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Not as good as I thought, but not too bad. For those who are interested because JJK is not recommended that much. Focuses on the HP universe more than just adding curse power, but it is not that outstanding. The author tried to combine the power system between curse and magic together. Which is a completely different system. It makes the thing that creates the power system that has no highlight, which seems unnecessary. In the main character section, the author tried to create a character who is "smart" and strong since childhood, but no, he is not smart at all. The power that he has is inconsistent. The more he acts like a puppet who is manipulated, there are many unnecessary things. Including the family that the author tried to force in, creating relationships and emotions that do not really exist. What did he get after entering the family besides money and power, which comes with many problems and burdens? The power that he has did not increase after entering the family. Do not mention knowledge. No. There is no such point in the story except to specify the family history. ... This point, I will not talk about it anymore. It is more than enough.
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I don't like it when they use short names, it irritates me. ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Srsly, its one of the best fanfics ive read u want another----> demon slayer- silent journey smthg is top tier FF. the concept may hv been fcked but its much better than China haven't read much but well here we go
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ok so let face elephant in the room , this story is amazing, the character and politics in this story is so much that you can even consider this story a stand alone novel , the world is portrait as a cruel, bloody place that is in Verge of apocalypse nicely done
Whoaa this is very good uhh… research material. I have similar idea and this will come in handy. Thank you so much, Author! Appreciate that
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Great story. I wanted to subscribe in patreon but it is too expensive for my country's money, though I will buy it when I have enough money to spare. Though I would be happy if you make a discount for a limited time as I will be able to buy it immedaitly.
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La meilleure fan-fiction sur Harry potter les personnages, le Contexte mondial, la fusion du monde de jjk et hp tout , tout est cohérent et à un sens sans oublier le développement des personnages secondaires chacun avec son propre développement, je conseille fortement .
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La historia en si tiene un mundo bien construido y explicado, lo único que puedo criticar es la duración de los capítulos pero lo demás es exelente
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I do like this fanfic story. I request author to publish this fanfic on various other platforms like scribblehub, fanfiction, ao3, etc. To be honest I don't like Webnovel navigation system, & reading interface.
One of the most striking things about this work is the lack of what I call "useful filler." I’m not referring to the kind you find in Naruto (God have mercy), but to that layer of interaction and detail that enriches the experience and, in this case, seems to be missing. Although the author succeeds in creating an interesting world, it feels like something extra is missing to make the story more immersive. Comparing it to *Harry Potter*, for example, in the school life at Hogwarts, the teachers have a more active role, and the interactions between them and the students help bring the environment to life. There could be more interactions between secondary characters or more detailed descriptions of the setting, especially when crossing between two worlds. (And I’m talking about the more personal life of the MC, not just the Black House and their interactions with politics.) But I don't know, I'm just giving my opinion. 🤷♂️
I think this is one of the best fanfics I've read, I would like more chapters, I love the mix of jjk and hp, it's a great idea. I think this is one of the best fanfics I've read, I would like more chapters, I love the mix of jjk and hp, it's a great idea.
A very nice fanfic . Love it . The character development is nice and storyline is progressive. Overall good work by the author . Just don’t make other characters in the same league as the mc
I like this MC from the very beginning of the fanfic but I started liking more after the introduction of Rose who by the way is a female version of Harry and combination of Gojo but in a bad way to put in in simple terms Rose is just a overhyped character who doesn't know her place and insufferable . Sometime I feel like the Author is just delaying any power up MC should have gotten because he wanted to show readers how Rose is strong and likable character but ,nah it's not working My opinion of this fanfic would have been so high of Tose just doesn't exist to begin with
This is one of the best fanfics i have read till now!!!! It’s simply amazing , i m literally impressed and looking forward to the story. Pls don’t abandon this.. one of the best fics till now💯
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A história é muito boa, o autor conseguiu juntar Harry Potter e Jujutsu kaisen de um jeito excelente. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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Not as good as I thought, but not too bad. For those who are interested because JJK is not recommended that much. Focuses on the HP universe more than just adding curse power, but it is not that outstanding. The author tried to combine the power system between curse and magic together. Which is a completely different system. It makes the thing that creates the power system that has no highlight, which seems unnecessary. In the main character section, the author tried to create a character who is "smart" and strong since childhood, but no, he is not smart at all. The power that he has is inconsistent. The more he acts like a puppet who is manipulated, there are many unnecessary things. Including the family that the author tried to force in, creating relationships and emotions that do not really exist. What did he get after entering the family besides money and power, which comes with many problems and burdens? The power that he has did not increase after entering the family. Do not mention knowledge. No. There is no such point in the story except to specify the family history. ... This point, I will not talk about it anymore. It is more than enough.
