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(COMPLETE) A Murder Wizards Adventures

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Autor: Bored_MC

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[Read my reviews, they are better at explaining than me.]

A Naruto Kinda SI, starting in the Second Shinobi war, doing lots of ninja stuff. I plan to make use of things I feel don't get enough attention, like the academy three.
MC will be in ANBU and won't be op, though who knows what the future holds?
Oh, and he's Sakura's uncle.
Though he won't really interact with her.
I also have a Pat reon for donations and advance chapters.
https://www.patreon.com/user/membership?u=41732867
Also have a discord.
https://discord.gg/Pj3Dttwses
Also I don't own Naruto, obviously, nor do i own anything else mentioned or referenced except for my OC's

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44Kane
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First and foremost, I am dyslexic, so I use text to speech to listen to Chapters, with that out of the way, here is my review. Writing Quality: So far as I can hear, while listening to the chapter, there are no grammar issues, so five stars for that. (It's quite easy to hear if there are grammar issues.) Stability of Updates: He uploads two chapters a day, and it's stable so far, (Chapter 36) so five stars as well. Story Development: It's the best Naruto fanfiction I've listen to so far, though the story development is slow paste, but never to the degree of being boring, and the main character doesn't become OP, (At this point in the story) at the same time I don't feel like he's a weakling, which is very good, another thing that's good is, though the main character is a sociopath, he is not edgy, (Other than the first time he kills, he's kind of edgy there,) apart from that he's just a battle maniac, oh and the story progression is very good. for story development Five stars. Character Design: he doesn't describe characters very much, but enough to gain a basic picture of what they look like, oh and he describes battle scenes quite well, apart from that there isn't very much else to say. Four stars, World Background: So far as I can tell, he does a excellent job at using what's already there and expanding on it, and it sounds logical to me at least. (what he expands on) Five stars, not much else to say about this subject. Overall Thoughts: A excellent story, definitely worth a read, one of my favorite stories so far, in my top 10 at least, that's it, can't really be bothered to write anything else. (This took me around half an hour to write, don't know if that's long or short, whatever.)

2yr
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Charreos

THE best story I've ever rad, hands down a fuc-ing masterpiece, the development is INSANE the attention to detail is INSANE even the pace is absolutely PERFECT, not to mention the comedy in this fic is absolute GOLD I highly suggest anyone to read this masterpiece, don't get turned down by the sociopathic MC because it was done beautifully, I admit I was skeptical that this was another edgy fake sociopath MC before I rad but I genuinely think this is top 3 fanfic material

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1yr
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Vidhan_Bhardwaj

I rarely ever write reviews and only on The stories that made me feel things this , this hit really close to my ❤️ For new readers the canon ending is till the Chapter named "It was fun while it lasted" or something i forgor the point is reading beyond that will leave a bad taste in yo mouth , Gold comedy , unique and True to it's core charachter design not overly Op but not too Weak , Morally "I DON'T KNOW" section type vut not a straight villain In the end i want you , the new guys to read this good book and not get backtracked like me who read this absolute banger after keeping it for three months in Library

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1yr
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Linked_Lord

Mc is edgy , a cardboard cutout . Writing quality is good . His whole first kill experience put me off the story , like i "get" it is personal experience or whatever, but those sorts of main characters don't appeal to me , overall pretty good writing but does not do anything for me personally

2yr
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SpoiledSecrets

Author tried to combine dark undertones and comedy, unsurprisingly, it didnt go well.

1yr
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Done_Abvall

The MC is a sociopath and a fighting maniac adrenalin junkye, but he aint a psyco edgy sadistic villain who goes around murking people for fun. Wich means he is quite suitable for the setting, any normal, modern day person who reincarnates in Naruto would go crazy. MC goes straight to ANBU, no 50 academy chaps, wich is quite refreshing. Good writing too, author knows his comedy.

