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Your Paradise: Listen To My Song

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Autor: Thalia_Ilace

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Fans chanting your name, makeup artists and stylists swarming you and creating a beauty out of this world, your music playing on tv, and most of all, becoming someone's paradise...that's what Ishihara Minami had wanted since she was 12 years old.

An avenue to someone's healing process, a comfort to those who needed it, all the while looking like a princess and being loved by many. It sounded like heaven. It seemed like thousands of girls just like her managed to live out this dream that seemed so far it almost felt like it was made-up. They made it look easy....but who knew it would be so hard.

With so many people out to get you and willing to use you as a stepping stone, it seemed impossible to stay genuine in such a place. The road to her dream of becoming an idol that was filled with a roller coaster of emotions and constant lies, even she wonders if this dream will ever come into her grasp.

"How far are you willing to go?"
"I'll do anything."
"Just like they did to you?"
"No....I'll do it better than all of them combined."

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Senecio_tako

I can hear yoasobi singing in the background for some reason...The story is great, and I don't even read fl novels! It'd have been better if this was a visual novel. Minami is cute, but saki is kinda sus...Anyways, Hurray to Kissiks!Good luck, author!

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Yugong

I hope it will be good, need some sweet love tender

1yr
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Vandana_Vandana_3629

Hey guys this books are so wonderful to reading that books 📚 🤗❤️ and i liked all books 🥰😍.....i think u also enjoyed the story's and 🥰🥰.......in there books indeed in character 🥰🥰i liked very for reading this and🥰🥰🥰...... after i reading that my mind is so fresh mind and so read the i hope u all enjoyed it 🥰🥰🥰🥰....... and thank u sis urs wonderful stories 💙💙...

1yr
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Garessta

thalia, ur the best! ignore all haters, you and your books are amazing! cheers cheers cheers i wish you all the best in your writing!!!!!!!!!

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MrFay
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I have to be honest here – the writing in this piece blew me away. It's not just good; it's downright amazing. The words flowed so smoothly, and I couldn't spot a single major grammatical error. I was completely engrossed in the story.And the main character? She's an absolute delight. If I were part of that world, she'd be the one who captured my heart. Her passion for her dreams, and her undeniable cuteness – it's all so brilliantly portrayed. The way the author crafted her character, along with the others, is simply impressive.But, oh, her friends – they're a different story. Frankly, I can't stand them. Poor Minami is surrounded by these awful jerks. I can only hope she manages to deal with these snakes, and more importantly, I hope she finds the happiness she truly deserves in the end.

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Brian_Hanes_117

The background is great for this sort of story. The characters are well designed though I would recommend a bit more description of how they look just to give immersion a bit more of a boost. The updates are steady and the writing is very good. I noticed description here in neat places like of what juices the characters like to drink and of what the background looks like. That still puts description in this story above what I usually see. The grammar is mainly good but there are some minor gripes I have with it. Most of which I only see in the first chapter. For instance, "5year" is written instead of "5 year". The number should at least be spaced out from the word. With that being said, this is a high-quality novel that you can get access to FOR FREE. I recommend it. To the writer: I welcome you to have a look at "Avatar: Lingering Tensions" (ALT) which is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" (AMJ). You may want to read the first chapter of AMJ or so to get a feel for what the first story was about. But AMJ's tone changes so much that you really won't know everything unless you read a lot of it. Still, the story is written in a way that explains the essentials. It also is better if you've watched the canon motherseries "Avatar: The Last Airbender". Cheers!

1yr
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MrBtheNovelist

Stumbled across the novel while feeling down ... Pretty light hearted read, well organized and written, bursting with youthful innocence! Keep it up!

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Theothegiant

Make this into a visual novel someday please! I can tell that you had a lot of experience in writing and if not then you're just talented. I'll be sticking around to improve mine myself because i feel like i could learn alot from you!

1yr
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Crown_Nyx

Before I review I will admit I am not a fan of this genre but I will be open-minded, the story is really nice and Ishihara Minami is a character that is full of life. It's different from your average novel and has potential. I recommend it if you are into these kind of stories give it a read and see how it goes. Keep it up :)

1yr
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Blooddoctor

Guess what... I am excited when I keep flipping the pages and finding more. Author has put much efforts. The writing is smooth and the idea is interesting and this book connects with me so well. Keep writing, author!

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TheHatedAuthor

The drama grips your heart, and the author really brings to life her various characters through their quirks and interactions. She updates constantly and makes her writing skill abundantly clear in a variety of different moments. Well done!

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Kakashi_PCB

It's tough for me to really give an effective review as I don't naturally read FL often or at all. Some of the things I can comment on are that I think the writing itself is very fluid and natural and doesn't break my immersion at all. The English and grammar alike are very solid. If I had to change something writing-wise, it would be some of the longer paragraphs. I understand that sometimes a longer paragraph can be necessary, but some of them could always be broken into two or even more separate pieces. Stability looks solid from what I've seen so far. Loving the story and everything. Check this one out!

