Infinite Evolution: The Multiverse Odyssey

LV 4

FinnsRevenge

2/3/3/3/3. Bro you don't need to separate every fking sentence with quotation marks if they're being said by the same person. It leads to bloat and confusion when you have 9 different quoted sentences. Also ffs, pick a name and stick with it already! Is his name Alex, Axel or Leo?? And another thing, the scene in the woods where he fought and killed a few guys with fire magic channeled through his sword and kissed the girl after? Having Lily immediately smell a woman on him is so fking cringe and ludicrous considering she should smell blood, metal and barbecue. Overall I cannot recommend this fic to anyone till author goes back through and edits the previous chapters

LV 1

darkwhite

truly a piece of primordial super ultra ppro trash ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

BeautifulBastard

We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do I (do I)A full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (say it)Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on)We know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (to say it)Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on)We know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you

LV 4

Hamid_Djafri

Come on, more chapters. Come on, more chapters. Thanks for the topic. More chapters. Come on

LV 3

Vengeful_Slave

Wow, honestly I am impressed by the level of dumbness in this novel like wow. Anyone who read more than a few chapter will recognize that it's bad and cringe and flat character with no personality. And the author probably delete reviews so yeah run my fellow readers.

LV 1

guarek03

Great story so far. More chapters please.................................................................................................................

LV 4

West_Wood_9581

Nice plot and good character development and Op mc

LV 1

david200

interesante historia [img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 1

Diki_Maulana_4930

Nice,............... I like this...................................................................................... ....................................

LV 3

BlackBushes

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LV 4

PizzaStopsTime

Story is all over the place and the main character is flat and cringey. Nothing he does makes sense and he seems to have anger issues. Meets a character, who is 19 I believe, for the first time when he is 7, and proceeded to kiss them and run away without repercussions… Also sentient system witholding info and he threatened to krill himself if it didn’t speak.