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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionthis novel was exactly the type of novel that i was looking for i liked the characters the world building , and the atmosphere. the mc's personality is just my taste , overpowered but not in an unreasonable way, and this novel have the right amount of angst wish i absolutely loved. its my first time writing a review but i decided to do so cus i found it hard to find any other books on the same level even though i like the academy setting and extra or villain type mc its hard to find smth well written and actually interesting. im on chapter 204 i look forward to how things will go and i hope it won't turn bad . thank you author for this good read.
literally the best out there in this genre... read it I promise you won't regret it. p. s- though action is top tier along with world building but damn.. . this one gives feels too great
Hey author, I really like how you write mystery keep it up! Please don’t let the story devolve into mindless leveling up and face-slapping like many other novels in this genre.
I am delighted to have read this novel; it is very complete, and there is no disappointment. It has everything to please: a fluid writing style, a deep story, and endearing characters. I especially love the strong bond between our protagonist and their family, filled with affection and love. Just like with the first novel, *Rise of the White Devil*, I fell under its charm. I read it with sincere joy. Thank you to the author for these stories. To me, your writing style is among the best. Keep it up it's perfect!
i like it a lot the characters are very to my liking and so is the world building the MC's powers are very to my liking the only thing that this story lacks i would say is the power system frankly it's almost very bad it could be much better and much easier to understand but overall it's quite good to read
Finally a fellow harem hater. The writing is awesome The plot is crazy.................................................................................
Hey Crypthh, First of all, I just want to say that you don't have to take my review too seriously or as any form of criticism—you're the author, and it's your vision that makes this story so enjoyable. Even if you never read this comment, I’ll always be one of your biggest fans. From the very beginning, the story was already good, but as it progressed, your writing improved so much. The way you've enhanced your storytelling, built up the characters, and developed the plot is truly impressive. Hats off to you for your dedication and hard work—it's been an absolute pleasure to witness your growth as a writer. Also, I want to sincerely apologize for not being able to read this on Webnovel. Honestly, I'm pretty broke right now, but I'm focused on my studies and working towards a better future. If I ever do well in life, I promise I'll support your work the right way and read it on Webnovel. Your writing truly deserves all the recognition and support, and I genuinely appreciate the effort you put into creating such an amazing story. And to all the readers out there—definitely give this webnovel a try! The author’s writing improves so much mid-story, so please stick with it until it gets really interesting. You won’t regret it! Once again, thank you, Crypthh, for writing such an incredible story. You've done an amazing job, and I can't wait to see where the journey goes from here.
Review at the end of volume 1 My first thought after reading this book is “Flawed Masterpiece” This book has the most generic beginning. Mc loses family, get transmigrated to a fantasy world. But what really puts this book ahead of almost any book on this novel is the professionalism in the writing. This way the scenes are set up, how the characters interact, how monologues are provided and how cohesive the story is. It’s all premium. No one would bat an eye if this was a properly published light novel. There is no denying it the writer has talent. Even though the plot is generic the story itself has complex points, and goes away from cliches like plot armor, system and hero complex mc. I was pleasantly surprised on how fluid it felt. But, at the same time I feel this book not taking advantage of the web novels formats freedoms. The book feels too condensed, similar to a light novel every arc has to lead to another major arc. Which leads to mc personality development and leaves readers with solutions to previous mysteries and new questions. Which all feels accelerated as that is the format of writing a book. But webnovel allows you take a more slow approach, where you can build the world better with time to breath for the mc and the readers. For example, concepts like academy are just used for bringing the main cast together so that they could go to the next event in the story. The classes feel superficial and the rest of the school students might aswell be dolls. I know people will say it has been only 2 weeks in the story but for me the academy has already lost its shine. Another example would be the logic of this magic, the book just says mana Core==magic powers and skills. This is a typical l.novel structure where things are just stated to be true. Another would be just shrugging of questions like : how did the mc survive 2 years in the void realm?every single person on this would just believed it, cause a kid says so? What if he was kidnapped and brainwashed and lied. No one in this world thought that? Maybe dig in and ask the mc the secrets of the void. But no we will ignore this cause who cares. Again I am not being critical just for sticking out. I have to give high praises to this book for the high quality and professional content it provides. But I am just saying the book can take advantage of the web novel format. It allows authors to really refine their craft and build the world. Compared to a light novel format where you go from one story event to the next. With little time to breath.
