Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)

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Echo_Fox

My biggest issue with this story is how the author uses too much detail for every little thing. I don’t need to know how the desks are arranged in a room, I don’t need to know about the posters on the wall of a classroom, And I don’t need to know that the chairs in the classroom are comfortable, unless the character outright states it when he sits on it. There are more examples of this throughout the 11 chapters that I read.

LV 14

Zaddy_7709

Warning, mc in this is severly nerfed. SPOILER BELOW Mc unlocks 3 tomoe sharingan at 7, then loses to a random 8 year old hyuga in a taijutsu match. His chakra is "nearing chunin level" while he's a genin, he knows no genjutsu at this point in the story, sharingan has gone from copying ninjutsu to giving a tutorial on how the jutsu works. If you've read the Wind Demon fanfic it feels like the author wanted to go for the same direction but completely failed to understand why Wind Demon worked. The mc there was some random who was talented at wind release and thats all, here the mc has 2 of the most busted bloodlines, and training from a jonin since a young age but still shruggles to be barely above average.

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Draken_blitz

I can see that the author is taking inspiration from Naruto: the wind calamity and that's not a bad thing. The story by itself is good and the writing quality is much better than the usual web novel fanfics but its still not the best as in some parts of the fanfic the author makes the mc really stupid and give away some of his info about the ms sharingan when the mc wouldn't ever do that as he is very cautious. Other than that its been great and hopefully this doesn't somehow turn into a harem

LV 4

That_Annoying_guy

I am the fifth review

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Facez_

pls tell me u will change the original events like obito or not? as I don't want to waste my time reading the same thing as watching the anime u see.

LV 4

YourDad_

There is not much to say since there are very few chapters but it seems a promising novel. Let's just hope it doesn't get dropped 😔😔

LV 1

Valentina_2712

i feel that the MC is too weak, and the author writes too many long-winded stories, lots of unimportant information and nonsense, honestly im very disappointed, i've been waiting so long (into my bookmark) till the chapter got hundreds more 😥😥

LV 4

Molten_Potato

Would have been better if the mc actually showed any uzumaki traits like boosted chakra vitality and regeneration

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Rend0rf

meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh

LV 12

ilove_3260

The love interest better not be a OC, if it’s is drop your ip

LV 1

aadi_raj

Another ai assisted author with a bit more indulgance in the story than the rest. Ai assisted anyway. 4 stars is most I can possibly give. If you read a fanfic with a bit generic storyline, overtly unnecessary detailing of completely non important stuff, no foreshadowing, no recalling, no hype, no major character development just pure unadulterated generic writing then go ahead. This one though is a bit less generic than most

LV 4

go_zpace

It is a good read. Author is definitely improving.

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Goblin_1000

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LV 4

MMEStudio

I like your rewrite it’s very good to be honest I know about the no harem but it will be better if but a romantic sub plot I mean the grind never stops is okay but we need something different in between About his Uzumaki bloodline won’t he awaken kaguia mind eye it’s very powerful ability it’s really bad that the mc doesn’t own last thing if u could make the romantic partner a senju if u are going to create a romantic sub plot

LV 12

jakom

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LV 11

Abel254

Great work. Thank you for not dropping this one, at least yet.

LV 4

Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee