Reviews of The Immortal in Marvel by Almostaslave - Webnovel

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Almostaslave

Hmm, this one is to not break the 5-star streak. Anyways, jokes aside, as the EDITOR who is removing all the Chinese references and racial jokes and replacing them with some of mine, I will answer all the questions in the replies of this comment. Treat this review as an query box for this ff. An answer to a common question - No, this ain't a harem.

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Underworld000

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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_LordRavenclaw

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Ducks123

Love the story but are you still interested in this one and if you are when are you coming back no rush👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍

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Retardedmadman

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AFJDS

Hope there’s more, really liked the last few chapters I read before reviewing (70 something?).

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Kakarot_D_Uchiha

i love the writing the development and plz make mc single or someone overpowerd girlfrnd like galactus daughter., death ,scarlet witch ,phoenix . not cpt marvel

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Bouncy_Beast

the BEST... this is hilarious. writing is good and can read easily. story flows beautifully. doesnt feel anything is forced. best marvel fanfic I found so far anywhere (believe me I have read all marvel fanfics). I read 78 chapters in 2 days even though I have a exam the next day, thats how much I was hooked in this story. author please continue ❤️❤️❤️

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I_love_BBC

Really niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeniceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeniceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeniceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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kakupandey

This novel is so compelling that it inspires me to write comments in order to truly express my appreciation for its content.

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hero4hire

One of the funniest novel i've read in a while. Make me laugh so loud neighbor had to come and check if i was okay lol... Hope to see more from the author.

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GOD_CREATOR

Dude this is one of the best marvel fanfic i have ever read and the main character is also one of the best. You just need to work on your updating stability because that is the only way you might be able to finsh translating this piece of art, you should atleast put a target of 1 chapter a day otherwise it might take you years just to rech ch 200 or so.

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RealityBender

hilarious all i can say it gets more and more after chp20

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khanderblander

me encanta , lei hasta el capitulo 212 y sigue mejorando en todo, esta misma novela existe en webnovel con errores pero existe , Man in MARVEL: Starting with Immortal Body , pero lleva 4 meses sin actualizarse y en el RAW tambien solo tienen hasta 217 capitulos

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Nizam_Zainudin

what a great novel because it is able to provide comedy that makes me laugh out loud😂 I love this novel and highly recommend it. if you have read this novel you will know why this novel is recommended, the main character is very funny

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krishna0512

Very good story. I dont know if the editor removed all the chinese cliches or the original fanfic was like this only, but its very rare that I find any chinese translation worth reading.

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Darkleaff

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LordFool

I really enjoy this ff, I hope u can update more. But I hope u will maintain it's quality. Thank you 😍😍

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Andrew_Edwards_0410

If I could give this more stars I would. the author has written Deadpool and the MC almost perfectly. its not too over the top like some fanfics I've read or bad. I hope it stays that way.

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MadLogic999

This fanfic doesn't seem like a Chinese ff at all. Good job editing it author. Finally a Chinese ff that doesn't belong to chinaverse. The characters talk like proper humans. At first I was reluctant to read this because is really don't like to read Chinese ff cause they talk like they are in some cultivation world. In one ff I read even nick fury is saying courting death. But here the author did a good job editing no more Chinaverse. Also the main character is funny and ruthless and hase same personality as Deadpool. Overall a good fanfic. Thank you author and more chapters please.

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TheUlbertAlainOdle

Legendary Work!!! The humor fits and the story is peak too. Keep it up! This u:🤴? [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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Zika_Rinki

give me more. more. more more more more more

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Axion_

Você tem feito um trabalho incrível. Espero que não largue essa edição, só a taxa de lançamento poderia ser melhor, 5 estrelas pra fazer a média.

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NewbieOtor

can you please update? I dont like the mtl it makes my head hurts

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al_jamil

.........menghibur... Ga.. Bikin............................. Bosan........ ......... ....m.. . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ...... .. . . .. . . . . . ..c.. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .........

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IamLaboon

that's good, friend, with an editor that removes elements of Chinese worship, this novel is easier to read without causing headaches. continue your struggle.

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Goat1king

============================================================================================================== awesome story =======================================================

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Max_Maxsimus

Removing the racial joke? Let Go!!!!!!!!

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Gazing_Reaper

This is a must read novel author please update fast,it really deserve 5 stars rating

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Efthee

Very Funny Crack type of fic. do give it a try~

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Mea_Cu1pa

Soy el señor de la guerra Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka y hablo con la palabra de loz diozez. ¡Soy el profeta del WAAAGH! y mundos enteroz arderán en las huellas de mis botas «. – Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka