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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionEasy to read, enjoyable and interesting. Can't wait for more! Hope it keeps updating regurarly and getting interesting as it has so far........
Gave it a 3 as I didn't read it and didn't want to be a d**k but this is just geh. Why read about a dude willingly turning into a woman, straight up geh
Se tarda dos capítulos solo para dar mucho contexto que al final no importa sobre su muerte y sobre como consigo sus poderes, no deja claro si es hombre o mujer el mc además se supone que va a otro mundo a vivir así que debería cambiar la obra original no literalmente solo cambiar cosas ligeras sin cambiar básicamente nada solo sigue al protagonista original sin hacer nada para cambiar algo, no sigue lo que debería ser un rey o reina por que como dije nunca deja claro si es hombre o mujer básicamente es solo una copia con un mc que no cambia nada solo existe [img=faceslap]
niceee, i hope you're not drop this novel, and the crazy is the heroine is shuna, I hope the update is faster
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Spoiler enthülleni concur that I would love to keep reading this, would you be so kind as to keep have the will and strength to wright, safe travels knowledge spreader.
She got no other benefits from combining 3 most powerful Artoria pendragon versions other than just becoming a God-dragon hybrid. I was expecting MC will have Artoria's skill sets. But she had to buy every skills and weapon, then what was the point of the random draw. Also the dialogue between MC with Rimuru feels like written by a 10 years old
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There are some typos here and there but overall the writing quality is great! I also really really REALLY like the character design and how Artoria is blunt to Rimuru and corrects his wrongs (if that makes any sense).She also gives good advices so +1 point! The slight changes here and there is also very acceptable. I hope you continue to keep up the good work! And good luck also with school stuff!!
Spoiler enthüllenVery good start honestly so much better than other tensura fics hard to find one that isn’t a 1 for 1 plot line even tho this is close it’s still better than others for the character development please don’t drop this author Also where’s her horse ain’t she supposed to have her horse?
Eu estava interessada. Mas quando vi a Tag Yuri. Desisti. Não sou fã de Yuri👍____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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please don't drop, I love stories where the MC becomes Artotia and there's not enough good tensura fanfics. this is the best of both worlds.
This is some kind of madhouse, he is gradually becoming stupid and her IQ is decreasing 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
Spoiler enthüllenEasy to read, enjoyable and interesting. Can't wait for more! Hope it keeps updating regurarly and getting interesting as it has so far........
Gave it a 3 as I didn't read it and didn't want to be a d**k but this is just geh. Why read about a dude willingly turning into a woman, straight up geh
Se tarda dos capítulos solo para dar mucho contexto que al final no importa sobre su muerte y sobre como consigo sus poderes, no deja claro si es hombre o mujer el mc además se supone que va a otro mundo a vivir así que debería cambiar la obra original no literalmente solo cambiar cosas ligeras sin cambiar básicamente nada solo sigue al protagonista original sin hacer nada para cambiar algo, no sigue lo que debería ser un rey o reina por que como dije nunca deja claro si es hombre o mujer básicamente es solo una copia con un mc que no cambia nada solo existe [img=faceslap]
niceee, i hope you're not drop this novel, and the crazy is the heroine is shuna, I hope the update is faster
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Spoiler enthülleni concur that I would love to keep reading this, would you be so kind as to keep have the will and strength to wright, safe travels knowledge spreader.
She got no other benefits from combining 3 most powerful Artoria pendragon versions other than just becoming a God-dragon hybrid. I was expecting MC will have Artoria's skill sets. But she had to buy every skills and weapon, then what was the point of the random draw. Also the dialogue between MC with Rimuru feels like written by a 10 years old
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There are some typos here and there but overall the writing quality is great! I also really really REALLY like the character design and how Artoria is blunt to Rimuru and corrects his wrongs (if that makes any sense).She also gives good advices so +1 point! The slight changes here and there is also very acceptable. I hope you continue to keep up the good work! And good luck also with school stuff!!
Spoiler enthüllenVery good start honestly so much better than other tensura fics hard to find one that isn’t a 1 for 1 plot line even tho this is close it’s still better than others for the character development please don’t drop this author Also where’s her horse ain’t she supposed to have her horse?
Eu estava interessada. Mas quando vi a Tag Yuri. Desisti. Não sou fã de Yuri👍____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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please don't drop, I love stories where the MC becomes Artotia and there's not enough good tensura fanfics. this is the best of both worlds.
This is some kind of madhouse, he is gradually becoming stupid and her IQ is decreasing 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
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