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I am reading this fic for 2 months, so i can say, that i like it and looking forward for more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.
The novel has good basics plus a very powerful quirk so i have no complaints and I am happy about it The problem is first super slow development which the first mistake every writer falls into specially in MHA novels we didn’t even get to the first season in 41 chapter Second is the pre harem setting that the author is building in a MHA world it’s better for one or two at most and midnight a mother fkin figure for the MC This kinda Low blow dude I hope u take my review seriously
It is for ruined my day with the prologue ................................................................................................................
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I like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?
So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.
I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.
Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I am reading this fic for 2 months, so i can say, that i like it and looking forward for more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.
The novel has good basics plus a very powerful quirk so i have no complaints and I am happy about it The problem is first super slow development which the first mistake every writer falls into specially in MHA novels we didn’t even get to the first season in 41 chapter Second is the pre harem setting that the author is building in a MHA world it’s better for one or two at most and midnight a mother fkin figure for the MC This kinda Low blow dude I hope u take my review seriously
It is for ruined my day with the prologue ................................................................................................................
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It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?
So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.
I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.
Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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