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Hey, I'm gonna give you suggestions and take them to heart or not, but I recommend making the stories shorter but have more progression like, "At the time of when he got into the forest he started to look around", not the best writer my self or at all just a suggestion other than that keep it up
Hey, I'm gonna give you suggestions and take them to heart or not, but I recommend making the stories shorter but have more progression like, "At the time of when he got into the forest he started to look around", not the best writer my self or at all just a suggestion other than that keep it up