THIS IS AWESOME. I'M AT 102 AND AUTHOR IS COOKING CRAZY HERE LIKE AT TIMES I DONT UNDERSTAND MOTIVES BUT HELL I CANT PUT IT DOWN SO YEAH READ ASAP
The more i read the more i like the story. It's the one of the best novel in Extra Genre. I hope it won't get dropped like certain Extra story with Void element MC. Best of luck Author.
Binged the first vvolum. This story has a very good potential to be up in the leagues of the big hitters. The cosmic horror aspect is also really well done. Give it a try. You won't regret it. If you're look for something to scratch your The Author's POV itch, this is it.
just finished shed vol 1 and i dont think I have words to describe this novel and the amount of plot twist I saw, I only have one thing to say to future readers this story is worth saving fast passes for
I dont know what to say. This novel is at the very top of my most liked storys. The development at the end of the first arc is amazing and the moment when things, you once deeply theorized about, get explained and click into place is simply the best. The only thing that can be remotely considered as „bad“ is that almost every f***ing chapter ends in a cliffhanger. But even this can sometimes be even more thrilling.
Absolutely amazing novel. The finale of the first volume was fucking fire. Keeping writing author cuz this is one of my favorite novels on the website.
Well, I’ve already read the entire first volume, which if I’m not mistaken goes up to chapter 175, and I just have to say that this is one of the best novels I’ve ever read. This novel keeps getting better and better. Yes, sometimes you get frustrated with the MC, but later, when it’s explained or you think carefully about why he did something, it all makes sense. It made me shed a few tears, the fights are epic, and the supporting characters are excellent. One of the best things about this novel is the mystery of wanting to know what happened—questions that are mostly answered in Volume 1. If you like stories where the MC has a tragic past or trauma but keeps moving forward, a powerful MC who stands out but isn’t so overpowered that the fights become boring, where the supporting characters feel real, and where the world is very dangerous and mysterious—this is for you.
PERFECT....but its a little slow paced, I hope author progress the plot faster. Also, could you please put the tournament arc as the next arc?
Truly one of the best novels ever. For anybody wondering, read it! It is so worth it in the end. Nearly cried when I reached the privileged chapter tag😭.
This book is as addictive as it is fun to read. Action around every corner. As his powers grow only more mysteries are created. What's possible next!?
I started this novel with low expectations because of the title, but it completely surpassed them. Although it was a bit rough around the edges at the beginning, it really came into its own as the story progressed. The character interactions feel natural, the story is engaging, and the characters are intelligent. The main character, in particular, is enjoyable. Overall, I highly recommend this novel.
honestly, the story is good, its not that bad for a extra type of troupe that we all get. I like the fact that hes strong and all, and has a bit of a personality. The whole thing of not stealing the original mc's things and stuff are a good change of pace but dang. I've read up to like chp. 91 and I gotta say. Void Mind or something, the thing that makes you have suppressed emotions wasnt utilized enough in the battle agaisnt the craddler. Like imagine having a ability that makes you have some immunity to mental attacks that basically rely on your emotions to be actually useful. ONE SIMPLE ACTIVATION OF IT CANCELS OUT THE ENTIRE CHAPTER OF THIS GUY TRYNA RUN. I know that hes like 16, never that much experience to do that type of stuff in battle but like, for someone that remembers the novel hes read and has a belief of knowledge is power, this guy is stupid for that. If he actually believed that, he would have at least prepared on what to do on attacks that he was weak agaisnt which he already knew with the confrontation with the 'crying fog'. But nope, this guy goes in with no knowledge, no prep and basically raw dogging the dungeon. The fact that he knows that there is already trouble in the dungeon yet doesnt make preparation makes it worse. He even wants to save his friend, HE WANTS TO SAVE HIS FRIEND WITH NO PREP. Like, at least put in some effort for something you wanna do. For the plot changes, he already knew, if he know about dungeon shifts, he should have known that the dungeon their clearing should have some changes too, adding more reasons to PREPARE. I know that hes just a teenager orphan dropped in the middle of a world filled with monsters and shit but he should have at least the intelligence to do that. Like im sorry for yapping but you have no idea how much this frustrated me reading that entire arc. Void mind isnt getting utilize for how valuable of a skill it really is. In the story it even states that people would kill for such a skill and I would agree, it would be such a good skill agaisnt mind attackers man. Like man Im just tryna say its a ok story but damn its making me lose braincells sometimes
Spoiler enthüllenevery single thing about this is awesome.. right niw this is the best novel I am currently reading.. bro is cooking very well..
