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It’s a really interesting fanfic, my only concern really is that the sometimes the mc acts like he knows the future plot and other times he acts completely unaware which is confusing sometimes
The MC is obsessed with staying low key and creates all of his own problems by being a little bastard. It's an Uchiha MC that doesn't try and stop the massacre and hides his sharingan.
The author intentionally makes MC arrogant, cause of showing his strength. Albeit, Kaen only achieve, hmmm. It don't has, he doesn't have any wins.
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Overall it’s bad the mc focus on bow and fuinjutsu, he could have been much stronger but he’s an idiot and too prideful. His strength is being suppressed for plots. He’s an uchiha with 3 tomoe sharingan but author said he’s bad with taijutsu… seriously? An uchiha who’s bad at taijutsu? And that’s comparing him to normal chunin/jonin lol. Author’s just forcing that to make him use a bow. And i have never heard a 3 tomoe uchiha with low chakra pool. Cause the higher the stage of ur sharingan the more chakra u have. Because chakra is spiritual and physical energy combined, and the basic sharingan required high spiritual energy to level up. Third is that author said he can’t increase his chakra pool which no matter what he does which is stupid too. This is Naruto not jjk where u can’t increase ur chakra pool. Like I get it if the chakra increase is minimal, but no chakra increase at all? Author is just forcing this for plots
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i like it so far kinda wish you could explain more justus he has and fuinjutsu he uses also more into the summoning jutsu. ..............
Don't read the reviews this story is a progressive one. The more you read it the better it becomes.Just read it and stick to it you will thank me,..................................................mm...........,.
I'm surprised to discover that there's a kind of illogical and ridiculous hatred of the uchiha clan in the fan fiction community. The main character is a sort of hateful spoiled brat, who alienates his extended family (his clan) for no reason other than his subjectivity and the anti-Uchiha bias he has. In this story, the third hokage is not the cynical, naive coward he actually was, but a sort of whitewashed grandpa and his clan is demonized.
There are constant tone shift thats making it hard to take this book seriously: MC likes to hide his ability which is resonable and i can get behind it but sudden when he graduate he decides to score perfect in theory and practical which raise some red flags for him. Then MC decided to hide his sharingan which is again resonable to hide from danzo and hokage but it got leaked just a few months later and when hokage came to check him out, he went full Aristotle on him, taking about how he dont see Konoha as his precious, how hokage see uchiha as enemy, how its his fate is blood and hate etc.. etc.. Its full on emo++++ college fail philosopy major. and he's only 10 year old. He's lucky Hiruzen did't blast him dumbss right there. Not to mention his go to weapon is bow which doesnt even make sense with sharingan unlike byakugan. He captured and dragged Jiraya by hair throughout the village using ameture level fuinjutsu. He also talk about how uchiha are pridful and antisocial but he is the exact same to people around him. The whole interaction with purple haired girl about naruto was painful to read. He is so full of himself for and calling her despicable when she have no cannon knowledge.
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translate.. It's unique to see MC/Kaen is Uchiha, but use a bow and seal.. I like it 😁👍 I like that MC is not afraid to change the story/future (he save Hizashi lives).. But why not save the Uchihas?? It's not enterily Uchiha fault to Coup, the villages make them to that (especially Danzo.. I think he do that to get more Sharingan for Izanagi).. And not all of Uchiha want to do that (I think the civilian not want to coup)... I think he should save the children and the civilian who innocent.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author san 😁👍😍😍
Some of the reviews didn't do justice to this fic. Sure, at the start MC did frustratingly inconsistent, but the development, pacing, and dialogue between the characters overall are pretty well-thought out. The only big downside is just the updates, though the writer made a fair trade with longer chapter. Keep going man
The MC is just hard to like. Author had a major asspull when suddenly everyone starts to like MC. Everything is just illogical and it made the reading experience less enjoyable. The writing is good though, some missing words/prepositions sometimes but the grammar and structure is on point. The updates is on the slow side.
The Grammar isn’t really good and the Mc somehow got interested in Justice, talks about bringing Orochimaru to Justice for Grooming Children and collaborating with Danzo
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great fan fiction and then tired of all the Chinese....,................................................................................................................................................................,..............
