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It was good until the Multiverse stuff. Mc was kinda op in mha but it was some kind of a reasonable and had an interesting story. But, One blink and mc now had children that are protecting the universe and act so close with him. And suddenly a massive war is waged and he is the King. Honestly, the mha part and naruto part looks like they are written by different authors.
author can you give me the details of all the powers that he has and given by you and stealed by him and how it works please
The grammet needs work story takes a random turn wen the multiverse was introduced im not saying the multiverse was a bad thing but the way it just popped outta nowher wen mha was still in its beginning is terrible the side characters have good background i dont like the choose between body or soul thing wen we all know he was gonna choose his soul 🤷🏾♂️ill update if i comback
I was pretty cool but got unnecessarily edgy and weird. If your into that then give it a read, but if you can’t stand cringe then I’d look elsewhere.
the title is missleading, the synopsis says multiverse but the title say MHA, unless i missed it it says genderbend but the mc stays male(i assumed the mc would be the girl in the cover)
The grammar needs work as it’s like someone was typing in a hurry with the occasional misspelling of a word.
Author review, here you can ask any and all questions i may or may not answer 😉
It was good until the Multiverse stuff. Mc was kinda op in mha but it was some kind of a reasonable and had an interesting story. But, One blink and mc now had children that are protecting the universe and act so close with him. And suddenly a massive war is waged and he is the King. Honestly, the mha part and naruto part looks like they are written by different authors.
author can you give me the details of all the powers that he has and given by you and stealed by him and how it works please
The grammet needs work story takes a random turn wen the multiverse was introduced im not saying the multiverse was a bad thing but the way it just popped outta nowher wen mha was still in its beginning is terrible the side characters have good background i dont like the choose between body or soul thing wen we all know he was gonna choose his soul 🤷🏾♂️ill update if i comback
I was pretty cool but got unnecessarily edgy and weird. If your into that then give it a read, but if you can’t stand cringe then I’d look elsewhere.
the title is missleading, the synopsis says multiverse but the title say MHA, unless i missed it it says genderbend but the mc stays male(i assumed the mc would be the girl in the cover)
The grammar needs work as it’s like someone was typing in a hurry with the occasional misspelling of a word.
Author review, here you can ask any and all questions i may or may not answer 😉
Rewrite underway , I messed up bigtime with the multiverse