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this was a very fun read for me I never thought I would see an armored core fanfic. I was so drawn into this story I spent an entire day just bingeing it all at once lol. i cant wait to see how things develop from here. (also can someone recommend some more armored core fanfics worth checking out if there are any others plz and thanks)
Trash a oldman mc who sounds so awesome from the way it’s described in the starting and even has villain tag yet here he is acting like a kid and get hit by a mere side character (Comedy violence) and even acting submissive tch act normal even if you don’t act a little prideful or act as befitting your dignity as a past ruler
I've read like 47 chapters of this and I have to say that I'm impressed .the writing is of the highest quality, the way the world's blen is almost seamless and the characters are just lovable. it's great
I quite like the novel, could use more kingdom building on his territory, but that is mostly my kb kink speaking
I usually don't think fanfics should be rated for world background unless significant changes are made. As this merges another story into the background, I think it derves it. Everything else is great. The only problem being that the poster isn't the original author, so they might want this taken down.
This is very good in that is goes a different path from mobusekai canon which most fanfics don't. It's very well written, and both armoured core and mobusekai elements play into it relatively equally. even if you only know one franchise or even none i recommend this. it doesn't require knowledge of either fandoms and is basically an original work.
Amazing direction the story went in while still hitting the same events. looking forward to reading more!
Somehow the mc who was supposed to be an old experienced man is so stupid to the point that it's frustrating. He still thinks/acts like a teenager when he was supposed to have the mind of a century-old tyrant. Fights are good and all but it became boring pretty fast with all the repetition. Mc doesn't know how to use a mech but he had the experience so he is a pro at it, he is not a good marksman but can shoot perfectly fine because he had experience. The experience just comes when the plot needs it and disappears at the next moment. I felt pure frustration while reading. Repeating the same things about his background, his problems with his engagement, etc felt like it was there just for the word count and clout. You could make an oc without a background and a bit of talent and it would still be the same story.
This and the sage one are the best I have read so far But for remaining his past life's members thanks for hard work ........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
It’s really good. The world building is amazing and even characters are slowly build for their personalities and letting them grow out to be more flush even from the original novel. Overall one of the most refreshing read I’ve done for weeks. Please keep up the work Author!
Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect Thanks for sharing the story with us, you should also add more development sections to your own stories (instead of skipping time, sections on army development, technology development, population development make it easier for you to write more chapters and provide a more detailed story
This is good but do you have permission to re-upload it here? ...................................................................................................
Decide to write reviews because i think this book deserve more, great world building, decent pacing, good grammar, a very nice starter pack to good stories. It has different but interesting approach to mobuseka stories that feel very immersive and not forced I suggest to you to give it a try, the upload rate is also additional plus points
I like the approach of the main character to his situation and the way he doesn't lay low too much when it's not necessary, and I especially like that he isn't like Leon who's playing around too much when he needs to man up and act seriously
The hero is not stupid, the plot develops well, I am waiting for the continuation of the story................................................................................................
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Está bueno; no tengo más palabras...................................................................................................................
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Its a Top Quality merge of Armored core combat and ACs in the "trapped in a dating sim" setting. Good Combat.Lots of Detail.Real lifelike characters.Clever writing.Seamless world merge.A bit of Comedy.A few Lemons of here and there.Honestly what more could you want
Esta muy bien escrito este fanfic y lo mas importante el protagonista no es una princesa, las interacciones son buenas, las acciones de batallas me gustaron bastante.
Honestly, i don't even know the lore of Armored core but this somehow fits perfectly, Although it was tagged Harem, i hope it's only 2 people. Also, romance isn't really focused here but we'll see in the future. can't wait to see the part where he beat up the prince. Overall, it's worth reading, especially the war arc.
