Springleaf

honestly, the story is good, its not that bad for a extra type of troupe that we all get. I like the fact that hes strong and all, and has a bit of a personality. The whole thing of not stealing the original mc's things and stuff are a good change of pace but dang. I've read up to like chp. 91 and I gotta say. Void Mind or something, the thing that makes you have suppressed emotions wasnt utilized enough in the battle agaisnt the craddler. Like imagine having a ability that makes you have some immunity to mental attacks that basically rely on your emotions to be actually useful. ONE SIMPLE ACTIVATION OF IT CANCELS OUT THE ENTIRE CHAPTER OF THIS GUY TRYNA RUN. I know that hes like 16, never that much experience to do that type of stuff in battle but like, for someone that remembers the novel hes read and has a belief of knowledge is power, this guy is stupid for that. If he actually believed that, he would have at least prepared on what to do on attacks that he was weak agaisnt which he already knew with the confrontation with the 'crying fog'. But nope, this guy goes in with no knowledge, no prep and basically raw dogging the dungeon. The fact that he knows that there is already trouble in the dungeon yet doesnt make preparation makes it worse. He even wants to save his friend, HE WANTS TO SAVE HIS FRIEND WITH NO PREP. Like, at least put in some effort for something you wanna do. For the plot changes, he already knew, if he know about dungeon shifts, he should have known that the dungeon their clearing should have some changes too, adding more reasons to PREPARE. I know that hes just a teenager orphan dropped in the middle of a world filled with monsters and shit but he should have at least the intelligence to do that. Like im sorry for yapping but you have no idea how much this frustrated me reading that entire arc. Void mind isnt getting utilize for how valuable of a skill it really is. In the story it even states that people would kill for such a skill and I would agree, it would be such a good skill agaisnt mind attackers man. Like man Im just tryna say its a ok story but damn its making me lose braincells sometimes

It had a pretty good start but after the talent "mana singularity", the title pretty much became an empty title, he basically is 2 star mage or whatever they are called after that, then theres the power scaling thats just gone to everywhere, the world building isnt properly explored but its decent. The authors way of giving information is weird too, its in the form of giving out random facts every now and then that just ruins immersion most of the time though he fixes it in later chapters. The story doesn't even give like a sense of mystery like a character pointing out a dude to watch out for, creating a good sense of wonder of who that is then the next paragraph is just a parenthesis statement of who it was. Overall, I read up to 50+ chapters but its not my cup of tea, though it may he different for some people