honestly it's good the story's a bit difficult to follow and sometimes chapters don't connect and it's a bit hard to remember some of the details but it's a fun read Solomon is funny whenever he's around and the Mc is good
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ABSOLUTE PEAK!!! My God, is this story beautiful. its flawless. There isn't a single thing I dislike about this novel. Going in, you think it's going to be you're average, "transmigrated into the book/game as an Extra plotline". It is much more than that. This novel is anything but average. It's perfect. The writing quality is 10/10. The author draws you in immediately and keeps you throughout the story. The character's are very likeable, the MC especially. It scratches an itch, that I didn't know I even had.
This is peak. Simple as that. Refreshing and unique take on a well-known premise, with the writing quality to elevate it to the next level of addictive. Just shut up and read it. You know you have nothing going on. This'll be worth it.
I like the how the authors writing quality is simple and easy to latch on to. Making it a easy for readers to understand . I also like how the story develops , it 's slow pace gives you a more clear understanding of the characters , not just the mc .The characters design is also inceredible I like how everyones's story doesn't revolve around the mc. In my opinion this is a great read , I would like to more works like this .
Shameless author review here! Feel free to ask me questions regarding my novel, and I will try to answer them to the best of my abilities.
this novel was exactly the type of novel that i was looking for i liked the characters the world building , and the atmosphere. the mc's personality is just my taste , overpowered but not in an unreasonable way, and this novel have the right amount of angst wish i absolutely loved. its my first time writing a review but i decided to do so cus i found it hard to find any other books on the same level even though i like the academy setting and extra or villain type mc its hard to find smth well written and actually interesting. im on chapter 204 i look forward to how things will go and i hope it won't turn bad . thank you author for this good read.
literally the best out there in this genre... read it I promise you won't regret it. p. s- though action is top tier along with world building but damn.. . this one gives feels too great
Hey author, I really like how you write mystery keep it up! Please don’t let the story devolve into mindless leveling up and face-slapping like many other novels in this genre.
I am delighted to have read this novel; it is very complete, and there is no disappointment. It has everything to please: a fluid writing style, a deep story, and endearing characters. I especially love the strong bond between our protagonist and their family, filled with affection and love. Just like with the first novel, *Rise of the White Devil*, I fell under its charm. I read it with sincere joy. Thank you to the author for these stories. To me, your writing style is among the best. Keep it up it's perfect!
i like it a lot the characters are very to my liking and so is the world building the MC's powers are very to my liking the only thing that this story lacks i would say is the power system frankly it's almost very bad it could be much better and much easier to understand but overall it's quite good to read
Finally a fellow harem hater. The writing is awesome The plot is crazy.................................................................................
Hey Crypthh, First of all, I just want to say that you don't have to take my review too seriously or as any form of criticism—you're the author, and it's your vision that makes this story so enjoyable. Even if you never read this comment, I’ll always be one of your biggest fans. From the very beginning, the story was already good, but as it progressed, your writing improved so much. The way you've enhanced your storytelling, built up the characters, and developed the plot is truly impressive. Hats off to you for your dedication and hard work—it's been an absolute pleasure to witness your growth as a writer. Also, I want to sincerely apologize for not being able to read this on Webnovel. Honestly, I'm pretty broke right now, but I'm focused on my studies and working towards a better future. If I ever do well in life, I promise I'll support your work the right way and read it on Webnovel. Your writing truly deserves all the recognition and support, and I genuinely appreciate the effort you put into creating such an amazing story. And to all the readers out there—definitely give this webnovel a try! The author’s writing improves so much mid-story, so please stick with it until it gets really interesting. You won’t regret it! Once again, thank you, Crypthh, for writing such an incredible story. You've done an amazing job, and I can't wait to see where the journey goes from here.
