I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

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Dark0mind

The writer is really a fraud. I read this novel because it has a villain sign, but when I read the novel about when the hero of the novel is poor and everyone urinates on him or something like that, I think he will become evil later. All I find is an effeminate man who doesn't even have balls to defend himself, so what about him being evil?

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radioactive_jig0l0

waste of time, burn yourself author, and if you can't , give me your address and i will personally come and burn you alive in the most miserable way possible[img=recommend]

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just_some_shadows

too many clichés and the relationship with the people who hurt him is weird and stupid, like his mother loves him but ignores him, neglects him and even completely forgets about him.

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Luc4r1o

At the beginning i had high hopes for this stor. But even now almost 190 chapters in, the MC Lucian is still completely and utterly useless ! He supposedly has some great skills that should make himpretty much super human but the development is just disappointing . He can't stand up for himself, he just wants to run away from his problems but decides against it, he still lives at home with his family who also tortured him in his first life, he doesn't let the only 2 real friends he had help him and pushe them away and even the yandere who supposedly loves him more than anything and said that she would protect him from those who hurt him, just stands on the sidelines and bully's him even more!!! Why am i srill reading this novel you might ask, to be honest i don't know anymore... I was hoping that he might actually change, or that the yandere would do something or that anybody would get punished but no... nothing and just now chapter 184-186... WARNING: SPOILER!!!! the women who played the most with him in his first life and drove him to suicide just proclaimed in front of the entire high society, the crown prince who wants to marry this women and another powerful man who has the biggest plot armor and supposedly is the real main character of this world this novel plays in, that she is pregnant with our MC's child... his sister went straight for him and questioned him if it's true his mother who wants to be understanding just accepts it his supposedly yandere does nothing whatsoever, even though she is the crown princess and could have taken care of the situation with one sentence tje Girl responsible for this sh*t show is disappointed that he doesn't see her proclamation of love and instead of apologizing or atleast doing the right thing which would be to tell the truth so that not everyone believes him to be the scumbag, she is now thinking about killing herself because he said he hates her... and now her parents want to talk to him about something that we don't know yet... But the worst thing in all of this, he, Lucian, our MC feels bad that he told Avey, the women responsible for this, that he hates her........ CAN YOU F*CKING BELIEVE THIS HORSESH*t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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TheDeathmail

Honestly the MC was mostly at fault himself.... he was way too obsessed.... even his death was stupid..... like sure his loved ones weren't nice to him or anything..... but he had tons of other people that loved him and honestly should have just moved on.....

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DiligentHater

Decent writing wasted on an extremely adolescent story, dramatized at an astronomically absurd level (not compatible with the low depth of the plot) and a narcissistic, frightening and sociopathic protagonist. I don't blame anyone who enjoyed this, as long as they're at least 16 or younger.

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chicken_bagel

this is the most edgiest and corniest shi ive read. i wonder if the reader base is really young since there's a lot of good reviews. like, the writing is just trying so hard to be a sob story but it's not even well executed. well meh, that's about it from me ig

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AculturedCitizen

DO NOT PAY FOR THIS NOVEL PLEASE READ THE REVIEW. Biggest fraud l've ever seen on this website and that's saying something. Had a good start on the novel but idk what happend but the author started to milk "I'm a sad mc I'm sad I'm soo sad" trope like a lot . I mean we get it, he had a bad past but stop lingering and describing that sad past for more than 100 FUCKING CHAPTERS?! The plot development is dogshit - I'm on 120 ch and it's only been 3 days in the story time. The character interactions are so fake and cringe, that I doubt wether the author had any real interactions. Best case example: the author wrote a single scene of mc and his sister having conversations for 4 chapters of nothing happening. And this author has the audacity to ask for power stones , character ranking votes etc …

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Maddy_0112

story is outrageously trash... MC is a crybaby, naive, Dumb and trash. The whole story is a sob story.

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DaoistDsWNXN

15 chapters and all the history happened could have been written in one. Extremely annoying main character, the writing style is way too verbose for the lack of depth with very poorly written characters specially the MC friends, they are not believable and not even interesting.

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The_Ruler_001

A five star review because it has good story line different from others books and good characters development and of course how well the author has given his emotions to each characters

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RustyBoi

I gave this 3 stars instead of 1 cuz some authors delete too low reviews I’ve seen this formula many times before, i checked some reviews and read 2.5 chapters before i became sure of it. Man reincarnates, new world is a story world, man has good family, good friends and possible lover, everything goes bad and they all betray him, usually because the cliché, extremely hateable “original story’s main character” came into their lives or they just bad people but og mc still has to be extremely hateable and cliché, man becomes really miserable, betrayed by everyone around him and dies or whatever, this is where variations occur: either they get betrayed too and regret it or he goes back in time, usually he has to write a diary about future events or they hear his thoughts about their future or whatever, but they have to know the future somehow (how else would author have a bunch of guilt-ridden women drooling over his mc who’d give their lives for him out of guilt?) apparently here it made them regress too. Now obviously all of those women are hated by the readers so author has to make a new addition! Maybe it’s a villainess from the novel world? Maybe it’s a patron goddess? Maybe it’s the system? These stories are all made by a newbie author who tries to add ”depth” to their writing by making their character miserable to evoke sympathy from readers who empathize with characters they read, hooking them into wanting to see how it goes. It’s an effective hook, but in my personal opinion, any author who purely relies on this to hook readers are incompetent authors. Wanna know how it almost always ends? Eventually the author doesn’t know how to take it forward without losing the “character depth(lol)”, so they either: - fall into a cycle of trying to keep their mc miserable through misunderstandings or whatever -mc becomes an absolute ball of edginess that you’d cut yourself reading about him -Mc just bangs them all and the story becomes 🌽

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Pop_boom

Story is very promising I would recommend for people to try it

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Ricardo_M_Carrillo

I love the story, even if it feels like it just started I love it, I can’t wait for more, i normally never comment but i really do like this story so far.

LV 15

TrippyLVL

Synopsis honestly couldn’t have done a better job at getting me to read this story the is one big mess of emotions it’s hard not to be captivated hope author doesn’t stop this anytime soon and mc gets the good ending he deserves keep it up author!

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deorikson03

I don't have too much of a problem with the book, the plot and everything is spot on except the main character. The main character that is lucien is poorly written. How can someone involved in the making of one of the most feared gangster groups in the world not be able to control their emotions when they are sent back to being a teenager. Worst of all he claims to have God tier acting skills bestowed by a sysytem but can't hide his emotions well

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Listlessthomas

Glad I read a lot of the reviews before I continued further. No real development after 100+ chapters is insane the mc’s thinking is irrational, weird, and childish. I’m okay with edgy mc’s but crybaby’s get no sympathy (no I’m not saying he’s not aloud to cry I’m saying that’s all he dose. I want to see growth resolve and commitment not this crybaby woe is me shit) it’s just a sob story with a lot of repeated inner dialogue mc was written by a 16 year old most likely or is geared towards 16 year olds, so obviously the writing is gonna feel like a kid wrote it.