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Thanks for this work. Please do not believe the low rating, I understand why some might not like it, but for the same reason I liked it, so I advise you to give a chance to fiction
I disagree with some reviewers now that I've read the first 29 chapters. Yes, the MC is emo, but I don't think it feels unrealistic. People talk game about how he never wanted to help his own clan and how the author makes Hiruzen the epitome of goodness while the Uchiha is portrayed as bad, but I disagree. There is a arc where he calls out the Hokage to his two teachers. Also it's worth noting that it wasn't all the Uchiha, only a select few. So I think other reviewers are focusing on small segments. I like how the story feels like it has actual development of the character and how they interact with others. I don't feel like bad when there is a time skip and I enjoy the few episodic filler which can be used for character development at times and not only comedy. There is consistent new chapters over the last month and the writing is acceptable quality and I don't recall anything bad when I think back on it.
liked the story till you put a bow c'mon bro a bow really. that is the only complaint I have, but I got to give up reading this sadly because the bow.
Although some readers are upset that the MC couldn't save the Uchiha clan, plenty of other stories go in that direction. I enjoy reading about an Uchiha MC who isn't instantly OP compared to the geniuses in the series. I'm looking forward to what is to come!
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The fanfiction is completely illogical. mc, as mentioned in other comments, suppresses itself. at first the author says that mc is more talented than itachi, but at the same time he is much weaker than itachi. mc trained for years not to win, but to survive. Wow. as if the author is trying with all his might not to make the protagonist a steward, and thereby makes the story stupid. and here you will not find any battles or anything like that. this is a fanfic just about how mc creates problems for himself out of the blue, always stupid, but tries to seem smart, a little philosophy that doesn’t lead to anything special, in short, stupid fanfic under the wrapper “wow philosophy, I’ve never seen anything like that ". and as for illogicality, well, for example: jiraiya does not teach mc anything, because he is afraid that he will be like orochimaru, and at the same time, just before this line, he said that the main character is too kind and does not want to kill his enemies. further, his only friend was shisui, but he did nothing for him, did not help in any way, did not even want to. this fanfic is a complete disappointment, i was stupid while reading it
The author in this one shows the Uchiha clan as absolute evil, and the Hokage as a white and fluffy rabbit, although in fact the Uchiha clan was in many ways unfairly suppressed by 3 Hokage and advisers
Good story! I like that it deviates so much from canon, it's boring reading the same thing over and over again. I like the character's abilities, it is the first story I have read in which the character uses a bow, and fire ninjutsu, usually the writers leave aside the fire element, either because they like other elements more or because they don't they know how to turn that element into something powerful.
It’s a really interesting fanfic, my only concern really is that the sometimes the mc acts like he knows the future plot and other times he acts completely unaware which is confusing sometimes
The MC is obsessed with staying low key and creates all of his own problems by being a little bastard. It's an Uchiha MC that doesn't try and stop the massacre and hides his sharingan.
The author intentionally makes MC arrogant, cause of showing his strength. Albeit, Kaen only achieve, hmmm. It don't has, he doesn't have any wins.
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Overall it’s bad the mc focus on bow and fuinjutsu, he could have been much stronger but he’s an idiot and too prideful. His strength is being suppressed for plots. He’s an uchiha with 3 tomoe sharingan but author said he’s bad with taijutsu… seriously? An uchiha who’s bad at taijutsu? And that’s comparing him to normal chunin/jonin lol. Author’s just forcing that to make him use a bow. And i have never heard a 3 tomoe uchiha with low chakra pool. Cause the higher the stage of ur sharingan the more chakra u have. Because chakra is spiritual and physical energy combined, and the basic sharingan required high spiritual energy to level up. Third is that author said he can’t increase his chakra pool which no matter what he does which is stupid too. This is Naruto not jjk where u can’t increase ur chakra pool. Like I get it if the chakra increase is minimal, but no chakra increase at all? Author is just forcing this for plots
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Spoiler enthüllen i like it so far kinda wish you could explain more justus he has and fuinjutsu he uses also more into the summoning jutsu. ..............
Don't read the reviews this story is a progressive one. The more you read it the better it becomes.Just read it and stick to it you will thank me,..................................................mm...........,.
I'm surprised to discover that there's a kind of illogical and ridiculous hatred of the uchiha clan in the fan fiction community. The main character is a sort of hateful spoiled brat, who alienates his extended family (his clan) for no reason other than his subjectivity and the anti-Uchiha bias he has. In this story, the third hokage is not the cynical, naive coward he actually was, but a sort of whitewashed grandpa and his clan is demonized.
