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The day before the beginning of his sixth year, Harry is informed that this is his second life. That he was given a gamer system at his rebirth. And how does this system work you ask? Simple, sleep around and earn points to spend on the multiversal lottery machine—also known as Gacha. Harry is anything but wasteful, and he will fuck around in hopes to make his normal life spicier and to get some op skills while he is at it. Late Triwizard Tournament. Voldemort is dead—but not. Fucking Horcruxes.

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Guri_01_09

Writing quality is 5 star 👍👍 . But, MC is a charity giving Moron, i just can't stand. Hope he dies an ugly death and Voldemort wins.

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Shadow1609

trash novel loser mc [img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad]

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Zen_Doubt

Liking the story so far(Ch.5). The writing is above avarage compared to most WN Fanfics and I love that the chapters are long enough to be quite satisfying. Keep up the Goodwork, hoping to read more chaps.

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BlyatxBlyat

Honestly It's a pretty ok novel, the chapters are nice and long and it has a relatively interesting premise. The story is still in its early stages but I see some potential. The characters really need some fleshing out but that can be done over time. Honestly I am interested to see the direction this goes and hopefully it matures into a great story.

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tatekim

The story is quite refreshing but it feels like the MC is bipolar or something like that, there's a point where he thinks he is a psychopath, so maybe this was intended but it became difficult to be relatable. But the real problem here is what happens in most novels; the author has a good idea. Presents a goal that we can see would take a while to accomplish, or at least we can expect a good plot from it, and then he jumps to another fucking world? The probability of seeing the end of that or at least some good content is really low. Too much to handle, too much to explain. Where you could have time to develop what was already presented, he just goes for a new world...

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mohi_ahm

Good but slow writing. The writing Quality is good but the Stability of Updates is poor. He should not visit other worlds without making his family more powerful. Please get 2 posts/week.

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smirking_shark

I've read this on fanfiction,...........

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