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The grammar and the story are lovely. The biggest issue I have is with how illogical the MC is. The MC is way weaker than he should be because he constantly is creating conflict between himself and his clan. If he simply pretended to be conpliant and utilized the clan library and training he could be comparable to itachi. Instead he outwardly and overtly insults everyone for no reason thus drastically weakening himself. He also seems to have no agency as he lets people he cares about die (shisui/Mikoto) and does not attempt to change anything. All this MC does is get in his own way and act depressed. Anyway, perhaps there is a chance for character development in the future, but thus far this story is only okay 5.8/10.
So, this is an update to a previous review. This novel started off well, but sadly only went downhill. The way this novel one-sidedly shows the uchiha as some sort of evil masterminds and the author and mc simp for the third hokage just seems childish and cliche. The story could have had some events and dialogue happen very slightly differently and it would have been 3 times better than the way it is now. The only way I could justify some of the forced plot is that Shisui used kotoamatsukami on the mc. And we know that didn't happen. Also, if the author is planning to have the mc be with that random purple hair genin girl, he should add the romance tag.
Two chapter review. Cuz only that many as of now. First chapter was very promising, but the second one has some red flags. First of all, describing a random girl genin? Typically in stories, if something is even remotely described about a person, he/she will be important. And since it's mentioned it's a girl, I fear that the author is in a rush to collect a harem or something, which would turn this into trash. Once again, this is just a red flag as of now, but this one tends to have a 95% prediction rate. Second of all, the simping for the third hokage. I'm not saying he has to be written as some evil mastermind like in some novels, but even then he is often, at the very least, incompetent.
The grammar and the story are lovely. The biggest issue I have is with how illogical the MC is. The MC is way weaker than he should be because he constantly is creating conflict between himself and his clan. If he simply pretended to be conpliant and utilized the clan library and training he could be comparable to itachi. Instead he outwardly and overtly insults everyone for no reason thus drastically weakening himself. He also seems to have no agency as he lets people he cares about die (shisui/Mikoto) and does not attempt to change anything. All this MC does is get in his own way and act depressed. Anyway, perhaps there is a chance for character development in the future, but thus far this story is only okay 5.8/10.
So, this is an update to a previous review. This novel started off well, but sadly only went downhill. The way this novel one-sidedly shows the uchiha as some sort of evil masterminds and the author and mc simp for the third hokage just seems childish and cliche. The story could have had some events and dialogue happen very slightly differently and it would have been 3 times better than the way it is now. The only way I could justify some of the forced plot is that Shisui used kotoamatsukami on the mc. And we know that didn't happen. Also, if the author is planning to have the mc be with that random purple hair genin girl, he should add the romance tag.
Two chapter review. Cuz only that many as of now. First chapter was very promising, but the second one has some red flags. First of all, describing a random girl genin? Typically in stories, if something is even remotely described about a person, he/she will be important. And since it's mentioned it's a girl, I fear that the author is in a rush to collect a harem or something, which would turn this into trash. Once again, this is just a red flag as of now, but this one tends to have a 95% prediction rate. Second of all, the simping for the third hokage. I'm not saying he has to be written as some evil mastermind like in some novels, but even then he is often, at the very least, incompetent.
mc is older then itachi yet he can't prevent the killings simply dumb