Game of Thrones: The Stark Shard

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leylin_slytherin

Ai Writing, with way too many adjectives , its not a Spellbee competition I'll give point foe the idea though

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Nathanielornsby

Honestly, there's not much to say about this story negatively. The grammar and punctuation are solid, and the characters are great, I love SI stories, butttttttt the only problem I really have with the story so far is the power. Honestly, the power really doesn't fit the role of being a stark and / or the time period, insects have always been one of the most iconic figures for death, pestilence and betrayal, it would've made more sense to have a power that would actively help Robb with his duties as the next Lord of house Stark, or something to do with Dire Wolves.

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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The_man_The_myth

It’s honestly a Meh for me. Starts off by purely Ai writing the story idea is ok but feels out of place abit sometimes

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Hussain

Good novel I like the kingdom building and it's realistic. Keep writing there isn't enough good novels that continue. Hopefully ebryehing works put well with your apartment.

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Kavindu_Ruwanara

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LV 4

nej38

more more more more more more more more more more more more

LV 4

ZAID_THE_GREAT

Good stuff especially because all the chapters that were previously not very good are now edited to perfection pretty much In fact I don’t remember reading any major(or minor) mistakes in the story after the edits and a thing that i liked is the consistency that this story had because I really hate when a story gets the ages of the characters or places wrong and this one didn’t have this problem at all so the attention to detail is much appreciated One of the better got stories I’ve read in a while Keep going author

LV 3

Pacardic

Druid shit and oldgods warlock is awesome! Eldrich blastttttt

LV 1

Gabinete2k

Good novel, it's very good at the moment and i have hope that will continue to be as good as ot seems. Congratulations author. Even if in the beginning the writing os a bit off, you get used to it pretty quickly.

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Adithya_Anand

solid novel

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Erick_Espinoza

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LV 5

Lordmoonlight

The first couple chapters are stuip to read and follow in a world as f up as GOT you talked about his power to his mother who is fated nut and you got other problems as well it got better but frm the start the story killed the vybz