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LazyAngel

Oh, review for first 10 chapters! This was such a great start. I didn't expect that I will be this intrigued by the world of idols and it's tosses and turns. I could feel the hard work put into this from the author to which I say, good job! The characters are great, they feel real and fleshed out with their own goals and motives for their actions. The world is modern earth from what I can see but still could be worked on to show a different way the idol world would've affected it. The story development although slow, isn't by any means heavy or daunting to read. However, there are also cons: the structure of the pargraphs is kind of out of the norm compared to normal WN books. There is more dialogue then necessary in some parts which might make it feel like a movie script rather than a book.All in all, this book is a great read and I look forward to more chapters. Will keep an eye on it :)

1yr
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Pendulum_

Naturally 😂 I'm not the biggest reader or FL but then again I watch KDrama and naturally can relate with novels like that because I can just try and picture it in that sort of setting. The writing quality is way better than mine 😭 these FL writers and their quality in writing is something I wish have. Anyway, it's definitely a good book and I hope the best for it and the beautiful author, my crush... Jkjkjk... or am I?

1yr
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Garessta

this is really not my kind of story. shouldn't have clicked on teen genre... i believe in author's ability to make deep interesting characters and etc, but teen? nope. im too adult for this. but for everyone who likes cute girls doing cute things, this is your story

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Espiritu_Santu

It's good, hmmm.... . . . . . . But I think, it's lacking of impact in character introduction, and just a touch of emotional depth and immersive writing and everything was perfect. (I read the whole chapter 1)

1yr
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Chapter 124: Ch 121: Listen to My Song 1 years ago