There are constant tone shift thats making it hard to take this book seriously: MC likes to hide his ability which is resonable and i can get behind it but sudden when he graduate he decides to score perfect in theory and practical which raise some red flags for him. Then MC decided to hide his sharingan which is again resonable to hide from danzo and hokage but it got leaked just a few months later and when hokage came to check him out, he went full Aristotle on him, taking about how he dont see Konoha as his precious, how hokage see uchiha as enemy, how its his fate is blood and hate etc.. etc.. Its full on emo++++ college fail philosopy major. and he's only 10 year old. He's lucky Hiruzen did't blast him dumbss right there. Not to mention his go to weapon is bow which doesnt even make sense with sharingan unlike byakugan. He captured and dragged Jiraya by hair throughout the village using ameture level fuinjutsu. He also talk about how uchiha are pridful and antisocial but he is the exact same to people around him. The whole interaction with purple haired girl about naruto was painful to read. He is so full of himself for and calling her despicable when she have no cannon knowledge.
Spoiler enthüllen It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translate.. It's unique to see MC/Kaen is Uchiha, but use a bow and seal.. I like it 😁👍 I like that MC is not afraid to change the story/future (he save Hizashi lives).. But why not save the Uchihas?? It's not enterily Uchiha fault to Coup, the villages make them to that (especially Danzo.. I think he do that to get more Sharingan for Izanagi).. And not all of Uchiha want to do that (I think the civilian not want to coup)... I think he should save the children and the civilian who innocent.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author san 😁👍😍😍
Some of the reviews didn't do justice to this fic. Sure, at the start MC did frustratingly inconsistent, but the development, pacing, and dialogue between the characters overall are pretty well-thought out. The only big downside is just the updates, though the writer made a fair trade with longer chapter. Keep going man
The MC is just hard to like. Author had a major asspull when suddenly everyone starts to like MC. Everything is just illogical and it made the reading experience less enjoyable. The writing is good though, some missing words/prepositions sometimes but the grammar and structure is on point. The updates is on the slow side.
The Grammar isn’t really good and the Mc somehow got interested in Justice, talks about bringing Orochimaru to Justice for Grooming Children and collaborating with Danzo
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great fan fiction and then tired of all the Chinese....,................................................................................................................................................................,..............
Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star Just because of the onion, I put 1 star
Thanks for this work. Please do not believe the low rating, I understand why some might not like it, but for the same reason I liked it, so I advise you to give a chance to fiction
I disagree with some reviewers now that I've read the first 29 chapters. Yes, the MC is emo, but I don't think it feels unrealistic. People talk game about how he never wanted to help his own clan and how the author makes Hiruzen the epitome of goodness while the Uchiha is portrayed as bad, but I disagree. There is a arc where he calls out the Hokage to his two teachers. Also it's worth noting that it wasn't all the Uchiha, only a select few. So I think other reviewers are focusing on small segments. I like how the story feels like it has actual development of the character and how they interact with others. I don't feel like bad when there is a time skip and I enjoy the few episodic filler which can be used for character development at times and not only comedy. There is consistent new chapters over the last month and the writing is acceptable quality and I don't recall anything bad when I think back on it.
liked the story till you put a bow c'mon bro a bow really. that is the only complaint I have, but I got to give up reading this sadly because the bow.
Although some readers are upset that the MC couldn't save the Uchiha clan, plenty of other stories go in that direction. I enjoy reading about an Uchiha MC who isn't instantly OP compared to the geniuses in the series. I'm looking forward to what is to come!
Spoiler enthüllen The fanfiction is completely illogical. mc, as mentioned in other comments, suppresses itself. at first the author says that mc is more talented than itachi, but at the same time he is much weaker than itachi. mc trained for years not to win, but to survive. Wow. as if the author is trying with all his might not to make the protagonist a steward, and thereby makes the story stupid. and here you will not find any battles or anything like that. this is a fanfic just about how mc creates problems for himself out of the blue, always stupid, but tries to seem smart, a little philosophy that doesn’t lead to anything special, in short, stupid fanfic under the wrapper “wow philosophy, I’ve never seen anything like that ". and as for illogicality, well, for example: jiraiya does not teach mc anything, because he is afraid that he will be like orochimaru, and at the same time, just before this line, he said that the main character is too kind and does not want to kill his enemies. further, his only friend was shisui, but he did nothing for him, did not help in any way, did not even want to. this fanfic is a complete disappointment, i was stupid while reading it
The author in this one shows the Uchiha clan as absolute evil, and the Hokage as a white and fluffy rabbit, although in fact the Uchiha clan was in many ways unfairly suppressed by 3 Hokage and advisers
Good story! I like that it deviates so much from canon, it's boring reading the same thing over and over again. I like the character's abilities, it is the first story I have read in which the character uses a bow, and fire ninjutsu, usually the writers leave aside the fire element, either because they like other elements more or because they don't they know how to turn that element into something powerful.