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Never ever read that shit. At the start MC was fun everything was unique (ignoring weak MC) later on mc became more dumb and dumb,finally for the sake of plot he gave most dangerous weapon he have. TO FATUI yes right just read 41/42. chapters to decide worth the read or not Im gonna lose my mind to many 5*reviews.Too much Korean Drama inspired. Potential wasted just don't read ıt will destroy u
It's actually pretty interesting, easy to digest the idea, good plot(please at least limit harems) and the story is overall good. Spoiler (below) 👇 when Kenshin died to dottore I was like "what?" please I'm begging you to bring him
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THIS IS PEAK while the author said its a no fighting fic and mc is weak or some shit, honestly the mc is a total menace.. even when he was a child or when he grow up, mc has steel balls and a hachiman mouth.. while in the first chapters where he was a child he was weak but thats because he wasnt knowledgeable about his own abilities. dont hesitate to read it because even if the mc doesnt have a vision or a system , he has his own abilities that op on its own.. its no more genshin impact , its KENSHIN IMPACT! can you fight a boar? kenshin :"no way in the hell boar's are too strong" so you cant fight an archon right? also kenshin" nah...I'd win" i recommend to at least try 10 chaptersand youll be hooked with the PEAK too good work author-san creating the peak!!
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una hermosa historia que mescla la comedia, el drama y el romance espero leer la continuacion. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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This was a good book and a great story. I love your writing and I am glad he is still alive in some fashion. I can't wait to read even more.
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I really liked this fic, especially the childhood phase, for me it was the most fun, but I thought the author extended it too much with too many chapters, while the other phases of Mc's life weren't shown much in my opinion. The other things I didn't like and found strange in the fic were him losing his sight and him having a beautiful and special eye but that can only see souls, the other was the author forced the plot like Ei's decree and the dragon at the beginning with Lumine, one thing I missed was the MC not meeting Furina, and the harem, like after Sara declares herself, how can there be a 2-year time jump and the MC didn't have a date with anyone? And the last thing could have been fixed was that I felt the MC didn't develop his power much, here are some ideas that the author can use. shock to the soul could be through the eyes of the MC or as a shock wave, control puppets through fragments of the MC's soul as Dottore did, and finally the world of Rwby perfectly matches the MC especially the power of the Schnee family for him to learn the author can make this world exist somewhere in the Star Rail universe and the MC feels the location or someone tells him the other is through the anime it can exist and in this life to improve his power he can read and watch anything that helps him develop his power. I hope the author reads this comment I really liked the story and I hope you finish it.
This fanfic is absolutely beautiful, the best GI fanfic I've seen on this app. If you make an original story I'll definitely support you, i love your writing.
This is what a peak fiction looks like. Story started entertaining and engaging, although I didn't like the liyue 1st part I still give it the credit of being relevant, with monstat part being a cerey on cake. Inazuma part got the true crown man the story has little that can be impoved upon and that tells the writing quality.
this was a great book it give me many laugh and smile the last book that give me that many laugh and smile was annihalition maker on DXD
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read.Even though the mc is weak at the beginning he gains power later on that makes him one of the strongest in Teyvat.The interactions between the characters are some of the best things about this fic,the characters feel alive and the mc has a fun and enjoyable personality.
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NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha. NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha.NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha.NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha.
HONEST REVIEW!! First thing first I want to thank the author for bringing this amazing story to life. What I thought was a brain rot crack fic turned out to be genuinely one of my favorite stories I came across on this app. World/Charater development: the world is Genshin but where many would start at cannon with lumine/aither arriving and use already existing personality’s to create a plot the author started Years before cannon and beacuse of this was able to flesh out many character personality’s and make them feel as real as anyone else. Each person introduced feels alive with backstory’s that match there personality’s to the point where not once did it feel out of character even if it they are diffrent from cannon. My thoughts on the MC: I thought at first I was gonna have a hard time likeing a weak mc since I generally like strong/op mc’s but to my surprise from the start I couldn’t NOT like the mc. He was funny, likeable and smart about the way he did things. In the beginning he was immature and funny, then he became a reliable person who pranks others, and after that he became mature but still kept his mischievous nature and it didn’t feel overdone. I never once thought I didn’t like the mc and there were many times he surprised me. Even though the mc was weak he didn’t really feel like it, anything that he couldn’t beat with strenght he would outsmart and even if he couldn’t win he was never put in a truely disadvantageous situation where he couldn’t work his way around with a little help. The mc IS NOT A REINCARNATED PERSON! He is just a normal boy born with a unique ability that shaped who is was. And I loved it. Story development: Before starting the story the author warns people -Mc is Weak till around chapter 90+ -This is a crack fic/ Slice of life with little to no fights until chapter 90+ They didn’t lie it is genuinely like that till 90+ but it is not bad you barely notice how weak the mc is because he never lets himself be in a truely bad spot and if needed has backup from powerful people. From the start it is a crack fic like we were told and it never truely felt to be too much. The author mixed crack with plot so well that you are never bored with either. Even when you hit chapter 90 there are still crack moments you get to enjoy with the new action added into the story. This story never left me bored and always added new elements to keep the reader interested. The mc’s power while not strong at the start felt special and he never felt like a simple background character. Now 90+ he can use said ability to become a genuine threat to whoever tries him and I love it. The shift between weak to strong doesn’t feel unearned. Everytime he got a small power up it was either through his own effort or his sacrifice. OVERALL: I loved this story and I will wait as long as it takes for the author to continue. Genuinly my top 10 in this app.