In all honesty, I'm amusingly surprised. This is a great take to mobuseka. Not much fan of fanfic, but this one is something I really enjoy. In fact, this could be an entirely new novel on its own. It follows similar route to the original novel at the beginning where Leon got sent to marry and die, but unlike the original series, in this one, dude actually got married to the whale albeit only in paper and got sent to the frontline. That's where our fun begins. Really recommend it to all. Great job writer and I salute you translator-san.
this was a very fun read for me I never thought I would see an armored core fanfic. I was so drawn into this story I spent an entire day just bingeing it all at once lol. i cant wait to see how things develop from here. (also can someone recommend some more armored core fanfics worth checking out if there are any others plz and thanks)
Trash a oldman mc who sounds so awesome from the way it’s described in the starting and even has villain tag yet here he is acting like a kid and get hit by a mere side character (Comedy violence) and even acting submissive tch act normal even if you don’t act a little prideful or act as befitting your dignity as a past ruler
I've read like 47 chapters of this and I have to say that I'm impressed .the writing is of the highest quality, the way the world's blen is almost seamless and the characters are just lovable. it's great
I quite like the novel, could use more kingdom building on his territory, but that is mostly my kb kink speaking
I usually don't think fanfics should be rated for world background unless significant changes are made. As this merges another story into the background, I think it derves it. Everything else is great. The only problem being that the poster isn't the original author, so they might want this taken down.
This is very good in that is goes a different path from mobusekai canon which most fanfics don't. It's very well written, and both armoured core and mobusekai elements play into it relatively equally. even if you only know one franchise or even none i recommend this. it doesn't require knowledge of either fandoms and is basically an original work.
Amazing direction the story went in while still hitting the same events. looking forward to reading more!
Somehow the mc who was supposed to be an old experienced man is so stupid to the point that it's frustrating. He still thinks/acts like a teenager when he was supposed to have the mind of a century-old tyrant. Fights are good and all but it became boring pretty fast with all the repetition. Mc doesn't know how to use a mech but he had the experience so he is a pro at it, he is not a good marksman but can shoot perfectly fine because he had experience. The experience just comes when the plot needs it and disappears at the next moment. I felt pure frustration while reading. Repeating the same things about his background, his problems with his engagement, etc felt like it was there just for the word count and clout. You could make an oc without a background and a bit of talent and it would still be the same story.
This and the sage one are the best I have read so far But for remaining his past life's members thanks for hard work ........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
It’s really good. The world building is amazing and even characters are slowly build for their personalities and letting them grow out to be more flush even from the original novel. Overall one of the most refreshing read I’ve done for weeks. Please keep up the work Author!
Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect Thanks for sharing the story with us, you should also add more development sections to your own stories (instead of skipping time, sections on army development, technology development, population development make it easier for you to write more chapters and provide a more detailed story
This is good but do you have permission to re-upload it here? ...................................................................................................
Decide to write reviews because i think this book deserve more, great world building, decent pacing, good grammar, a very nice starter pack to good stories. It has different but interesting approach to mobuseka stories that feel very immersive and not forced I suggest to you to give it a try, the upload rate is also additional plus points
I like the approach of the main character to his situation and the way he doesn't lay low too much when it's not necessary, and I especially like that he isn't like Leon who's playing around too much when he needs to man up and act seriously
The hero is not stupid, the plot develops well, I am waiting for the continuation of the story................................................................................................
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Está bueno; no tengo más palabras...................................................................................................................
Spoiler enthüllen Its a Top Quality merge of Armored core combat and ACs in the "trapped in a dating sim" setting. Good Combat.Lots of Detail.Real lifelike characters.Clever writing.Seamless world merge.A bit of Comedy.A few Lemons of here and there.Honestly what more could you want
Esta muy bien escrito este fanfic y lo mas importante el protagonista no es una princesa, las interacciones son buenas, las acciones de batallas me gustaron bastante.
Honestly, i don't even know the lore of Armored core but this somehow fits perfectly, Although it was tagged Harem, i hope it's only 2 people. Also, romance isn't really focused here but we'll see in the future. can't wait to see the part where he beat up the prince. Overall, it's worth reading, especially the war arc.
In all honesty, I'm amusingly surprised. This is a great take to mobuseka. Not much fan of fanfic, but this one is something I really enjoy. In fact, this could be an entirely new novel on its own. It follows similar route to the original novel at the beginning where Leon got sent to marry and die, but unlike the original series, in this one, dude actually got married to the whale albeit only in paper and got sent to the frontline. That's where our fun begins. Really recommend it to all. Great job writer and I salute you translator-san.