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I don't like it when they use short names, it irritates me. ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Srsly, its one of the best fanfics ive read u want another----> demon slayer- silent journey smthg is top tier FF. the concept may hv been fcked but its much better than China haven't read much but well here we go
Este fanfic es simplemente jodido peak ........................................................................[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
ok so let face elephant in the room , this story is amazing, the character and politics in this story is so much that you can even consider this story a stand alone novel , the world is portrait as a cruel, bloody place that is in Verge of apocalypse nicely done
Whoaa this is very good uhh… research material. I have similar idea and this will come in handy. Thank you so much, Author! Appreciate that
Spoiler enthüllen Great story. I wanted to subscribe in patreon but it is too expensive for my country's money, though I will buy it when I have enough money to spare. Though I would be happy if you make a discount for a limited time as I will be able to buy it immedaitly.
Один из лучших фф по Гарри Поттеру который я читал, как же я жду продолжения вы не представляете [img=gift] удачи в вам в будущих работах [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
La meilleure fan-fiction sur Harry potter les personnages, le Contexte mondial, la fusion du monde de jjk et hp tout , tout est cohérent et à un sens sans oublier le développement des personnages secondaires chacun avec son propre développement, je conseille fortement .
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La historia en si tiene un mundo bien construido y explicado, lo único que puedo criticar es la duración de los capítulos pero lo demás es exelente
Spoiler enthüllen I do like this fanfic story. I request author to publish this fanfic on various other platforms like scribblehub, fanfiction, ao3, etc. To be honest I don't like Webnovel navigation system, & reading interface.
One of the most striking things about this work is the lack of what I call "useful filler." I’m not referring to the kind you find in Naruto (God have mercy), but to that layer of interaction and detail that enriches the experience and, in this case, seems to be missing. Although the author succeeds in creating an interesting world, it feels like something extra is missing to make the story more immersive. Comparing it to *Harry Potter*, for example, in the school life at Hogwarts, the teachers have a more active role, and the interactions between them and the students help bring the environment to life. There could be more interactions between secondary characters or more detailed descriptions of the setting, especially when crossing between two worlds. (And I’m talking about the more personal life of the MC, not just the Black House and their interactions with politics.) But I don't know, I'm just giving my opinion. 🤷♂️
I think this is one of the best fanfics I've read, I would like more chapters, I love the mix of jjk and hp, it's a great idea. I think this is one of the best fanfics I've read, I would like more chapters, I love the mix of jjk and hp, it's a great idea.
A very nice fanfic . Love it . The character development is nice and storyline is progressive. Overall good work by the author . Just don’t make other characters in the same league as the mc
I like this MC from the very beginning of the fanfic but I started liking more after the introduction of Rose who by the way is a female version of Harry and combination of Gojo but in a bad way to put in in simple terms Rose is just a overhyped character who doesn't know her place and insufferable . Sometime I feel like the Author is just delaying any power up MC should have gotten because he wanted to show readers how Rose is strong and likable character but ,nah it's not working My opinion of this fanfic would have been so high of Tose just doesn't exist to begin with
This is one of the best fanfics i have read till now!!!! It’s simply amazing , i m literally impressed and looking forward to the story. Pls don’t abandon this.. one of the best fics till now💯
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A história é muito boa, o autor conseguiu juntar Harry Potter e Jujutsu kaisen de um jeito excelente. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]