Excellent en écriture et en histoire j'ai adorerait et en attente de la suite 👍❤️ et grande attente pour la suite de l'histoire et continue comme ça
This is the best fanfic story I have ever read, I hope for a continuation so that MC can meet his family again. I really felt how these characters lived in this story, I was laughing so hard at the beginning and sad at the end.
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Wow! this took three days, even during work, to read this masterpiece? The adrenaline, excitement, and comedy are a perfect blend. Out of hundreds of fanfics, yours has blown me away. Your characters are so vivid – it's like I know them personally. And your original protagonist? Absolute perfection. The ending was a roller coaster, and that twist? Genius! The way you captured the story, the characters, their relationships... it's masterful storytelling. Please don't leave us hanging – this fanfic you've created deserves so much more!
I just want to say that I hardly if ever write reviews on this app,but this story is just so good I strongly recommend to everyone in this app to give this a try. the way the author wrote this is just so entertaining and engaging,the characters are adequately fleshed out, the world background is outstanding,the story development is Great. this story is akin to aged wine, the longer it goes the better it gets I can hardly wait for the chapters to come. this is all I want to say in this review and Author.. Thank You for the great story and I hope you continue to write this masterpiece with this consistent quality. I hope you have a Grand day.
Just a briliant Genshin fanfic that will hopefully soon, turn to HSR for a while. Honestly very few novels made me laugh so hard and cry so hard. Great read. I loved it.
fracking beautiful, i want more anyway the ff is one of the best if not the best genshin impact fanfic , best fanfic I've read this year
I know I'm a pain, but I will write it here too, so you are warned. This is NOT a fighting fic, despite what it sounds like, he won't fight until chapters 90+. It's supposed to be a fun fic, with some exaggerations with dramatic purposes. I am writing chapter 96, so I won't be able to change many things even if I want to. If you still decide to go forward, enjoy.
Never ever read that shit. At the start MC was fun everything was unique (ignoring weak MC) later on mc became more dumb and dumb,finally for the sake of plot he gave most dangerous weapon he have. TO FATUI yes right just read 41/42. chapters to decide worth the read or not Im gonna lose my mind to many 5*reviews.Too much Korean Drama inspired. Potential wasted just don't read ıt will destroy u
It's actually pretty interesting, easy to digest the idea, good plot(please at least limit harems) and the story is overall good. Spoiler (below) 👇 when Kenshin died to dottore I was like "what?" please I'm begging you to bring him
Spoiler enthüllen THIS IS PEAK while the author said its a no fighting fic and mc is weak or some shit, honestly the mc is a total menace.. even when he was a child or when he grow up, mc has steel balls and a hachiman mouth.. while in the first chapters where he was a child he was weak but thats because he wasnt knowledgeable about his own abilities. dont hesitate to read it because even if the mc doesnt have a vision or a system , he has his own abilities that op on its own.. its no more genshin impact , its KENSHIN IMPACT! can you fight a boar? kenshin :"no way in the hell boar's are too strong" so you cant fight an archon right? also kenshin" nah...I'd win" i recommend to at least try 10 chaptersand youll be hooked with the PEAK too good work author-san creating the peak!!
when will you return [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
una hermosa historia que mescla la comedia, el drama y el romance espero leer la continuacion. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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This was a good book and a great story. I love your writing and I am glad he is still alive in some fashion. I can't wait to read even more.
Spoiler enthüllen I really liked this fic, especially the childhood phase, for me it was the most fun, but I thought the author extended it too much with too many chapters, while the other phases of Mc's life weren't shown much in my opinion. The other things I didn't like and found strange in the fic were him losing his sight and him having a beautiful and special eye but that can only see souls, the other was the author forced the plot like Ei's decree and the dragon at the beginning with Lumine, one thing I missed was the MC not meeting Furina, and the harem, like after Sara declares herself, how can there be a 2-year time jump and the MC didn't have a date with anyone? And the last thing could have been fixed was that I felt the MC didn't develop his power much, here are some ideas that the author can use. shock to the soul could be through the eyes of the MC or as a shock wave, control puppets through fragments of the MC's soul as Dottore did, and finally the world of Rwby perfectly matches the MC especially the power of the Schnee family for him to learn the author can make this world exist somewhere in the Star Rail universe and the MC feels the location or someone tells him the other is through the anime it can exist and in this life to improve his power he can read and watch anything that helps him develop his power. I hope the author reads this comment I really liked the story and I hope you finish it.
