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Slower than snail. Following the "cannon" like religious fanatics follow holy books. Really dull and unimaginative.
Love it great book hope you continue the story and make more like it !!
It's a pretty entertaining story. Some of the harem parts are a bit forced, but that goes for almost the entire genre, especially in fanfics set in worlds where polygamy isn't widely accepted. It's interesting to see the character growth, and all the cool armor, etc. It has some slow story arcs, but it doesn't affect the reading pace too much other than in the beginning. My only real problem with it comes very late in the story because of how ridiculously OP the MC starts to get and he does it at a very fast pace. At some point he just feels like an overly powerful protagonist who simply chooses to call himself Batman, rather than feeling like Batman. For those who like OP protagonists, that may be fine, but to me it feels like there's no challenge or danger that would really make him push himself unless he chooses not to pull out the OP stuff he keeps in his back pocket, which makes it feel artificial and pointless.
This story is written very well, I haven't found any grammar mistakes so far. Logically, the story is flowing well with no plot holes that I could spot right on. Personally I stopped reading at chapter 20 cuz I didn't like the fact the MC was still a child and apparently will be a child for quite a while. The author said the MC's childhood is one of the major parts in this fanfic and for me, honestly, I don't feel like reading about child MC. I've waited to get a Time Skip to his adulthood but from what the author said it won't happen anytime soon so I got bored and dropped it. But I only give this fanfic a 1 star on the Character Design and everything else was 4-5 stars.
I loove this book. Batman is one of my favorite characters of all time. And i think somethings could’ve been done better it is still a solid book
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God_Doom Keep up the great work Can you please do this DC fanfic called Young Justice: Omnitrix after DC: I am Bruce Wayne Being reborn in the world of Young Justice, which is full of superheroes and villains, is not what Samuel Summers had in mind. Fortunately, he was given a gift: the power of the Recalibrated Omnitrix from Ben 10 Alien Force. He decides to be a supervillain because becoming a superhero is too predictable and formulaic. Being a villain sounds fun and thrilling. Harem Tanya Fox Christina Bell Roulette Shimmer Tala Circe Paula Crock Hadiyah Tuppence Terror Ilona DeLamb Markov Helga Jace Serling Raquette Giganta J'arila J'axx S'yraa S'mitt Noor Harjavti Sha’lain’a Big Barda Carol Ferris Talia Al Ghul Lady Shiva Whisper A’Daire Sarah Charles Olga Ilyich Helena Sandsmark Poison Ivy Devastation His Looks
First of all , I humbly thank the author for giving us this book secondly ( coughing ) ... Check out my own fanfic based of the Infinite genre
A good enjoyable story. But the main problem is the updates. It toooooo slow. Barely over 100 chs after 9 months. Sorry. But dropping it here.
Absolutely fantastic. Really looking forward to the future of the story. The finance and interesting new gadgets and powers you give batman make the action stuff so cool. Also great choice added Deathstroke as a teacher. Keep it up.
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I'm doing this review on the 100 Chapter of this fanfic I have always liked the author writing and his consistent release dates of chapters and the fact that he actually responses to the comments and answers questions and I like the way that he uses the full capabilities of the characters intelligence and not just dumb him down for the plot anyway this is my first review of any fanfic I have ever read and I highly recommend you read this fic if you like weak to strong/OP MC's that are actually smart
Takes 80 chapters for anything to happen better off reading anything else.
Круто Жду продолжения👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍ddsfdgegrgegeggGsggrgtybyhtgrfedwdwdeddefeg
[img=actualizar][img=recomendar]pues-........ por qué no hay maaaaaaas, esta buena solo que es muy poca, me gustaría que fueran un poquito más largo los episodios, aunque solo fueran cosas que el autor quiera menciona
Not for me. Posing this just to remember. .............................................................................................................................
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Сила у героя весьма необычная, но при этом очень даже мощная и многогранная. Радует, что он не становится сразу самым сильным или умным, даже с такими плюшками придётся попотеть. Успехов в творчестве и жду продолжения.
I got bored of reading, the childhood saga is a sleeping pill and there is nothing that motivates me to read this
Man, I found these phrases from well-known characters that convey relevant knowledge in our lives at the beginning of each chapter really cool.
Buena .la historia es buena . No que alguna historia de batman fuera mala. Pero oa tuya es la mejor que hay [img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]
MC is an SI from our earth (which means, aware of several FF's &/or comics/movie/tv/novel series of several stories that include DCVerse)MC is too indecisive/lame. Lack of willpower & intuitive mind even though he has perfect recall and forges mutant power. Too afraid of changing plots due to author lack of creativeness Story itself is a slice of life style of writing & too much info dump (slow MC & story progression). Lack of utilisation of his previous life knowledge & experiences.The story itself lacks author creativity & based on the reviews itself a possibility that author deletes negative reviews.Author has the guts to create a Patreon even though the story/FF itself is like a batman origins side story which is quite laughable xD
I like , love to see more chapters ~ The three Love interest also something i can't wait to see . Good job bro , keep updating. I like , love to see more chapters ~ The three Love interest also something i can't wait to see . Good job bro , keep updating.
good story, I could disagree with many things but it is one of the few and best with batman and harem, I hope it continues like this and does not deviate like many other stories in quality and history
is it yuri i mean even in threesome do girls kiss eachother ?? like girls getting sexual in eachother ?? ..................................................
I really like your writing, so I would like to ask for permission to translate this novel of yours into my language. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Slower than snail. Following the "cannon" like religious fanatics follow holy books. Really dull and unimaginative.
