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Hi Author I was wondering if u where going to keep writing misty world??? I absolutely love that book and it really sucks that u stopped writing and there was no response to any of the messages or none was left saying anything about what was going on!! I really really like that book and I re really hope u will go back and keep writing it even if u keep writing this book too!! I really u come back!!
Went into the purchase chapters about 78 and honestly everything became a "why did he punk out?", "Why did he give in?", "Why did he initiate this interaction?", "For the love of god say no and walk away?" became my thoughts after every interaction. WQ in the paid section starts to get Gender Pronoun challenged pretty hard core and sentences are missing the subject or the content. Story Dev and Character design go hand in hand honestly. I do like how the author point fun at all the stupid MCs with plot armor cliche with Alec, but after the first interaction with Alec Lathel honestly becomes just barely more intelligent. Unfortunately Lathel has no spine, nuts, or ability to say no and stick to it. As other said he says he wants to get some girls explore, and avoid the Protag Alec...Yet first meet up after the wood scene Lathel goes out of his way to initiate a meeting with Alec.. Then proceeds to insult and slap his face in front of a whole tower of people. As the chapters after that state" The first Heroine shows up, and instead of avoiding her (who she is all about getting Lathel), he acquiesce to her over and over cause he has no spine to stand up for what he wants.
<<<<<<<<<<<<INQUIRY>>>>>>>>>>>>> Author please answer this simple question: Will Amleth be in the harem?? if not for how long will she exist she stayed for too long already.
What can I say[img=recommend]good to go with. Go Author! You are the best! I have characters I hate and love which really is a good thing, one can't like all
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I don’t know how to rate something but i think like this so i left a good review
your books are good but bro tell me when APOCALYPSE CHAOS I AM VILLAIN will have a new chapter or is it dropped
Can he take the fortune and harem of the mc if they die to the hand of the villain? or what would happen to the harem of that mc if they die
OK firstly I want to address the issues in this book firstly people are complaining about the female characters but you shoul know that most of them are not normal and author is trying to show this and their flaws but also their goodside too because they are not all bad also most people have forgotten he has lead 2 lives already he still has the memories of earth but he lost the one's of the alternate world so he still remembers most things so the character development he should have gathered in the second earth has been lost with his memories making him regress to his spineless self so the author shows us this instances to build character do it won't be instat so things will change if author fast paces the book but Currently the new arc is good and author will fix all this problems
The mc was just getting pushed around by fmc, he says he will avoid the protagonist but ultimately get closer to him on his on accord
I found the premise of the story slightly intriguing. At the beginning, I see some characters could be the Yandere type, both the dangerous, and the loyal. As the story progressed there are some issues that I have, not enough to drop, but also enough to consider dropping. My first issue is the MC being incapable of saying no to beautiful women who cry. If a woman threatens your safety, doesn’t listen to you, and generally ignores what you want and you proceed to tell them off the waterworks start and the MC immediately apologizes. I find this kind of spineless. My next issue is the fact that the MC says one thing, but then does another. For example, the MC says he was to avoid being in situations where he would run into a protagonist, or be on their bad side, but then steals opportunities from the MC or does things that brings the protagonists attention onto him. An example of this was when the MC purposefully enters into a building where the protagonist is in and then shows himself in front of said person. This dude is suppose to avoid them, but instead goes head first into danger. There are some other issues but much smaller in scale. I do not see myself continuing to read this story if the entire plots revolves around an MC who gets dragged around by women and continues to put himself at odds with the protagonist. I will also mention, I have no problems with the MC being a good guy. I do have an issue with the MC having interactions with a heroine. The author specifically states the MC will die if he steals a protagonists women, yet causes the heroine to fall in love with the MC and constantly flirts. It’s kind of like being constantly blue balled, or die if you try anything.
better than i expected, it has so many twists and turns, and it's turning out to be a good read
another review, currently in the latest chapters which is 78 the updating stability is good the grammar is good and the storyline is not cliche the book is more of a slice of life and comedy but there is still action moreover the plot isn't cliche also if you like yandare women give it a try
OK this book is actually better than I thought as the way the mc solves some problems is very unique and different compared to what I thought also the blend of action , comedy and slice of life is a breth of fresh air
It is an entertaining story and I was quite hooked, the only thing I would ask is that the MC does not allow himself to be maneuvered by the girls and has his own decision.