Review at the end of volume 1 My first thought after reading this book is “Flawed Masterpiece” This book has the most generic beginning. Mc loses family, get transmigrated to a fantasy world. But what really puts this book ahead of almost any book on this novel is the professionalism in the writing. This way the scenes are set up, how the characters interact, how monologues are provided and how cohesive the story is. It’s all premium. No one would bat an eye if this was a properly published light novel. There is no denying it the writer has talent. Even though the plot is generic the story itself has complex points, and goes away from cliches like plot armor, system and hero complex mc. I was pleasantly surprised on how fluid it felt. But, at the same time I feel this book not taking advantage of the web novels formats freedoms. The book feels too condensed, similar to a light novel every arc has to lead to another major arc. Which leads to mc personality development and leaves readers with solutions to previous mysteries and new questions. Which all feels accelerated as that is the format of writing a book. But webnovel allows you take a more slow approach, where you can build the world better with time to breath for the mc and the readers. For example, concepts like academy are just used for bringing the main cast together so that they could go to the next event in the story. The classes feel superficial and the rest of the school students might aswell be dolls. I know people will say it has been only 2 weeks in the story but for me the academy has already lost its shine. Another example would be the logic of this magic, the book just says mana Core==magic powers and skills. This is a typical l.novel structure where things are just stated to be true. Another would be just shrugging of questions like : how did the mc survive 2 years in the void realm?every single person on this would just believed it, cause a kid says so? What if he was kidnapped and brainwashed and lied. No one in this world thought that? Maybe dig in and ask the mc the secrets of the void. But no we will ignore this cause who cares. Again I am not being critical just for sticking out. I have to give high praises to this book for the high quality and professional content it provides. But I am just saying the book can take advantage of the web novel format. It allows authors to really refine their craft and build the world. Compared to a light novel format where you go from one story event to the next. With little time to breath.
THIS IS AWESOME. I'M AT 102 AND AUTHOR IS COOKING CRAZY HERE LIKE AT TIMES I DONT UNDERSTAND MOTIVES BUT HELL I CANT PUT IT DOWN SO YEAH READ ASAP
The more i read the more i like the story. It's the one of the best novel in Extra Genre. I hope it won't get dropped like certain Extra story with Void element MC. Best of luck Author.
Binged the first vvolum. This story has a very good potential to be up in the leagues of the big hitters. The cosmic horror aspect is also really well done. Give it a try. You won't regret it. If you're look for something to scratch your The Author's POV itch, this is it.
just finished shed vol 1 and i dont think I have words to describe this novel and the amount of plot twist I saw, I only have one thing to say to future readers this story is worth saving fast passes for
I dont know what to say. This novel is at the very top of my most liked storys. The development at the end of the first arc is amazing and the moment when things, you once deeply theorized about, get explained and click into place is simply the best. The only thing that can be remotely considered as „bad“ is that almost every f***ing chapter ends in a cliffhanger. But even this can sometimes be even more thrilling.
Absolutely amazing novel. The finale of the first volume was fucking fire. Keeping writing author cuz this is one of my favorite novels on the website.
Well, I’ve already read the entire first volume, which if I’m not mistaken goes up to chapter 175, and I just have to say that this is one of the best novels I’ve ever read. This novel keeps getting better and better. Yes, sometimes you get frustrated with the MC, but later, when it’s explained or you think carefully about why he did something, it all makes sense. It made me shed a few tears, the fights are epic, and the supporting characters are excellent. One of the best things about this novel is the mystery of wanting to know what happened—questions that are mostly answered in Volume 1. If you like stories where the MC has a tragic past or trauma but keeps moving forward, a powerful MC who stands out but isn’t so overpowered that the fights become boring, where the supporting characters feel real, and where the world is very dangerous and mysterious—this is for you.
