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até o capítulo 38 ou 37 tava tudo ok, mas aí e fica "doente" por causa da magia sagrada, até aí tudo ok, mais aí o filha da puta do author nerfa o mc fazendo ele não poder curar o coração, SENDO QUE ELE TEM A PORRA DE UMA ENGRENAGEM SAGRADA QUE FAZ ELE TER CONTROLE TOTAL DO CORPO. é isso, obrigado por ler isso.
Las 3 estrellas están de más sinceramente el Mc al principio parece un perrito de la calle al que acaricias y te sigue acaso siempre buscando atención de rías jajaja me dio vergüenza sinceramente
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Dont undersatand why people reviw the story and havent even read more than the first few chapters or its based on the synopsis its honestly a solid novel cant complain
The mc seems to run a marathon in a simple walk. He seems to create plans and end up facing the positive and negative consequences to give the author a chance to develop his character, unfortunately this just gives us a chaotic MC that doesn't seem well presented. It's frustrating because the MC seems to get further and further away from the beginning of the story, as if the author wanted to create one type of MC at the beginning, only to give up halfway through and make it completely different. I liked the MC shown at the beginning of the story much more, comically foul-mouthed and a pervert softened by the intimacy built with the characters. It's not bad enough to give up on so I'll keep reading hoping for some improvement.
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good very very good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like this fanfic so far, as innotived a bleach tag I assume the Mc may die and end up in soul society or end up a hollow if this is a crossover or find a new heart somehow.
Spoiler enthüllen
it's a solid 3 because of his jokes and personality but side characters lack depth mean author fails to capture their personality but Mc is big brain I like it but this story has a lot of plot holes unexplained/ doesn't make sense aheem yes I am looking at you Sona sitri's book shelf. And also his plot of bringing Lucifer is kinda lackin. All in all a rewrite with definitive reasons for what he does would do wonders for this story. Note not saying it is bad or anything I've seen worse here but this story has sooo muccccch and muccch more potential than this and this review is solely based on read at ch33
This quality was unexpected, its has good comedic taste but knows when to take the situation seriously. Puts a good feeling in everything I've read so far and the main character has a brain to boot so come if your willing to deal with a bit of babe juggling
MC revealing his reincarnation to people he barely knows . and i hate stupid MCs .
Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] mmmmmmmccc manipulateur
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Woouuahah comme le MC a La trouille de issei , ou alors c l'auteur MDR [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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The MC is Issei's brother or close family what a boring cliché. I don't need to read any more of chapter 1 to know that it will be very bad [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The terrible grammar in the synopsis doesn't fill me with hope. Author, piece of advice, first impressions matter, so you should take your time writing a proper synopsis.
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This is really good. Honestly i am stumped that there are only 8 chapters, wish there were 100 more at least. The MC is cool, is reborn a year before canon, and knows what he's doing. He also has a direct connection to the main cast of DxD and is intelligent and fun. I can tell that most girls he actively interracts with have a degree of a crush on him.Issei exists, but only as trash to be ignored, who will be left with any leftovers MC doesn't care to court.Ofc, this author is no Rias or Akeno hater, so they are main girls ofc. As if girls of their caliber should be ignored in any DxD fic, over petty childish reasons.Can't wait for next chaps, and to find out what kind of Sacred Gear our MC has..Perhaps a Zanpakuto, since the theme is bleach? Or since he looks like teen Uchiha Madara, then maybe Sharingan with Susanoo and other eye powers? It really makes one wonder.
it's not really unique, unother than the sacred gear. which had really really great potential, but the author nerfed to hard to suddenly. the author has drawn out chapter's for far to long. how ever it does have okay characters, kinda. there is one pointless plot that just makes drama, guess what... it got threw away real fast. over all not a terrible novel however it's bad. turn of your brain while reading this and you'll have quite a good time surprisingly.
até o capítulo 38 ou 37 tava tudo ok, mas aí e fica "doente" por causa da magia sagrada, até aí tudo ok, mais aí o filha da puta do author nerfa o mc fazendo ele não poder curar o coração, SENDO QUE ELE TEM A PORRA DE UMA ENGRENAGEM SAGRADA QUE FAZ ELE TER CONTROLE TOTAL DO CORPO. é isso, obrigado por ler isso.
Las 3 estrellas están de más sinceramente el Mc al principio parece un perrito de la calle al que acaricias y te sigue acaso siempre buscando atención de rías jajaja me dio vergüenza sinceramente
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Dont undersatand why people reviw the story and havent even read more than the first few chapters or its based on the synopsis its honestly a solid novel cant complain
The mc seems to run a marathon in a simple walk. He seems to create plans and end up facing the positive and negative consequences to give the author a chance to develop his character, unfortunately this just gives us a chaotic MC that doesn't seem well presented. It's frustrating because the MC seems to get further and further away from the beginning of the story, as if the author wanted to create one type of MC at the beginning, only to give up halfway through and make it completely different. I liked the MC shown at the beginning of the story much more, comically foul-mouthed and a pervert softened by the intimacy built with the characters. It's not bad enough to give up on so I'll keep reading hoping for some improvement.
Honest review: [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
good very very good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like this fanfic so far, as innotived a bleach tag I assume the Mc may die and end up in soul society or end up a hollow if this is a crossover or find a new heart somehow.
Spoiler enthüllen it's a solid 3 because of his jokes and personality but side characters lack depth mean author fails to capture their personality but Mc is big brain I like it but this story has a lot of plot holes unexplained/ doesn't make sense aheem yes I am looking at you Sona sitri's book shelf. And also his plot of bringing Lucifer is kinda lackin. All in all a rewrite with definitive reasons for what he does would do wonders for this story. Note not saying it is bad or anything I've seen worse here but this story has sooo muccccch and muccch more potential than this and this review is solely based on read at ch33
This quality was unexpected, its has good comedic taste but knows when to take the situation seriously. Puts a good feeling in everything I've read so far and the main character has a brain to boot so come if your willing to deal with a bit of babe juggling
MC revealing his reincarnation to people he barely knows . and i hate stupid MCs .
Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] mmmmmmmccc manipulateur
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Woouuahah comme le MC a La trouille de issei , ou alors c l'auteur MDR [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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The MC is Issei's brother or close family what a boring cliché. I don't need to read any more of chapter 1 to know that it will be very bad [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The terrible grammar in the synopsis doesn't fill me with hope. Author, piece of advice, first impressions matter, so you should take your time writing a proper synopsis.
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This is really good. Honestly i am stumped that there are only 8 chapters, wish there were 100 more at least. The MC is cool, is reborn a year before canon, and knows what he's doing. He also has a direct connection to the main cast of DxD and is intelligent and fun. I can tell that most girls he actively interracts with have a degree of a crush on him.Issei exists, but only as trash to be ignored, who will be left with any leftovers MC doesn't care to court.Ofc, this author is no Rias or Akeno hater, so they are main girls ofc. As if girls of their caliber should be ignored in any DxD fic, over petty childish reasons.Can't wait for next chaps, and to find out what kind of Sacred Gear our MC has..Perhaps a Zanpakuto, since the theme is bleach? Or since he looks like teen Uchiha Madara, then maybe Sharingan with Susanoo and other eye powers? It really makes one wonder.
it's not really unique, unother than the sacred gear. which had really really great potential, but the author nerfed to hard to suddenly. the author has drawn out chapter's for far to long. how ever it does have okay characters, kinda. there is one pointless plot that just makes drama, guess what... it got threw away real fast. over all not a terrible novel however it's bad. turn of your brain while reading this and you'll have quite a good time surprisingly.