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ok first things first it's a good work but is it amazing then no far from it it laterally took me 50 something chapters to see any kind of development from anyone other than the main character we didn't get any glimpse of any enemy except bioblast the more i read i try not to cringe and like most of the mha fanfics out there of course you included momo and hado in this somehow probably going to make them both his main love interest and probably midnight too somewhere along the line like the power systems you put are one of the most versatile but you didn't take advantage of that you could have copied some reference from hxh like gon rock paper scissors or kilua electricity
I like the slow pace in this novel, the world background and development is quite good. The mc slowly makes more abilitys and shows more abilitys through out the story which always keeps me exicted. All the bad reviews on this novel are from people do appreaciate a good webnovel and skip chapter cause they want the mc to be in ua within the first 4 chapters. Overall a lovely novel
This novel is actually pretty good past chapter 40. If there is one word I’d use to describe this fanfic….
Una buena lectura con una gramática y traducción fluida, la historia es entretenida y lo es más el MC con su Nen y Haki aprovechando su intelecto y resaltar su versatilidad y creatividad al desarrollar sus habilidades
Shotacon? Nah, pego minha baike e dou o fora daqui. .................. .............................. ......... ....................... .............................
It's slow for awhile but if you persevere you get rewarded with a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters and the how they aren't copies of their anime selves. The prologue was refreshing since it's not like all the other isekai'd fanfics. I like the MC's personality and I'm excited to see how he interacts and shocks the other students of UA. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you never end up doing another long part, similar to the prologue leading up to UA.
it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone
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to be honest, it could have been good, the prologue started off great, but then the level started to drop more and more, which was very frustrating, the female characters are shown as hypersensitive crybabies, which does not correspond to reality, from the very beginning the main character is surrounded by girls/women who behave inappropriately, justifying this by the fact that our OC is a continuation of his mother, which I personally find questionable, I also think that the author has problems with power scaling
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Premature review I think, only read up to chapter 8 but I have high hopes for the story regardless, the updating stability is what prompted me to write the review rn instead of waiting until I’ve read it through, an author with this level of dedication deserves this much at least. I hope reading the later chapters are just as enjoyable :)
Good, stable characterization of MC. (I dislike the flip-flopping characters) Interesting power development and research. (Would have like to see some more action as the powers develop) Good grammar and writing clarity. (Bad flow, see below as the main culprit) First 20+ chapters has way to much crying/emotions in it. Feels odd when it gets mixed together within paragraphs with sexual description and what not. Lots could be cut out and re-organized to stream line and condense the story. (I especially found the one scene of the funeral with description of the sexy outfits mixed in disturbing...)
The prologue and the 1 2 chapter pretty good after that it start going downhill
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Definitely a goated novel. It is a bit slow, so if you expect constant balls-to-the-walls nonstop action, this probably isn't for you, but if you can tolerate that it is a great novel. Not to mention the MC has Nen and Haki as a quirk? A wonderful premise.
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I liked it a lot, the writing is good, reasonably long chapters, my only complaint is the slow progress, almost 50 chapters and it hasn't entered the official list yet, I understand the character's development and why it gave a lot of life to his story, but it's a matter of taste. I myself don't like big backstories like that, basically I know Kai's childhood more than Midoriwa's
The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?
Really liked it, i read all the current chapters in one go, and the grammar is good enough. The author takes care to write a good world background, and explanations of surroundings but it could be better. The story development is nice and the character design is well done. Updates are consistent which is good and it shows that author tries hard to research things to explain. I quite liked that author tries to explain things properly and on point, it explains what needs to be explained with the abilities which I liked. So far there is only one short lemon and it was good while also showing the emotions of the characters and their feelings about which shows that the character have real feelings.
Me gusta mucho el trabajo que estás haciendo, escribo esto por el comentario de que hay gente que no le gusta lo lento que va la historia, a mi me parece que esta perfecto el desarrollo que lleva la historia. ya que si no fuera así con la cantidad de habilidades y relaciones del protagonista, todo sería muy apresurado sin contexto alguno de por qué están en una relación. de mi parte encuentro perfecto el desarrollo. sigue así 💯💯
It’s a decent MHA fanfic so I suggest you atleast give it like 5 chapters and you might like it.
I love this story, if the reviews are not constructive criticism and are just people trying to make you feel bad then you should just ignore them.
I find it interesting that you introduce nen beasts or spiritual concepts into the world of MHA and how those energies affect those around the protagonist. As for the slow development, I don't mind. There are people who complain about that, but they forget that all the plots of Boku no Hero happen in the protagonist's first year as students. Personally, I don't care as long as it's well written and understood. As for the harem, it doesn't bother me. After all, I'm a veteran of DXD stories, where they exaggerate the harem. Take that gentleman, his 5 stars.
This story is so far really entertaining to read. While it is a slow burn for now, it's a nice mix of slice of life and info/training. Can't wait to see how the story progresses through UA.
honestly it's a slow burn right now at about 40 chapters with mostly world building and power exploration with only one fight scene with the mc and one as origin story The SI quirk makes sense canonically and everything fits well for a fan fic which makes reading a bit easier. The writing also flows well so reading isn't a chore or obstacle to enjoying it like some others. Overall it's a good story; just don't have enough written to tell if it's great
Really like słów and consistent pace. I always like to read about nen and its different applications on fanfics. Please keep up the good work.
Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one
ok first things first it's a good work but is it amazing then no far from it it laterally took me 50 something chapters to see any kind of development from anyone other than the main character we didn't get any glimpse of any enemy except bioblast the more i read i try not to cringe and like most of the mha fanfics out there of course you included momo and hado in this somehow probably going to make them both his main love interest and probably midnight too somewhere along the line like the power systems you put are one of the most versatile but you didn't take advantage of that you could have copied some reference from hxh like gon rock paper scissors or kilua electricity
I like the slow pace in this novel, the world background and development is quite good. The mc slowly makes more abilitys and shows more abilitys through out the story which always keeps me exicted. All the bad reviews on this novel are from people do appreaciate a good webnovel and skip chapter cause they want the mc to be in ua within the first 4 chapters. Overall a lovely novel
This novel is actually pretty good past chapter 40. If there is one word I’d use to describe this fanfic….
Una buena lectura con una gramática y traducción fluida, la historia es entretenida y lo es más el MC con su Nen y Haki aprovechando su intelecto y resaltar su versatilidad y creatividad al desarrollar sus habilidades
Shotacon? Nah, pego minha baike e dou o fora daqui. .................. .............................. ......... ....................... .............................
It's slow for awhile but if you persevere you get rewarded with a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters and the how they aren't copies of their anime selves. The prologue was refreshing since it's not like all the other isekai'd fanfics. I like the MC's personality and I'm excited to see how he interacts and shocks the other students of UA. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you never end up doing another long part, similar to the prologue leading up to UA.
it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone
Spoiler enthüllen to be honest, it could have been good, the prologue started off great, but then the level started to drop more and more, which was very frustrating, the female characters are shown as hypersensitive crybabies, which does not correspond to reality, from the very beginning the main character is surrounded by girls/women who behave inappropriately, justifying this by the fact that our OC is a continuation of his mother, which I personally find questionable, I also think that the author has problems with power scaling
Spoiler enthüllen Premature review I think, only read up to chapter 8 but I have high hopes for the story regardless, the updating stability is what prompted me to write the review rn instead of waiting until I’ve read it through, an author with this level of dedication deserves this much at least. I hope reading the later chapters are just as enjoyable :)
Good, stable characterization of MC. (I dislike the flip-flopping characters) Interesting power development and research. (Would have like to see some more action as the powers develop) Good grammar and writing clarity. (Bad flow, see below as the main culprit) First 20+ chapters has way to much crying/emotions in it. Feels odd when it gets mixed together within paragraphs with sexual description and what not. Lots could be cut out and re-organized to stream line and condense the story. (I especially found the one scene of the funeral with description of the sexy outfits mixed in disturbing...)
The prologue and the 1 2 chapter pretty good after that it start going downhill
Ouah tout le monde écoute le MC pour aucune raison et personne ne le remet en doute [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Definitely a goated novel. It is a bit slow, so if you expect constant balls-to-the-walls nonstop action, this probably isn't for you, but if you can tolerate that it is a great novel. Not to mention the MC has Nen and Haki as a quirk? A wonderful premise.
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I liked it a lot, the writing is good, reasonably long chapters, my only complaint is the slow progress, almost 50 chapters and it hasn't entered the official list yet, I understand the character's development and why it gave a lot of life to his story, but it's a matter of taste. I myself don't like big backstories like that, basically I know Kai's childhood more than Midoriwa's
The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?
Really liked it, i read all the current chapters in one go, and the grammar is good enough. The author takes care to write a good world background, and explanations of surroundings but it could be better. The story development is nice and the character design is well done. Updates are consistent which is good and it shows that author tries hard to research things to explain. I quite liked that author tries to explain things properly and on point, it explains what needs to be explained with the abilities which I liked. So far there is only one short lemon and it was good while also showing the emotions of the characters and their feelings about which shows that the character have real feelings.
Me gusta mucho el trabajo que estás haciendo, escribo esto por el comentario de que hay gente que no le gusta lo lento que va la historia, a mi me parece que esta perfecto el desarrollo que lleva la historia. ya que si no fuera así con la cantidad de habilidades y relaciones del protagonista, todo sería muy apresurado sin contexto alguno de por qué están en una relación. de mi parte encuentro perfecto el desarrollo. sigue así 💯💯
It’s a decent MHA fanfic so I suggest you atleast give it like 5 chapters and you might like it.
I love this story, if the reviews are not constructive criticism and are just people trying to make you feel bad then you should just ignore them.
I find it interesting that you introduce nen beasts or spiritual concepts into the world of MHA and how those energies affect those around the protagonist. As for the slow development, I don't mind. There are people who complain about that, but they forget that all the plots of Boku no Hero happen in the protagonist's first year as students. Personally, I don't care as long as it's well written and understood. As for the harem, it doesn't bother me. After all, I'm a veteran of DXD stories, where they exaggerate the harem. Take that gentleman, his 5 stars.
This story is so far really entertaining to read. While it is a slow burn for now, it's a nice mix of slice of life and info/training. Can't wait to see how the story progresses through UA.
honestly it's a slow burn right now at about 40 chapters with mostly world building and power exploration with only one fight scene with the mc and one as origin story The SI quirk makes sense canonically and everything fits well for a fan fic which makes reading a bit easier. The writing also flows well so reading isn't a chore or obstacle to enjoying it like some others. Overall it's a good story; just don't have enough written to tell if it's great
Really like słów and consistent pace. I always like to read about nen and its different applications on fanfics. Please keep up the good work.
Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one