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2yr
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AnotherAtlas

Perhaps the author can write better, but even if he can, he doesn't do it, so it often annoys me when I see simple grammar mistakes. When it says murder wizard, I kind of expected him to go independent, but maybe he'll leave the village later. Character is mostly fine, just that I'd prefer he kept being a bit more in control when he has an adrenaline rush. Lowered score mainly cause of the grammar and the decision for him to have loved ones in the story. It's not what I'm expecting when I click to read a story called "a murder wizards adventures".

2yr
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JoSauer
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Its actually genuinly good. Normaly Anime ff are at most entertaining. It shows the Ninja World from a different persepctive which normaly ends in a story turning out quite bad but here the author is masterful enought to make it happen. Do recognize though that the Mc is a very damaged person and that his character is disturbing at times. It does make him fit very well into the Naruto world though. He is almost a perfect fit for it character wise.

1yr
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RexHarris

This story has some flaws, but despite that it’s still an really enjoyable read. First the problem: MC can be kind of strange at times. It’s a SI and has some of the typical problems they can have. The other characters are done pretty well. It helps that they are mostly ANBU and quite anyways. My biggest gripe is probably using the academy 3 as super powerful just because it personally breaks immersion. But cannon is kind of iffy with them. There are some more minor things that aren’t a big deal at least to me. Pros: The biggest Pro for me and the reason it gets bonus points is the OC and the timeline. There is hardly any fanfics with MC in the anbu and it’ really enjoyable to read about it. A lot of the content is original which is great as it is new and not the exact same cannon that’s been slightly altered in tons of fics. Updates have also been great and author interacts with readers Overal a good naruto fanfic.

2yr
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Bored_MC

Shameless author 5 star review. Honestly i don't really have a plan for this, i just want to write about cool ninja stuff, so you can think of this like a spy novel, there will be a focus on missions, mainly infiltration and some assassination as well as combat. ummm, please be nice? and enjoy of course! :>

2yr
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Ashir_Ahmad

so I read 30 chapters, i will be coming back to finish it later(maybe). I am just put off by the constant gay jokes MC makes, and he even ended up impersonating a gay ninja, and had to put that guy in genjutsu so he won't have to f**k that dude. if it did not feel so forced it would have been better(maybe).besides I dunno if you have ever had this kind of friend, but those people that would make anything about gay s*x. that's the type of person MC is with his friends. example MC was impaled by a sword when he is healing and his friend show up at the hospital to ask about his health. MC says you wish it was your sword rearranging my organs. ofcourse refering to s*x and not actual sword. if that type of MC's aren't something that bothers you the story is quite decent. the pace seems very slow for the amount of chapters it is completed in. By chapter thirty 2nd ninja war is going on still. So either there are big time skips later or the story is rushed, or maybe the story ends much earlier than where cannon Naruto Shippuden ended. peace

10mth
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Mr_Potatochu

it is a story with many mistakes tho it is entertaining now give me more entertaining or i go and bash your head with a biiiiiiiiiiiiig stick in a paralel universe of course im too lazy to do it here tho make your mc be very muscular like hokuto no ken muscular

2yr
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Ajay_raj

Not a fan of this story, very difficult to get into and absolutely outlandish. Lots of gaps in the plot and not even remotely logical. Might be the intention of this novel was this particular style of writing, but even if it is a slice of life there is scope for improvement.