Volumen 1

  1. 1
    Ch 01: The Audition 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Ch 02: Entering The Group 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Ch 03: Decisions, Decisions Part 1 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Ch 03: Decisions, Decisions Part 2 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Ch 04: Who's the Leader? 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Ch 05: Determination!!! 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Ch 06: Will You Cheer For Me? 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Ch 07: Star Who Fell From the Sky 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Ch 08: What Happened to Minami? 1 years ago
  10. 10
    Ch 09: SUN MEDIA 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Ch 10: My Smile Days~ 1 years ago
  12. 12
    Ch 11: "I'll See You on the Stage!" 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Ch 12: Creating a Canvas 1 years ago
  14. 14
    Ch 13: A Risky Game 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Ch 14: These Are My Days 1 years ago
  16. 16
    Ch 15: Twinkle In My Heart 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Ch 16: Is It Really a Smile Day? 1 years ago
  18. 18
    Ch 17: A New Career Path?! 1 years ago
  19. 19
    Ch 18: Dangerous Love 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Ch 19: Happy Wave Entertainment 1 years ago
  21. 21
    Ch 20: Miss No Name 1 years ago
  22. 22
    Ch 21: Happy Birthday! 1 years ago
  23. 23
    Ch 22: From My Boyfriend 1 years ago
  24. 24
    Ch 23: Run to You 1 years ago
  25. 25
    Ch 24: What a Useless Girl 1 years ago
  26. 26
    Ch 25: Drop That Flop! 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Ch 26: I Don't Know Him 1 years ago
  28. 28
    Ch 27: How Bad Do You Want it? 1 years ago
  29. 29
    Ch 28: Day & Night 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Ch 29: I'll Be Your Pearl 1 years ago
  31. 31
    Ch 30: I Have a Surprise For You 1 years ago
  32. 32
    Ch 31: Lemonade & Strawberry Short Cake 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Ch 32: I'd Gladly Be Your Knight 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Ch 33 - The Not So Smile Days 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Ch 34: I'm sorry everyone! 1 years ago
  36. 36
    Ch 35: Why Can't We? 1 years ago
  37. 37
    Ch 36: My Wings 1 years ago
  38. 38
    Ch 37: The Solution To Our Problems 1 years ago
  39. 39
    Ch 38: Misunderstandings 1 years ago
  40. 40
    Ch 39: I'll do anything for debut! 1 years ago
  41. 41
    Ch 40: Playing with adults 1 years ago
  42. 42
    Ch 41: There is Nothing 1 years ago
  43. 43
    Ch 42: Rise 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Ch 43: Stickiness of the Web 1 years ago
  45. 45
    Ch 44: Congrats! 1 years ago
  46. 46
    Ch 45: Fantasy Love 1 years ago
  47. 47
    Ch 46: Wishing on a Star 1 years ago
  48. 48
    Ch 47: Nothing 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Ch 48: Be More Bubbly 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Ch 49: I Want to Be an Idol 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Ch 50: Please help 1 years ago
  52. 52
    Ch 51: We are Nothing 1 years ago
  53. 53
    Ch 52: Can I hear you sing? 1 years ago
  54. 54
    [Bonus chapter]Ch 53: Pinky Promise 1 years ago
  55. 55
    Ch 54: We Can Do This! 1 years ago
  56. 56
    Ch 55: Portfolio Photos 1 years ago
  57. 57
    Ch 56: A Professional 1 years ago
  58. 58
    Ch 57: Awakening of Avalon 1 years ago
  59. 59
    Ch 58: Hesitations 1 years ago
  60. 60
    Ch 59: It's Your Dream Right? 1 years ago
  61. 61
    Ch 60: Milky Way 1 years ago
  62. 62
    Ch 61: The Stress 1 years ago
  63. 63
    Ch 62: The Difference Between You and I 1 years ago
  64. 64
    Ch 63: The "It Factor" 1 years ago
  65. 65
    Ch 64: Fire 1 years ago
  66. 66
    Ch 65: Wonderland Gardens 1 years ago
  67. 67
    Ch 66: The Claim 1 years ago
  68. 68
    Ch 67: Fruits of Our Labor 1 years ago
  69. 69
    Ch 68: Bed or Couch? 1 years ago
  70. 70
    Ch 69: Way Back Then 1 years ago
  71. 71
    Ch 70: Let's Form a Team! 1 years ago
  72. 72
    Ch 71: That's Fate 1 years ago
  73. 73
    Ch 72: Tree of Tears 1 years ago
  74. 74
    Ch 73: CEO YUU 1 years ago
  75. 75
    Ch 74: Practice Makes Perfect 1 years ago
  76. 76
    Ch 75: Dinner for Two 1 years ago
  77. 77
    Ch 76: Forest of Disappointments Part 1 1 years ago
  78. 78
    Ch 76: Forest of Disappointments Part 2 1 years ago
  79. 79
    Ch 76: Forest of Disappointments Part 3 1 years ago
  80. 80
    Ch 77: Congratulations 1 years ago
  81. 81
    Ch 78: Tree of Tears LIVE! 1 years ago
  82. 82
    Ch 79: Cue You! 1 years ago
  83. 83
    Ch 80: Encourage Your Juniors! 1 years ago
  84. 84
    Ch 81: Goodie Goodie 1 years ago
  85. 85
    Ch 82: Soaring 1 years ago
  86. 86
    Ch 83: Kiss in the Clouds 1 years ago
  87. 87
    Ch 84: A Coffee Kiss 1 years ago
  88. 88
    Ch 85: I'm your Fan! 1 years ago
  89. 89
    Ch 86: I Meant What I said 1 years ago
  90. 90
    Ch 87: Just Have Fun 1 years ago
  91. 91
    Ch 88: You Know Better Than That 1 years ago
  92. 92
    Ch 89: Studio Picnic 1 years ago
  93. 93
    Ch 90: Bubble Clouds and Kisses 1 years ago
  94. 94
    Ch 91: Is This Your Scene? 1 years ago
  95. 95
    Ch 92: I Have Feelings For you! 1 years ago
  96. 96
    Ch 93: Only when You're Done 1 years ago
  97. 97
    Ch 94: That's a Wrap 1 years ago
  98. 98
    Ch 95: Winter Paradise 1 years ago
  99. 99
    Ch 96: The Crash 1 years ago
  100. 100
    Ch 97: Shattered Memories 1 years ago
  101. 101
    Ch 98: Craving Your Warmth 1 years ago
  102. 102
    Ch 99: It's All My Fault 1 years ago
  103. 103
    Ch 100: It's Going To Be a Success 1 years ago
  104. 104
    Ch 101: We're a Team 1 years ago
  105. 105
    Ch 102: The Road To... 1 years ago
  106. 106
    Ch 103: We Are Soaring 1 years ago
  107. 107
    Ch 104: The Schedule 1 years ago
  108. 108
    Ch 105: Love Plume 1 years ago
  109. 109
    Ch 106: Beware of the Bully 1 years ago
  110. 110
    Ch 107: Just Trust Me 1 years ago
  111. 111
    Ch 108: The Facade 1 years ago
  112. 112
    Ch 109: This is.... 1 years ago
  113. 113
    Ch 110: Clarity 1 years ago
  114. 114
    Ch 111: A Snake In the Grass 1 years ago
  115. 115
    Ch 112: How Evil You Were..... 1 years ago
  116. 116
    Ch 113: I Will Always Rise Again 1 years ago
  117. 117
    Ch 114: Always On The Go 1 years ago
  118. 118
    Ch 115: Mighty Mind 1 years ago
  119. 119
    Ch 116: Music Now 1 years ago
  120. 120
    Ch 117: The Love Between Us 1 years ago
  121. 121
    Ch 118: My Future as an Artist 1 years ago
  122. 122
    Ch 119: Reflections 1 years ago
  123. 123
    Ch 120: My Family 1 years ago
  124. 124
    Ch 121: Listen to My Song 1 years ago
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