Avatar: Third Son of The Fire Lord

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David_Black120

I like the concept of the novel, but it comes with one really big flaw. the mc acts nothing like a dragon should. the mc is way to soft, childish, and emotional. lacks the pride and arrogance you would think a dragon would have. the mc is royalty among dragons. He should be out fighting, asserting his dominance over the world. instead, he adopts a child and plays daddy. very disappointing

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FujiwaraNoMokou

It is honestly confusing. Not the Plot, but the way the Author writes. When it comes to the Dialogue "this" is better than -this- IMO

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SalveYing

I just finished reading the first 15 chapters. I love the character and enjoy their interactions with Azula, Ozai, and the world in general. I'm fascinated by how their actions and powers are changing the world. I hope you continue with this wonderful fanfic.

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Marcia_05

Es algo nuevo, brillante y acogedor, la forma en que tomas los puntos espirituales del mundo Avatar y los usas de tal forma que se acomoden a la historia es excelente. Lastima que no tiene el reconocimiento que merece. Sin embargo, por mi parte seguiré apoyando tu obra.

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Cosmic

its a translation. doesn't use "parenthesis" and is written in first person instead of third person

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ShadowGovernment

an incredibly poor translation with a good plot

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Alex_Cech

the translation is not good but thats a problem with all chineses novel translations. pronouns are thrown at the wall and whatever sticks sticks. the one thing i would recommend to anyone trying to translate a chinses novel is to just take the original run it through chat gpt to translate then, turn that into the bones of the novel and write the rest yourself. chinese novels seem to to be the oil to english speakers water, they dont mix. the way characters behave talk and the ideas about people and the world tend to be really difficult and often confusing for english speakers/ readers so my recommendation for any chinese novel translator is to either stop or take the idea and write their own version. just like the chinsese do to other pieces of media

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Kodai13

Honestly, I love this fanfic, all of the chapters have a really good redaction and I can feel like I'm being part of the history, is too immersive and gives a good time reading it, I recommend.

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Lyle_Herbst

Amazing story. Keep up the good work and do more story with Azula as FL and main love interests

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Kyran_Ambrosius

perfect five stars it’s an amazing story that keeps me wanting more. I’ve read almost up to the most recent chapter and just a day.

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Kingleviathan0316

I need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Ebo_Eboo

El mejor fanfic de avatar sin un mc reencarnado, muy interesante como estás desarrollando la historia y como se van creando las relaciones entre los personajes, esperemos no dejes caer esta serie es muy buena

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Don_Diegow

A very good work, interesting plot that evolves pleasantly, I hope it continues for a long time. Congratulations. A very good work, interesting plot that evolves pleasantly, I hope it continues for a long time. Congratulations.