The Third Prince Of Darkness

LV 4

RaiseHavoc

So far I’m really enjoying this novel. It’s well written, a decent pace and invokes emotion when it wants you to. I’m already dreading reading about his biological sister’s future knowing she has a “fragile heart” (I’m a sucker for familial love) also I hope to see different pov’s from the characters in the story. I’d like to read how the MC is seen by others.

LV 15

Alanray64

Pretty good read formthis story, I scored this mostly 4s, with 2 fives given, mainly because it is early stages and I did feel the early chapters were a bit long winded (my own personal opinion) Story is of a guy, History Teacher, who meets truck-kun and is transmigrated/reborn into another world, I will admit the transmigration arc was rather well done and, at least for me, introduced some insight into those moments between dying and rebirth. So enter MC as the 3rd Prince of a Kingdom, who appreciates his new life and family (orphan vibes, really cant miss that), not so much his father the King as he turns out to be led by his balls by the 2nd Queen who later the readers find that she really wants the MC gone as he is a threat to her plans. During the chapters, a clear antagonist is revealed and it feels like one of those end game setups, so it is a watch this space development. Anyways I’ve read all the available 40 chapters and found the story of interest. The onky downside I’ve come across is he is quick to anger and doesn’t appear to have the wisdom to temper this yet, but I guess being 12 it may improve. I feel the anger sparks might be due to one of his alignments magic for darkness, but will see. Overall, characters are written well, villains are clearly defined and the elements of kingdom building are beginning to show (thoroughly enjoy kingdom building novels). I’m not sure if I can provide any advice or direction to the author as it, to date, pretty well done, though maybe don’t let the MC go full on bloodthirsty as he needs a cool head on his shoulders to create history.

LV 3

Terlik

The author is here, you can ask him anything!

LV 14

MrFalan

I will be dropping it not because it's bad this is a lot better than many works out there but not my cup of tea for the reasons: 1. The tragedy of side characters feels too forced for the plot. 2. The main character does not show the maturity expected. While this can be explained by MC living a new life in a fantasy feeling like he has a plot behind him he also does not display wisdom and intelligence. 3. Most importantly chapter prices were okay at 12 coins but he started to increase them and also put 16 coins for chapters after the cliffhanger.

LV 15

joshua_peppers

Liked this story a lot but can’t really get pass the part about his dead girl he loves that kind of stuff is supposed to make you stronger especially in a world he lives in now

LV 2

Erlik_Tezgin

Great story. More![img=update][img=update]

LV 15

Wilder6

Hey does he use his modern knowledge and technology for kingdom building?

LV 3

biggerwish

will you write netorare(i hope not)? ..................................................................................….......................

LV 1

Kiryou_Life

i was honestly very scared at the beginning cz of the reborn into a fantasy world copy paste , but very soon got into the plot XD , little slow in the beginning but keeps gaining traction and the fact that the author remembers that its not only about MC and that there is more events,characters,non-seen-by-reader events that mold and shape the story is very much appreciated ,time skip is nice too , im writing this review at chap 55 , so i hope i dont get disappointed later on for some Rushed nonsense , as long as author doesnt drop he/she can take all the time to keep writing . keep up the good work and thank you. peace [img=recommend]

LV 4

Overdrive_Titan

good novel but sometimes feel quite confusing as I don't understand from what previous world mentality he came from like is he orphan,is he working person,he died at the age of 26 or something, from this I can't quite understand his psychology and his mentality goes haywire when facing someone who irritates him and sometimes the time jumps in the storyline don't tell clearly how much he has grown also the lack of description of growth of weak to strong makes it quite vague sometimes plot is good but it feels off like something is that I can't put my finger on but still good job on this...

LV 13

Usiel

Quality of writing and the level of English is good 4/5. Updates are stable as well. Development of the plot/story is erratic at best, low budget indian drama at worst. Each and every side character is somehow extreme and obsessive. Way too much drama for my taste. World background is good yet not deep. Most importantly you'll not get clear explanation of MC's powers. Author has a disastrous naming sense the names of the spells were horrific. Idk if the author was trying to be funny. If yes it wasn't if not.... It's bland, after chapter 40ish I've started to expect another meaningless plot twist at every chapter. Author was trying to compensate the shallowness of the plot with dramatic twist i think. Best of luck to author. Defiantly not my cup of tea.

LV 15

Corey_Haarmann

It has great potential, but it has some serious plot holes. The mc is supposed to be smart but makes very stupid decisions. He's supposed to be a historian who knows about battle tactics, but he doesn't even know basic battle tactics. To give an example, 150 men die from a guy who's only one stage above the prince, and the prince is definitely not the strongest amongst his troops. I won't say more for those who want to read it.