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NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."
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Saudara yang terbaik adalah mereka yang hidup sederajat. Namun karena adanya perubahan status sosial, status kesetaraan tersebut rusak.Ada pepatah yang mengatakan: 'Mereka yang lulus studi pascasarjana menjalani kehidupan seperti babi, mereka yang bekerja menjalani kehidupan seperti anjing, dan mereka yang diuji menjalani kehidupan yang lebih buruk daripada babi dan anjing.'
Idk what to say much why i didn't give it five stars because his sister suddenly disappears even the cat and mc just forgets about them.
AMAZING Loved every part of this story tho I have no idea where the Mc’s sister went cuz she literally disappeared from the mc life so uh any hints author
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I enjoy these types of story's. It a slow-paced story, where the mc experiences what life is, instead of being an overpower machine without any emotions. The MC is enjoyable but I wish to see more thriving character interaction, while I wish the power to be explored some more.
I think you should have checked Birthdays of Rin or other characters because I think it's wrong they should be born few years later not in 1982 or 83 other than that other stuff is just minor.This was also minor but you know sometimes it takes away fun but if you put a notice earlier that there are changes like that then it will he easilier to adjust .And progression is very good some people make Mc Op way too fast and it's nice to see not a battle maniac Mc
4.4 rating. Current Chapter 154I really like this fic, it has just about everything a fan would like. Some things to keep in mind, Some arks can be a bit long but almost every chapter is very nicely written (translated) so there is no filler at all or unnecessary words.There are some significant plot holes but they are not very important. it's more likely the original author forgot about it. But anyways do give this fic a try, I hope y'all enjoy it as much as I did. P.S the romance in this fic is very weird and confusing to me so my suggestion is to ignore that.
This fanfic was good but has slow paced story telling, MC eventually will become very strong after Holy Grail Wars.
confusing for me, the background of the world which for me has never seen that anime(?).[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Kurokawa Kazuya's character will one day become strong, right......,......... Hajsnsjdjjsdjjdjddjjdjsjddjjddjdjsnnsjxnxjxjxjdjxjjdjdjsjsjdidjsjsjjsjsnsbsjsnsnsnhsnznsjsnjdjdjdjdjdjdj
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My only problem with fic is that there's too much unneeded and unnecessary dream filler.
62 chapters in and they still haven't published the target manga, and there's just a lot of word count, blatant filler of dreams that don't matter at all. I'm losing faith
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The concept of Mangaka in fate fanfic is something foreign and new to me who has been going down this Nasu-made rabbit hole for quite some time, but I have to say that this fic intrigued me enough with its fresh concept in my opinion, and overall everything is good as the grammar is very eye-pleasing and doesn't make my brain cells disappear. My only complaint for this fic is: When is MC going to make a Fate manga? When is MC going to make a Fate manga? When is MC going to make a Fate manga?
Grammar : Good - Five StarPlot Story : Good - Five StarCharacter Design : Good - Five StarUpdate : Good - Five StarWorld background : Good - Five Star-Everything Is good, I give this novel five star and don't forget to read my novel to, thank you.
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For some reason, when I read it, it felt flat and there was a lack of energy in this story. Moreover, the MC has a brain problem. If making a manga will get the power of the manga or protagonist then the MC should make a one-shot about the manga Overlord or One Punch Man. at least you get death magic abilities and other magic or physical abilities that can break the limiter
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TITLE: I, Xingyue, a Manga Artist!, can be found on MTLNOVEL, 1265 chapters and COMPLETED
The work is beautiful. Everyone should love their little sister. The most important thing in life will always be family (P.s. - Dominic Toretto).
If Mc doesn't make the fate stay night manga, many people may leave. but everything else is fine, even with the word stuffing (the space cat and the industry ocs that don't matter much).
it's a good fic so far. I love that it has a mashed up world Evan if it hasn't come up yet for the plot but keep up the great work
A Mangaka with Rohan Kishibe's abilities? That is the key to 100% success for a Mangaka. With abilities like that, there would be no significant obstacles to becoming one of the best Mangaka in the world. For that alone, I would give it 5 stars because it showcases the main character's clever and intelligent traits. As for the rest, like Wonder Woman, the translation grammar is excellent. Looking forward to how Nasuverse characters react when they see themselves in a manga, which is clearly going to be a threat to the slowly fading mystery.
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.
NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."
GODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMSGODZILLA, THE STRONGEST OF ALL REALMS
Saudara yang terbaik adalah mereka yang hidup sederajat. Namun karena adanya perubahan status sosial, status kesetaraan tersebut rusak.Ada pepatah yang mengatakan: 'Mereka yang lulus studi pascasarjana menjalani kehidupan seperti babi, mereka yang bekerja menjalani kehidupan seperti anjing, dan mereka yang diuji menjalani kehidupan yang lebih buruk daripada babi dan anjing.'
Idk what to say much why i didn't give it five stars because his sister suddenly disappears even the cat and mc just forgets about them.
AMAZING Loved every part of this story tho I have no idea where the Mc’s sister went cuz she literally disappeared from the mc life so uh any hints author
Spoiler enthüllen I enjoy these types of story's. It a slow-paced story, where the mc experiences what life is, instead of being an overpower machine without any emotions. The MC is enjoyable but I wish to see more thriving character interaction, while I wish the power to be explored some more.
I think you should have checked Birthdays of Rin or other characters because I think it's wrong they should be born few years later not in 1982 or 83 other than that other stuff is just minor.This was also minor but you know sometimes it takes away fun but if you put a notice earlier that there are changes like that then it will he easilier to adjust .And progression is very good some people make Mc Op way too fast and it's nice to see not a battle maniac Mc
4.4 rating. Current Chapter 154I really like this fic, it has just about everything a fan would like. Some things to keep in mind, Some arks can be a bit long but almost every chapter is very nicely written (translated) so there is no filler at all or unnecessary words.There are some significant plot holes but they are not very important. it's more likely the original author forgot about it. But anyways do give this fic a try, I hope y'all enjoy it as much as I did. P.S the romance in this fic is very weird and confusing to me so my suggestion is to ignore that.
This fanfic was good but has slow paced story telling, MC eventually will become very strong after Holy Grail Wars.
confusing for me, the background of the world which for me has never seen that anime(?).[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Kurokawa Kazuya's character will one day become strong, right......,......... Hajsnsjdjjsdjjdjddjjdjsjddjjddjdjsnnsjxnxjxjxjdjxjjdjdjsjsjdidjsjsjjsjsnsbsjsnsnsnhsnznsjsnjdjdjdjdjdjdj
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My only problem with fic is that there's too much unneeded and unnecessary dream filler.
62 chapters in and they still haven't published the target manga, and there's just a lot of word count, blatant filler of dreams that don't matter at all. I'm losing faith
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The concept of Mangaka in fate fanfic is something foreign and new to me who has been going down this Nasu-made rabbit hole for quite some time, but I have to say that this fic intrigued me enough with its fresh concept in my opinion, and overall everything is good as the grammar is very eye-pleasing and doesn't make my brain cells disappear. My only complaint for this fic is: When is MC going to make a Fate manga? When is MC going to make a Fate manga? When is MC going to make a Fate manga?
Grammar : Good - Five StarPlot Story : Good - Five StarCharacter Design : Good - Five StarUpdate : Good - Five StarWorld background : Good - Five Star-Everything Is good, I give this novel five star and don't forget to read my novel to, thank you.
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For some reason, when I read it, it felt flat and there was a lack of energy in this story. Moreover, the MC has a brain problem. If making a manga will get the power of the manga or protagonist then the MC should make a one-shot about the manga Overlord or One Punch Man. at least you get death magic abilities and other magic or physical abilities that can break the limiter
Spoiler enthüllen TITLE: I, Xingyue, a Manga Artist!, can be found on MTLNOVEL, 1265 chapters and COMPLETED
The work is beautiful. Everyone should love their little sister. The most important thing in life will always be family (P.s. - Dominic Toretto).
If Mc doesn't make the fate stay night manga, many people may leave. but everything else is fine, even with the word stuffing (the space cat and the industry ocs that don't matter much).
it's a good fic so far. I love that it has a mashed up world Evan if it hasn't come up yet for the plot but keep up the great work
A Mangaka with Rohan Kishibe's abilities? That is the key to 100% success for a Mangaka. With abilities like that, there would be no significant obstacles to becoming one of the best Mangaka in the world. For that alone, I would give it 5 stars because it showcases the main character's clever and intelligent traits. As for the rest, like Wonder Woman, the translation grammar is excellent. Looking forward to how Nasuverse characters react when they see themselves in a manga, which is clearly going to be a threat to the slowly fading mystery.
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.