This fanfic is absolutely beautiful, the best GI fanfic I've seen on this app. If you make an original story I'll definitely support you, i love your writing.
This is what a peak fiction looks like. Story started entertaining and engaging, although I didn't like the liyue 1st part I still give it the credit of being relevant, with monstat part being a cerey on cake. Inazuma part got the true crown man the story has little that can be impoved upon and that tells the writing quality.
this was a great book it give me many laugh and smile the last book that give me that many laugh and smile was annihalition maker on DXD
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read.Even though the mc is weak at the beginning he gains power later on that makes him one of the strongest in Teyvat.The interactions between the characters are some of the best things about this fic,the characters feel alive and the mc has a fun and enjoyable personality.
Spoiler enthüllen NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha. NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha.NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha.NOT A FIGHTING FIC, WEAK MC. but has a harem tag? Bwuhahahaha.
HONEST REVIEW!! First thing first I want to thank the author for bringing this amazing story to life. What I thought was a brain rot crack fic turned out to be genuinely one of my favorite stories I came across on this app. World/Charater development: the world is Genshin but where many would start at cannon with lumine/aither arriving and use already existing personality’s to create a plot the author started Years before cannon and beacuse of this was able to flesh out many character personality’s and make them feel as real as anyone else. Each person introduced feels alive with backstory’s that match there personality’s to the point where not once did it feel out of character even if it they are diffrent from cannon. My thoughts on the MC: I thought at first I was gonna have a hard time likeing a weak mc since I generally like strong/op mc’s but to my surprise from the start I couldn’t NOT like the mc. He was funny, likeable and smart about the way he did things. In the beginning he was immature and funny, then he became a reliable person who pranks others, and after that he became mature but still kept his mischievous nature and it didn’t feel overdone. I never once thought I didn’t like the mc and there were many times he surprised me. Even though the mc was weak he didn’t really feel like it, anything that he couldn’t beat with strenght he would outsmart and even if he couldn’t win he was never put in a truely disadvantageous situation where he couldn’t work his way around with a little help. The mc IS NOT A REINCARNATED PERSON! He is just a normal boy born with a unique ability that shaped who is was. And I loved it. Story development: Before starting the story the author warns people -Mc is Weak till around chapter 90+ -This is a crack fic/ Slice of life with little to no fights until chapter 90+ They didn’t lie it is genuinely like that till 90+ but it is not bad you barely notice how weak the mc is because he never lets himself be in a truely bad spot and if needed has backup from powerful people. From the start it is a crack fic like we were told and it never truely felt to be too much. The author mixed crack with plot so well that you are never bored with either. Even when you hit chapter 90 there are still crack moments you get to enjoy with the new action added into the story. This story never left me bored and always added new elements to keep the reader interested. The mc’s power while not strong at the start felt special and he never felt like a simple background character. Now 90+ he can use said ability to become a genuine threat to whoever tries him and I love it. The shift between weak to strong doesn’t feel unearned. Everytime he got a small power up it was either through his own effort or his sacrifice. OVERALL: I loved this story and I will wait as long as it takes for the author to continue. Genuinly my top 10 in this app.
Excellent en écriture et en histoire j'ai adorerait et en attente de la suite 👍❤️ et grande attente pour la suite de l'histoire et continue comme ça
This is the best fanfic story I have ever read, I hope for a continuation so that MC can meet his family again. I really felt how these characters lived in this story, I was laughing so hard at the beginning and sad at the end.
Spoiler enthüllen Wow! this took three days, even during work, to read this masterpiece? The adrenaline, excitement, and comedy are a perfect blend. Out of hundreds of fanfics, yours has blown me away. Your characters are so vivid – it's like I know them personally. And your original protagonist? Absolute perfection. The ending was a roller coaster, and that twist? Genius! The way you captured the story, the characters, their relationships... it's masterful storytelling. Please don't leave us hanging – this fanfic you've created deserves so much more!
I just want to say that I hardly if ever write reviews on this app,but this story is just so good I strongly recommend to everyone in this app to give this a try. the way the author wrote this is just so entertaining and engaging,the characters are adequately fleshed out, the world background is outstanding,the story development is Great. this story is akin to aged wine, the longer it goes the better it gets I can hardly wait for the chapters to come. this is all I want to say in this review and Author.. Thank You for the great story and I hope you continue to write this masterpiece with this consistent quality. I hope you have a Grand day.
Just a briliant Genshin fanfic that will hopefully soon, turn to HSR for a while. Honestly very few novels made me laugh so hard and cry so hard. Great read. I loved it.
fracking beautiful, i want more anyway the ff is one of the best if not the best genshin impact fanfic , best fanfic I've read this year
I know I'm a pain, but I will write it here too, so you are warned. This is NOT a fighting fic, despite what it sounds like, he won't fight until chapters 90+. It's supposed to be a fun fic, with some exaggerations with dramatic purposes. I am writing chapter 96, so I won't be able to change many things even if I want to. If you still decide to go forward, enjoy.