OK just started this book and I can say that this book has potential the writing is good and readable with little errors and the concept of the boon is interesting the book is a blend of slice of life and fantasy and I find it really good so keep up the good work
ol do far am in ch 58 and things are smooth I think the setting is better than his other books also the characters are not one dimensional which is very good
After reading 49 chapters. I can only say this's a piece of art🤯. World background is slowly revealed making you always guessing, The Mc is smart af to some he may seems stupid and beta male(>>{SPOILER}don't mistake he's a giga chad that has a yandere kingdom after him {END OF SPOILER}<<) to some of the hasty readers but that can't be more wrong He knows what he had to do to survive and he's doing great!!on conclusion you have to read it!but there's something that may happen in the future plot that can ruin the whole novel and I wish it won't😥 this thing is if a heroine will r*pe the mc. I hate it when this **** happens it throws the novel into the trash. so Author if there'll be intercourse between mc and some girls in the future make it consensual, absolutely CONSENSUAL. if not please drop a spoiler in the replies so I stop reading this art, although it'll hurt stopping now is better than receiving further damage.
I love Yandere. this's more than enough. I need more chapters 2 per day please🙏🙏
Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading thanks 😁
Started pretty good but honestly really slow progression in 200 chapters. MC is also an idiot and makes it almost unreadable. Has all these opportunities to get stronger but brushes them off beacause in his eyes all he wants to do is live a secluded and peaceful life with a harem. But is constantly being bothered by stronger fmc’s and the MC of that world is trying to kill him. He also saves everyone and spares anyone that has tried to kill him before. It gets repetitive the way the MC of that world and the FMC’s bother him they all go the same way every time. The MC tries to kill him for the 5th time? It whatever he’s the MC let me actually help him out instead. The FMC bother him? He’s helpless because he is to weak to resist. But he doesn’t take any opportunities to get stronger like the Black and White stone or becoming a pill maker with the help of the cauldron. He just wants to rely on the sign in system. Really promising in the beginning and cool idea but it goes down hill.
Spoiler enthüllen Hi Author I was wondering if u where going to keep writing misty world??? I absolutely love that book and it really sucks that u stopped writing and there was no response to any of the messages or none was left saying anything about what was going on!! I really really like that book and I re really hope u will go back and keep writing it even if u keep writing this book too!! I really u come back!!
Went into the purchase chapters about 78 and honestly everything became a "why did he punk out?", "Why did he give in?", "Why did he initiate this interaction?", "For the love of god say no and walk away?" became my thoughts after every interaction. WQ in the paid section starts to get Gender Pronoun challenged pretty hard core and sentences are missing the subject or the content. Story Dev and Character design go hand in hand honestly. I do like how the author point fun at all the stupid MCs with plot armor cliche with Alec, but after the first interaction with Alec Lathel honestly becomes just barely more intelligent. Unfortunately Lathel has no spine, nuts, or ability to say no and stick to it. As other said he says he wants to get some girls explore, and avoid the Protag Alec...Yet first meet up after the wood scene Lathel goes out of his way to initiate a meeting with Alec.. Then proceeds to insult and slap his face in front of a whole tower of people. As the chapters after that state" The first Heroine shows up, and instead of avoiding her (who she is all about getting Lathel), he acquiesce to her over and over cause he has no spine to stand up for what he wants.
<<<<<<<<<<<<INQUIRY>>>>>>>>>>>>> Author please answer this simple question: Will Amleth be in the harem?? if not for how long will she exist she stayed for too long already.
