Reborn: My Two Systems at War

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AnonymUser

Good morning, I am a super ultra duper hacker who hacked the author's account only to give this five stars as I love this. Nope, I am not the author... trust me.

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0Random_Reader0

Read the old version curious to see what changes are made as the story is already pretty goodPls no drop

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aldesse

For what we have seen so far and what the autor did with Vesuvius we will have a journey of a moraly questionable "young" girl / space assassin throught magic and space.I am really hyped by the quality of the 15 first chapter and wich for such quality to be preserve even if it mean less chapter.(please make her way more human/relatable than what you did with Vesuvius. It is cool to see a dragon mind take over a human mind but i really would like to see the same level of caracter for a human push throught the fire of live 🙏)

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Rakshahsa

pls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't drop

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FurryCatUwU

A unique novel with a fun twist on your stereotypical system; despite it juggling so many different concepts, I think this novel does a good job keeping the story fun and engaging!🐱

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Usiel

MC is the pet of some noble. Only in the first chapters she shows some backbone, rest of the story she is either controlled or a pet. Her wisdom is in minus score, even thou she is having her second life the sheer stupidity of her decisions and general timidness when she sees any person with authority is disgusting. This is some cuck mc story which was extremely hard even to skim. If possible i would've given minus score.

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Reiya9

What types of worlds will she travel? Original worlds or more fictional worlds we have as entertainment here? And what worlds has she traveled to already? Just asking before I get invested in this story

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Spelloyal

This is a review of the story until chapter 22. I'm really enjoying reading it, it's an interesting novel and it's totally worth reading, however it's not a masterpiece so don't read it hoping to find the next LOM or library of heaven's path, just a good and interesting novel. The reason I don't give it 5 stars is that Chapter 1 was very confusing and often the protagonist is in one scenario and suddenly jumps to another. This doesn't make the story confusing, but without even a transition paragraph between the scenarios, the immersion is broken and this harms the reading experience. If you want an example of what I'm talking about, read the end of chapter 21 and the beginning of 22. We don't even have the protagonist getting up and saying "I'm going" before changing scenes. All we have is someone saying "something is happening that might interest you", the chapter ends and in the next the protagonist is already on the street crossing the crowd. Another small problem is that in the beginning, during the escape the protagonist seems to be portrayed as a child by the other characters but shortly after she is being narrated as an slender woman, not even an slender young woman but an slender woman right after another bad transition, which makes everything worse. These are the only problems that I noticed and they are details, but they bothered me a lot and that's why I'm not giving it 5 stars.

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NStar

For now, I can say with sincerity that this is one the best book that I have read! So don’t hesitate to read it to, you will only have a good time.

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Wholesome_Bun

the story is a fresh breath of air on the take of transmigration, and that i all i need to love this story.the story is a fresh breath of air on the take of transmigration, and that i all i need to love this story.

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ShatteredMusic

It's quite an entertaining read with good world building and a new system mechanic that I hadn't seen, so far done well 👍

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Mika7313

I haven’t gotten too far in yet, but I just wanted to say I really appreciate the writing quality! This is very well written making it a very enjoyable read. I’m excited to see what happens along Tiariel’s journey!

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Gin_Blanco

The Story captivated me right away. I like the Characters and World so far. I actually read everything within two days cause i couldnt stop so now I have to wait for further updates. No pressure tough. 😁

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Kanse_Noitanse

Great Book w/ Female Lead. This rare nowadays. keep going

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SolarXWings

A really great novel but not really my cup of tea. The MC seems to be always under the thumb of someone else and never free. She just trades one prison for another. I Liked you other novel "Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game" way better.

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ArCo153

AMAZING, please keep going! I can't wait for the next chapter and the mc is way better than your generic character. Please do NOT drop, this book is nuts and I love it.

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Vivian_Watanabe

It's amazing story. Till now i can't find nothing which i don't like. I give 5/5 and hope you continue this till the end.

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OXCL

Nice, up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up