10mth
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SOMMO_ARCANO

the story is not bad, but as a fanfiction it's worth it, the characters are different from the naruto canon and behaving like people of our age (21st century) only with the addition of ninjas and murders, the story is like a comedy with the adding some parts like murders (he's in the ninja world so ok) but the fusion wasn't too good, mc can't control himself or at least he's like a teenager who instead of hormones is full of adrenaline, the author doesn't know much about naruto and there there are many cerebral additions by the author on how things work, there it is true that it is a medieval world but there are nobles, damaio (I don't know if it is spelled like that) who are like the emperors of the nations who control the people, the science of naruto is very advanced on par and even higher in some areas and it is also very widespread (some territories have cars and armor almost ironman level (it's not quite like that but it will give you an idea, even ninja school actually practice physics on kunai, and stuff like that you're basically high school and college level Other then this problems and the knowledge from naruto this is good story but if u want read naruto fanfiction i dont suggest u this (if u are expert from naruto but if u like and want ignore di little problem i suggest u this also remember this is a MAN in child body so when he dont act like a child is normal)

1yr
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timberlord

literally a modern fanfic that has naruto names and theme. no one acts like they should in naruto, MC is quite honestly bland af and doesnt make me remember him a little bit. if this was an original i would keep reading but this being naruto is kinda bad cause there is no immersion, i just feel like the characters and their interaction is how you would expect it to be happen in a 21st century world minus all the ninja murder stuff

1yr
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Jade_beauty

It is a truly exceptional story that (in my opinion) is pretty cool. I rate this story 15 Gargamels out of 22 Smurfettes. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for something decent.

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2yr
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Zetso
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Great story...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
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charles_wheeler

it's best this stays discontinued so it save us a lot of heartache for main characters. though the story turn out alright but the OC never actually have a proper ending to begin with. but also sad the MC have to be killed off just to fill the OC for more power. but still good story, not one I'll appreciate though

1yr
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skumnut
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everything about the story is good, from writing quality to world background but the MC is making very sexual jokes when he is younger than 10 and that just doesn't sit right with me and makes me question if the author is into stuff like that.

1yr
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Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume

