapi

the Way he got his power is interesting not something new but little do that in this trash bin, grammar is understandable, the chapters are long( hopefully won't change) the mc and his people are interesting too. he's going to the dark side the way the story develops but hopefully not too much and lastly thanks for this read make it long plzz.

LV 14

kingthatdied

So far pretty well written. Lots of people are complaining about the Wolverine Template not matching how Wolverine actually is, which is understandable I guess. But this is a fanfiction about ASOIAF not X men/Marvel so I feel personally a lot of leeway can be given to the author in the way they want to write things. I don’t mind AI being used as the words don’t feel robotic and by the author admission they use it for grammar since English is not their first language. In conclusion worth the read and I’m looking forward for more! Let the Author Cook!!

LV 3

Youssef_Saleh

Awesome novel so far and I am excited to see where it will go and hopefully it will keep getting updated. I especially like the translation quality and the fact that even though MC is powerful he is not really so overpowered that he flips the balance of the novel