What can I say[img=recommend]good to go with. Go Author! You are the best! I have characters I hate and love which really is a good thing, one can't like all
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I don’t know how to rate something but i think like this so i left a good review
your books are good but bro tell me when APOCALYPSE CHAOS I AM VILLAIN will have a new chapter or is it dropped
Can he take the fortune and harem of the mc if they die to the hand of the villain? or what would happen to the harem of that mc if they die
OK firstly I want to address the issues in this book firstly people are complaining about the female characters but you shoul know that most of them are not normal and author is trying to show this and their flaws but also their goodside too because they are not all bad also most people have forgotten he has lead 2 lives already he still has the memories of earth but he lost the one's of the alternate world so he still remembers most things so the character development he should have gathered in the second earth has been lost with his memories making him regress to his spineless self so the author shows us this instances to build character do it won't be instat so things will change if author fast paces the book but Currently the new arc is good and author will fix all this problems
The mc was just getting pushed around by fmc, he says he will avoid the protagonist but ultimately get closer to him on his on accord
I found the premise of the story slightly intriguing. At the beginning, I see some characters could be the Yandere type, both the dangerous, and the loyal. As the story progressed there are some issues that I have, not enough to drop, but also enough to consider dropping. My first issue is the MC being incapable of saying no to beautiful women who cry. If a woman threatens your safety, doesn’t listen to you, and generally ignores what you want and you proceed to tell them off the waterworks start and the MC immediately apologizes. I find this kind of spineless. My next issue is the fact that the MC says one thing, but then does another. For example, the MC says he was to avoid being in situations where he would run into a protagonist, or be on their bad side, but then steals opportunities from the MC or does things that brings the protagonists attention onto him. An example of this was when the MC purposefully enters into a building where the protagonist is in and then shows himself in front of said person. This dude is suppose to avoid them, but instead goes head first into danger. There are some other issues but much smaller in scale. I do not see myself continuing to read this story if the entire plots revolves around an MC who gets dragged around by women and continues to put himself at odds with the protagonist. I will also mention, I have no problems with the MC being a good guy. I do have an issue with the MC having interactions with a heroine. The author specifically states the MC will die if he steals a protagonists women, yet causes the heroine to fall in love with the MC and constantly flirts. It’s kind of like being constantly blue balled, or die if you try anything.
better than i expected, it has so many twists and turns, and it's turning out to be a good read
another review, currently in the latest chapters which is 78 the updating stability is good the grammar is good and the storyline is not cliche the book is more of a slice of life and comedy but there is still action moreover the plot isn't cliche also if you like yandare women give it a try
OK this book is actually better than I thought as the way the mc solves some problems is very unique and different compared to what I thought also the blend of action , comedy and slice of life is a breth of fresh air
It is an entertaining story and I was quite hooked, the only thing I would ask is that the MC does not allow himself to be maneuvered by the girls and has his own decision.
OK just started this book and I can say that this book has potential the writing is good and readable with little errors and the concept of the boon is interesting the book is a blend of slice of life and fantasy and I find it really good so keep up the good work
ol do far am in ch 58 and things are smooth I think the setting is better than his other books also the characters are not one dimensional which is very good
After reading 49 chapters. I can only say this's a piece of art🤯. World background is slowly revealed making you always guessing, The Mc is smart af to some he may seems stupid and beta male(>>{SPOILER}don't mistake he's a giga chad that has a yandere kingdom after him {END OF SPOILER}<<) to some of the hasty readers but that can't be more wrong He knows what he had to do to survive and he's doing great!!on conclusion you have to read it!but there's something that may happen in the future plot that can ruin the whole novel and I wish it won't😥 this thing is if a heroine will r*pe the mc. I hate it when this **** happens it throws the novel into the trash. so Author if there'll be intercourse between mc and some girls in the future make it consensual, absolutely CONSENSUAL. if not please drop a spoiler in the replies so I stop reading this art, although it'll hurt stopping now is better than receiving further damage.
I love Yandere. this's more than enough. I need more chapters 2 per day please🙏🙏
Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading thanks 😁
Started pretty good but honestly really slow progression in 200 chapters. MC is also an idiot and makes it almost unreadable. Has all these opportunities to get stronger but brushes them off beacause in his eyes all he wants to do is live a secluded and peaceful life with a harem. But is constantly being bothered by stronger fmc’s and the MC of that world is trying to kill him. He also saves everyone and spares anyone that has tried to kill him before. It gets repetitive the way the MC of that world and the FMC’s bother him they all go the same way every time. The MC tries to kill him for the 5th time? It whatever he’s the MC let me actually help him out instead. The FMC bother him? He’s helpless because he is to weak to resist. But he doesn’t take any opportunities to get stronger like the Black and White stone or becoming a pill maker with the help of the cauldron. He just wants to rely on the sign in system. Really promising in the beginning and cool idea but it goes down hill.
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