PERFECT....but its a little slow paced, I hope author progress the plot faster. Also, could you please put the tournament arc as the next arc?
Truly one of the best novels ever. For anybody wondering, read it! It is so worth it in the end. Nearly cried when I reached the privileged chapter tag😭.
This book is as addictive as it is fun to read. Action around every corner. As his powers grow only more mysteries are created. What's possible next!?
I started this novel with low expectations because of the title, but it completely surpassed them. Although it was a bit rough around the edges at the beginning, it really came into its own as the story progressed. The character interactions feel natural, the story is engaging, and the characters are intelligent. The main character, in particular, is enjoyable. Overall, I highly recommend this novel.
honestly, the story is good, its not that bad for a extra type of troupe that we all get. I like the fact that hes strong and all, and has a bit of a personality. The whole thing of not stealing the original mc's things and stuff are a good change of pace but dang. I've read up to like chp. 91 and I gotta say. Void Mind or something, the thing that makes you have suppressed emotions wasnt utilized enough in the battle agaisnt the craddler. Like imagine having a ability that makes you have some immunity to mental attacks that basically rely on your emotions to be actually useful. ONE SIMPLE ACTIVATION OF IT CANCELS OUT THE ENTIRE CHAPTER OF THIS GUY TRYNA RUN. I know that hes like 16, never that much experience to do that type of stuff in battle but like, for someone that remembers the novel hes read and has a belief of knowledge is power, this guy is stupid for that. If he actually believed that, he would have at least prepared on what to do on attacks that he was weak agaisnt which he already knew with the confrontation with the 'crying fog'. But nope, this guy goes in with no knowledge, no prep and basically raw dogging the dungeon. The fact that he knows that there is already trouble in the dungeon yet doesnt make preparation makes it worse. He even wants to save his friend, HE WANTS TO SAVE HIS FRIEND WITH NO PREP. Like, at least put in some effort for something you wanna do. For the plot changes, he already knew, if he know about dungeon shifts, he should have known that the dungeon their clearing should have some changes too, adding more reasons to PREPARE. I know that hes just a teenager orphan dropped in the middle of a world filled with monsters and shit but he should have at least the intelligence to do that. Like im sorry for yapping but you have no idea how much this frustrated me reading that entire arc. Void mind isnt getting utilize for how valuable of a skill it really is. In the story it even states that people would kill for such a skill and I would agree, it would be such a good skill agaisnt mind attackers man. Like man Im just tryna say its a ok story but damn its making me lose braincells sometimes
Spoiler enthüllenevery single thing about this is awesome.. right niw this is the best novel I am currently reading.. bro is cooking very well..
honestly it's good the story's a bit difficult to follow and sometimes chapters don't connect and it's a bit hard to remember some of the details but it's a fun read Solomon is funny whenever he's around and the Mc is good
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ABSOLUTE PEAK!!! My God, is this story beautiful. its flawless. There isn't a single thing I dislike about this novel. Going in, you think it's going to be you're average, "transmigrated into the book/game as an Extra plotline". It is much more than that. This novel is anything but average. It's perfect. The writing quality is 10/10. The author draws you in immediately and keeps you throughout the story. The character's are very likeable, the MC especially. It scratches an itch, that I didn't know I even had.
This is peak. Simple as that. Refreshing and unique take on a well-known premise, with the writing quality to elevate it to the next level of addictive. Just shut up and read it. You know you have nothing going on. This'll be worth it.
I like the how the authors writing quality is simple and easy to latch on to. Making it a easy for readers to understand . I also like how the story develops , it 's slow pace gives you a more clear understanding of the characters , not just the mc .The characters design is also inceredible I like how everyones's story doesn't revolve around the mc. In my opinion this is a great read , I would like to more works like this .
Shameless author review here! Feel free to ask me questions regarding my novel, and I will try to answer them to the best of my abilities.