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High above the battlefield, a figure slowly ascended. Below, the once vibrant village of Konoha lay in ruins. Minato Namikaze, clutching a bloody gash at his waist, looked up with a deep, questioning voice. "Aizen, have you fallen?"
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The story takes place in an AU universe of Naruto
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters or the fanfic I was merely translating this.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionI need more Btw author you should know that Aizen is the name of Aizen, not Sosuke which is his familly name, you made that mistake in the last chapter (chapter 20).
From what Ive seen, the author has superficial knowledge on both chakra and reiryoku, which is weird cus this novel exists. It ruins the immersion for someone well versed in both power systems. The idea of the story is good, but the author turned it into a psudo cultivation novel. also in the begining we were shown how the mc died, Id rather read one where the mc continued from where he stoped in his last life and make use of the knowledge to acheve his goals and the like. but thats besides the point, what ruins this novel is the lack and mix up of info from the corresponding worlds, for example he had mc gain the memories of Aizen then all of a sudden apparently there is a Shinigami technique that helps improve spiritual energy by ABSORBING energy from the surrounding which mind you is a QUINCY technique. Also mc keeps getting handed everything bro got at least 2 A rank ninjutsu's and a few more ninjutsu. FOR GOODNESS SAKE ITS ONLY 4 chapters. I wanted to give a 1 star but that wont be a fair review so I gave a 2.8
Spoiler enthüllenAnybody who uses systems have to take into account the incongruity. How do these powers and items come to be. Its one of my biggest annoyances with system novels. using a system is both lazy and unimaginative. 0/5 if I could.
I think I have done quite well in translating this fic and I shamelessly deserve to give it 5 stars as the translator. I hope you guys enjoy this.
one of a kind fanfic ,, since the first line and the following ones ,,i couldn't only just to feel excited to the comming scenarioes or the upcoming trainning arcs or the interactions between the mc and other ,, really this one accomplished that thanks❤❤❤🖤🖤🖤🔥🔥🔥
So far the translation is good, as I have read only 20 chapters so far, couldn't say anything about the plot.
Reads like a reddit post. Too much info dumbs and fillers. Feels like a copy and paste. Such a terrible narration style. The author directly talks about other anime in length. So annoying. In the middle of fights you get the MC explaining his plans and powers to random enemies. The author likes to talk a lot to the readers directly. He just won't shut up.
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Story is pretty enjoyable so far. I really liked how Aizen handled the nawaki conflict in a low key and smart manner. Some of the other plot points are random nonsense, like he gets assassinated by a cloud ninja who randomly gifts him senju blood that he has for some reason. Still entertains me because I want to see evil scientist stuff so I’ll grudgingly give a pass And the grammar is terrible, it’s been run through the old version of chat got so sometimes the sentences will get stuck in a loop or say the opposite of what is intended. I recommend the story 5 stars so far and -2 for the poor translation
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Why is that always needs to be a self insert MC from earth who died, and got transferred to another world, where they finally acquire the power of an anime character. Why couldn’t we just take the anime character over to the other world. How come that the Aizen from earth memorys overwrites the one from Naruto, but the original Aizen doesn’t override the self insert protagonist from earth.