[DXDxJJK] - The Father of Devils

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MidWinterSnow

Shameless Author-san here. This is my first book, I hope it matches you guy's expectations. I am still learning so I will improve as I continue writing this. But I have confidence that my current skill in writing is still palatable so don't hesitate to give it a try. Thank You :)))

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IYoursTruly

I Need Moar! DxD-JJK-(LOTM(power system)) He start as a devil so no trash slave MC. It's starting slowly tho, the JJK part is going to show itself around chapter 20 acording to the author. Ah and he is already sequence 8 (chp 21) so kinda fast.

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Morningstars_Hell

Eww why doesn't it have GENDER BENDER tag. Listen i don't care if his actual gender is still male and he is using female body 'temporary' and can change back everytime after work but still it should have a Gender Bending tag. The amount of disgust i felt when my unaware self read this... sigh. And when some random NPC tried to flirt(?) With him/her(?) i almost vomited... Maybe its because i always self insert or atleast emotionally attached to MC of any story i have read that's why i only read novel with Male MC & I can't imagine even dressing female let alone being one. Fk this ruin my day, i was just here for some light-hearted dxd oppai not this 💩

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_DEKIM_

In my opinion, the novel as a whole is meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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BoredCrow

it has its flaws but other than some small errors this story is one of the best on this platform at least. it might be because my brain has rotted from mtl but this Isa good high quality story. Read it if you like good stories and antagonistic mc's.

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Kalachri

I like it so far. I the way the worlds are mixed up seem logical, although the only negative i have so far is that if too many worlds are mixed together then i get lost among the characters. Other than that I enjoy this book very much... [current chapters: 18]

highly recommended✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅

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AmIReallyMe

Clearly a very well written fic. You attention to detail is truly impeccable. And the concept behind the novels is 🤌🤌🤌 Keep posting ND this will easily be top WebNovel in no time🥇🎖️🏆

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Lazren_Inkheart

I do like this novel. There are some aspects of it that I personally dislike, but I think other people would like. It's a crossover work that includes AU elements for that to work, and I think the blending of the worlds is pretty well done, definitely from a power system view. The part I dislike personally is that for at least for the first 30 chapters or so, it's more of an OC story than AU if you get what I mean. Most fanfiction are very canon compliant, which is something I don't like. Then, there are about 3 different levels of AU fics. Level 1 is labelled as AU but is really still a canon retelling with a new character involved. Level 2 is still based on canon events initially but eventually goes into another direction based on the accumulation of small changes. Level 3 has 2 different routes, where either they have the characters in a different setting or setting itself has a lot of massive differences. An OC story, in my view, is essentially a story that's not really relevant to any of the source material's plot, and that can fit any of those categories. And that's where I fell this story land mostly so far and that's fine within itself but I felt from both the synopsis and the first chapter the aim for the story was the crossover not random unnecessary drama. Like again, I'm not saying it wasn't well written, but that is not the perception that this novel gave as to what it was going to be. That's changed after around chapter 30, which I do like, but it then makes all those previous chapters essentially a very long prologue. Like everything up till he gets to Japan. The structure of the novel is weird because of that. If you were writing a completely new story, just using the setting or because of the crossover, multiple settings, that would be fine, but then why are you now interfering with the plot. And if the wasn't the intention, then you essentially have unnecessarily long prologue that could have easily been cut down by half if not more. With that being said, it's not like it was uninteresting, it definitely was, and the writing quality is very high quality, and besides the Lord of Mysteries aspect not being that well explained in comparison, the actual crossover worlds have been pretty well explained in how everything fits in together. I'm definitely going to keep on reading, and I recommend it to anyone who sees this to give it a go.

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MRCAT66

I really liked the story, it's quite different from the norm we see around here, and the MC really shows realism. You can read it without fear of having fun, I'm just upset that my novel can't pass yours in collection, now I understand hahaha. If you want, I invite you to read my novel, I'm below you in the collection ranking.

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Daoist4YHrB8

10/10.

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Giga_Weeb

author has done a great job tying the worlds together and creating a plot relevant to all of them. urge new readers to read past early sections where he unlocks Lotm power system which is a little confusing if you haven't seen it before but quickly becomes simple.

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akzhol04

interesting fanfic, I like it, I hope you continue writing ............................................................................................................................

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Kalachri

I havent read lotm but I like the book and the way it is progressing so far... The mc is a normal person that struggles to survive making the story realistic and enjoyable at the same time...

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Duke_of_Insanity

it was great but wasn't this supposed to be a JJK crossover not a Lord of The Mysteries crossover

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kosmas_kosmas

its still early but the story seems intresting.

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ASHBORN

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