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Volumen 1

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    1 Linkaru Startou 2 years ago
  2. 2
    2 year 1 2 years ago
  3. 3
    3 discovery 2 years ago
  4. 4
    4 Plans 2 years ago
  5. 5
    5 Academy start 2 years ago
  6. 6
    6 The great heist of '69 2 years ago
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    7 First day and more discoveries 2 years ago
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    8 Finally some fun! 2 years ago
  9. 9
    9 Job interview 2 years ago
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    10 Test. 2 years ago
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    11 acceptance 2 years ago
  12. 12
    12 Introductions 2 years ago
  13. 13
    13 a lot of Chakra theory 2 years ago
  14. 14
    14 Jutsu! Finally! 2 years ago
  15. 15
    15 Putting the Murder in Murder Wizard 2 years ago
  16. 16
    16 Therapy! 2 years ago
  17. 17
    17 First taste of combat. 2 years ago
  18. 18
    18 Mission success? 2 years ago
  19. 19
    19 Fuck I didn't plan for this. 2 years ago
  20. 20
    20 The return of the king 2 years ago
  21. 21
    21 Not quite home yet. 2 years ago
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    22 Therapy 2 electric boogaloo 2 years ago
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    23 So cool I do drugs. 2 years ago
  24. 24
    24 Hey, you, you're finally awake. 2 years ago
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    25 Go to school 2 years ago
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    26 War, war never changes 2 years ago
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    27 Small time-skip, cuz I want to be an adult already. 2 years ago
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    28 Devotion 2 years ago
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    29 Self-Sacrifice 2 years ago
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    30 Death 2 years ago
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    31 Run Forest, Run 2 years ago
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    32 Heart to uh, Mask? 2 years ago
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    33 Therapy the third 2 years ago
  34. 34
    34 The boys 2 years ago
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    35 Training 2 years ago
  36. 36
    36 First time 2 years ago
  37. 37
    37 Not really happy with this chapter 2 years ago
  38. 38
    38 Why did I do this? 2 years ago
  39. 39
    39 More time-skip for the same reason 2 years ago
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    40 This seems familiar... 2 years ago
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    41 Fall, guys 2 years ago
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    42 Slice of life? part 1 2 years ago
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    43 Slice of Life Part 2 2 years ago
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    44 End times? 2 years ago
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    45 Shots! Shots! Shots! 2 years ago
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    46 Aftermath 2 years ago
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    47 New mission 2 years ago
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    48 Le Beninging 2 years ago
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    49 Silly Swords 2 years ago
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    50 Close one! 2 years ago
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    51 Torny start 2 years ago
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    52 Tourny 2 Electric boogaloo 2 years ago
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    53 Return trip 2 years ago
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    54 Fun times ahead 2 years ago
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    55 Date 1 years ago
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    56 Date 2 Electric boogaloo 1 years ago
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    57 Date the Finale 1 years ago
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    58 Handing in Homework 1 years ago
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    Kushina Interlude 1 years ago
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    59 Awww shit, here we go again. 1 years ago
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    60 First impressions are important! 1 years ago
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    61 I didn't expect this to happen 1 years ago
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    62 Hell hath no fury. 1 years ago
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    63 Return of the King 2 Electric boogaloo 1 years ago
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    64 More missions 1 years ago
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    65 Shots! 2 Electric Boogaloo 1 years ago
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    66 Samurai arc, Get! 1 years ago
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    67 Promotion? 1 years ago
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    68 Suki Vision 1 years ago
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    69 Nice 1 years ago
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    70 Trust. Like in that Matt Damon movie. The one with the wall. 1 years ago
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    71 Shady meetings are the best meetings. 1 years ago
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    72 Suki Vision 2 Electric Boogaloo 1 years ago
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    73 It's not about the money 1 years ago
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    74 The inevitable training arc 1 years ago
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    75 Permission slip 1 years ago
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    76 Understanding 1 years ago
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    77 Insert Title Here 1 years ago
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    Minato Interlude 1 years ago
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    Yoshino Interlude 1 years ago
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    78 Return of the King 3 1 years ago
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    79 It's Just a Prank bro 1 years ago
  83. 83
    80 Don't get wet 1 years ago
  84. 84
    81 It Begins 1 years ago
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    82 I'm not crazy, it's a perfectly valid strategy 1 years ago
  86. 86
    83 And Thus, a Legend is Born 1 years ago
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    84 Standing here 1 years ago
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    85 I realise 1 years ago
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    86 That you were just like me 1 years ago
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    87 Trying to Make History 1 years ago
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    88 But who's to judge 1 years ago
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    89 The right from wrong 1 years ago
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    90 How to Traumatise Your Kids 1 years ago
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    91 Trauma 2 Electric Boogaloo 1 years ago
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    92 Failure is not an Option 1 years ago
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    93 It's cu-Coming 1 years ago
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    94 Le Beninging 2 Electric Boogaloo 1 years ago
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    95 Through the Eyes of the Broken 1 years ago
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    96 What Makes a Man? 1 years ago
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    97 Speedrun 1 years ago
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    98 Destination 1 years ago
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    99 Trajectory 1 years ago
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    100 The Start of the End 1 years ago
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    101 The Last Supper 1 years ago
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    102 The First Domino Falls 1 years ago
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    103 CURRENT OBJECTIVE: SURVIVE 1 years ago
  107. 107
    104 It's like a Matryoshka doll 1 years ago
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    105 Tick Tock 1 years ago
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    106 Geoguesser Gone Wrong! w(゚Д゚)w 1 years ago
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    107 You're approaching me? 1 years ago
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    108 Please don't die 1 years ago
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    109 It was fun 1 years ago
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    110 Epilogue 1 1 years ago
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    111 Epilogue 2 Electric Boogaloo 1 years ago
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    112 Epilogue 3 1 years ago
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    113 Epilogue 4 1 years ago
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    114 Epilogue Finale 1 years ago
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    115 Secret Ending 1 years ago
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    116 Secret Ending 2 Electric Boogaloo 1 years ago
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    117 Secret Ending 3 1 years ago
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    118 Secret Ending 4 1 years ago
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    119 The End 1 years ago

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