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if you read the last 100,000 naruto fanfics on here and took the most repetitive, overused tropes and cliches then smashed them together with little care for grammar, integrity, creativity, or being unique then you get this story. Probably created by a child who thinks konoha being evil is the new edgy thing to do even tho its played out. I dont think you can find one original thought through out the story. BUT if you want a story to pass the time without having to use your brain then this might be the story for you.
I like the story, although there are a lot of stories with similar setting this story can be more unique and if possible the mc can stick more to his village there than leaving for god knows how long and come back with a time skip. Hopefully he will stay in his village and the story can also touch on a kingdom building aspect. It would be nice if there is something unique made that will stand out and not follow the ideas of the naruto world. Maybe a new power system from different worlds that isn’t too op or taijutsu that is from the one piece world adapted into this world. Something unique rather than go with the flow.
if you read the last 100,000 naruto fanfics on here and took the most repetitive, overused tropes and cliches then smashed them together with little care for grammar, integrity, creativity, or being unique then you get this story. Probably created by a child who thinks konoha being evil is the new edgy thing to do even tho its played out. I dont think you can find one original thought through out the story. BUT if you want a story to pass the time without having to use your brain then this might be the story for you.
I like the story, although there are a lot of stories with similar setting this story can be more unique and if possible the mc can stick more to his village there than leaving for god knows how long and come back with a time skip. Hopefully he will stay in his village and the story can also touch on a kingdom building aspect. It would be nice if there is something unique made that will stand out and not follow the ideas of the naruto world. Maybe a new power system from different worlds that isn’t too op or taijutsu that is from the one piece world adapted into this world. Something unique rather than go with the flow.