Love it great book hope you continue the story and make more like it !!
It's a pretty entertaining story. Some of the harem parts are a bit forced, but that goes for almost the entire genre, especially in fanfics set in worlds where polygamy isn't widely accepted. It's interesting to see the character growth, and all the cool armor, etc. It has some slow story arcs, but it doesn't affect the reading pace too much other than in the beginning. My only real problem with it comes very late in the story because of how ridiculously OP the MC starts to get and he does it at a very fast pace. At some point he just feels like an overly powerful protagonist who simply chooses to call himself Batman, rather than feeling like Batman. For those who like OP protagonists, that may be fine, but to me it feels like there's no challenge or danger that would really make him push himself unless he chooses not to pull out the OP stuff he keeps in his back pocket, which makes it feel artificial and pointless.
This story is written very well, I haven't found any grammar mistakes so far. Logically, the story is flowing well with no plot holes that I could spot right on. Personally I stopped reading at chapter 20 cuz I didn't like the fact the MC was still a child and apparently will be a child for quite a while. The author said the MC's childhood is one of the major parts in this fanfic and for me, honestly, I don't feel like reading about child MC. I've waited to get a Time Skip to his adulthood but from what the author said it won't happen anytime soon so I got bored and dropped it. But I only give this fanfic a 1 star on the Character Design and everything else was 4-5 stars.
I loove this book. Batman is one of my favorite characters of all time. And i think somethings could’ve been done better it is still a solid book
Amazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing AmazingAmazing Amazing Amazing Amazing
God_Doom Keep up the great work Can you please do this DC fanfic called Young Justice: Omnitrix after DC: I am Bruce Wayne Being reborn in the world of Young Justice, which is full of superheroes and villains, is not what Samuel Summers had in mind. Fortunately, he was given a gift: the power of the Recalibrated Omnitrix from Ben 10 Alien Force. He decides to be a supervillain because becoming a superhero is too predictable and formulaic. Being a villain sounds fun and thrilling. Harem Tanya Fox Christina Bell Roulette Shimmer Tala Circe Paula Crock Hadiyah Tuppence Terror Ilona DeLamb Markov Helga Jace Serling Raquette Giganta J'arila J'axx S'yraa S'mitt Noor Harjavti Sha’lain’a Big Barda Carol Ferris Talia Al Ghul Lady Shiva Whisper A’Daire Sarah Charles Olga Ilyich Helena Sandsmark Poison Ivy Devastation His Looks
First of all , I humbly thank the author for giving us this book secondly ( coughing ) ... Check out my own fanfic based of the Infinite genre
A good enjoyable story. But the main problem is the updates. It toooooo slow. Barely over 100 chs after 9 months. Sorry. But dropping it here.
Absolutely fantastic. Really looking forward to the future of the story. The finance and interesting new gadgets and powers you give batman make the action stuff so cool. Also great choice added Deathstroke as a teacher. Keep it up.
Spoiler enthüllen I'm doing this review on the 100 Chapter of this fanfic I have always liked the author writing and his consistent release dates of chapters and the fact that he actually responses to the comments and answers questions and I like the way that he uses the full capabilities of the characters intelligence and not just dumb him down for the plot anyway this is my first review of any fanfic I have ever read and I highly recommend you read this fic if you like weak to strong/OP MC's that are actually smart
Takes 80 chapters for anything to happen better off reading anything else.
Круто Жду продолжения👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍ddsfdgegrgegeggGsggrgtybyhtgrfedwdwdeddefeg
[img=actualizar][img=recomendar]pues-........ por qué no hay maaaaaaas, esta buena solo que es muy poca, me gustaría que fueran un poquito más largo los episodios, aunque solo fueran cosas que el autor quiera menciona
Not for me. Posing this just to remember. .............................................................................................................................
................................................................. ................................................................. ................................................................. ................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................
Сила у героя весьма необычная, но при этом очень даже мощная и многогранная. Радует, что он не становится сразу самым сильным или умным, даже с такими плюшками придётся попотеть. Успехов в творчестве и жду продолжения.
I got bored of reading, the childhood saga is a sleeping pill and there is nothing that motivates me to read this
Man, I found these phrases from well-known characters that convey relevant knowledge in our lives at the beginning of each chapter really cool.
Buena .la historia es buena . No que alguna historia de batman fuera mala. Pero oa tuya es la mejor que hay [img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]
MC is an SI from our earth (which means, aware of several FF's &/or comics/movie/tv/novel series of several stories that include DCVerse)MC is too indecisive/lame. Lack of willpower & intuitive mind even though he has perfect recall and forges mutant power. Too afraid of changing plots due to author lack of creativeness Story itself is a slice of life style of writing & too much info dump (slow MC & story progression). Lack of utilisation of his previous life knowledge & experiences.The story itself lacks author creativity & based on the reviews itself a possibility that author deletes negative reviews.Author has the guts to create a Patreon even though the story/FF itself is like a batman origins side story which is quite laughable xD
I like , love to see more chapters ~ The three Love interest also something i can't wait to see . Good job bro , keep updating. I like , love to see more chapters ~ The three Love interest also something i can't wait to see . Good job bro , keep updating.
good story, I could disagree with many things but it is one of the few and best with batman and harem, I hope it continues like this and does not deviate like many other stories in quality and history
is it yuri i mean even in threesome do girls kiss eachother ?? like girls getting sexual in eachother ?? ..................................................
I really like your writing, so I would like to ask for permission to translate this novel of yours into my language. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]