Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water

LV 15

NineTailedPhoenix

it's a good story decently paced with some rougher areas around world building. my biggest gripe is the ages thing. everyone lives to 10,000. what ages is it normal for people to have children in the world the main character is interacting with people at minimum 1,300 but none of them have kids even though they mature at 18 it seems.

LV 15

JPNovelFan

Shameless author giving myself a 5 star review to help promote my novel. Doing my best to try and attempt at least one chapter a day, but please forgive me if I experience writer’s block and can’t achieve that. I’m doing my best. 🙇

LV 3

Lord_Sleepless_

Love the concept, and the way the book was written(The style of the book), and I also really like how u released 12 chapters in just one day, that one won me in, on top of that the synopsis was pretty nice. Really love the book keep up the good work author!

LV 4

OGC

Extremely good story! The plot is well thought out. The descriptions and writing quality are out of this world. If you happen to come across this review, give the novel a try!

LV 15

GooseOverlord

I’ll keep this short, as I’m not very far in the book. The age of the characters is a very big issue for me, 8 year olds don’t act like that, shit sometimes 18 year old don’t act like these characters. The age really pulls you out of the narrative. I’m trying to slog through these chapters because the idea of the story seems interesting but I really do hate reading about children doing these types of things.

LV 11

RingofStone

great world and character design. i can't wait to see where the story goes.

LV 11

RingofStone

Great writing and an inspired story. Can't wait for more.

LV 1

ThirdLegSan

Very slow, if you're not a fan of super long descriptions and wordcount filler, this isnt the book for you. Author needs to work on making the characters dialogue feel natural and less robotic.

LV 15

Frequency_420

Book is really good love the way it’s unfolding so far can’t wait till the mc gets stronger and the battles evolve to a whole new level

LV 3

Cherry_May_2682

I rate this book a five-starThe plot is fascinating. If you're looking for a great fantasy story, search no further.

Very interesting, mesmerizing from start to finish. Can't wait to see the potential of this. Perfect for fans of fantasy looking for a captivating read that will leave them wanting more.

LV 13

Megabyte

An intriguing story that caught me by surprise. I've read my fair share of novels but this one is really good. I love reading novels with little to no grammatical errors and this novel has that. the world building is amazing and it is a non harem book what else are you waiting for, just hop in and enjoy the ride. Thanks you so much for such a wonderful read.

LV 1

NovelGod_Dao

Good characters and descriptions. Way to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uaekjhp9 aeiokt 8oiyutnepsixzyhiuotha oyATIEBJp; eiauhtgtgdkj uyuklaET pouhteiul uyil

LV 3

Sky_novel_lover

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