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This is an amazing story and I recommend it, hoping you guys will read. But there are some things the author needs to work on. *Cliffhanger – you should add more cliffhanging moments in your story so as to leave us wondering on what comes next. *Unnecessary spacing after commas. It's weird and uncomfortable seeing that, tbh. *Showing more instead of just telling. You can't just say he (Luo Yan) is arrogant and cold. Express it through his actions and dialogue. Make us know that he's truly cold. I hope that this might help you and not discourage you from writing.😊 P.s Also unnecessary quotations that shouldn't be placed in some sentences, remove them.
Not a fan of books whose character names are in Chinese style because their names confuses me a lot, but I think your book got quite easy names to remember. I like the start of the chapter, although I wish the author indeed it with a huge cliff-hanger. Also, the author could do a little more polish with commas and some capitalizations, but overall, the writing style is good. I really thought you would spoil too much information about Mei Lin but, thank goodness you didn't go there, you know, leave a little for everyone's curiosity. Overall, the book is entertaining and relatable since the plot was playing around trendy matters in the real world.
The story started interesting but perhaps writer could do a little touch up and then all is good. All the best to you and hope to read more from this book.
Hi, I'm from Indonesia. I just read your story for the first time and really liked it. really looking forward to deeper interaction between lu xia and luo ya
This story is good. I read twice and already keep into my library. I hope that you continue to use simple grammar, because some of them didn't understand if you read first. But that's okay since you'll always improve no matter you got struggling in your writing. I hope you didn't give up early and focus on your own writing.
I love this book already. I always love urban romance with a touch of beauties and billionaires, especially independent women. Li Xia is a very confident young girl and she did stand up for herself when she got bullied by her classmates. Nice work author. ❤️❤️❤️
I fell in live with the synopsis first and then the character's description especially the female lead. It will be interesting to read about a bubbly FL.🥰
very interesting book, good story line, very nice hook to get you reading against your wish lol (in a good way though). The book is very interesting I had to collect it♥️♥️♥️ keep it up author♥️♥️
Your story is good, keep updating diligently to 12k. Do you already have AE? if you are diligent about updating the view changes in your story account at inkstone. Good luck my dear.
The author does a fantastic job of letting the reader imagine what she is trying to show you, which is one reason the story is interesting. You won't feel hurried through one chapter or bored through the next. From what I've read thus far, it's difficult to speculate on what will ultimately happen in the plot, so I assume there's much more to come. In general, I found it appealing since it was straightforward yet intriguing. Interesting enough to keep reading.
I love the story and can't wait to find unravel the story and our stubborn ML am watching with my juice beside me The story look real, it look like real world drama which I have watched and reading it is an opportunity, and our crazy beautiful Fl, hehe😇
This is a great reference for me because I will be trying to write a romance book as well. I will be sure to head here in the future! I like how the author describes the scenes, it made me feel like I am actually inside that universe.
This is an amazing story and I recommend it, hoping you guys will read. But there are some things the author needs to work on. *Cliffhanger – you should add more cliffhanging moments in your story so as to leave us wondering on what comes next. *Unnecessary spacing after commas. It's weird and uncomfortable seeing that, tbh. *Showing more instead of just telling. You can't just say he (Luo Yan) is arrogant and cold. Express it through his actions and dialogue. Make us know that he's truly cold. I hope that this might help you and not discourage you from writing.😊 P.s Also unnecessary quotations that shouldn't be placed in some sentences, remove them.
Not a fan of books whose character names are in Chinese style because their names confuses me a lot, but I think your book got quite easy names to remember. I like the start of the chapter, although I wish the author indeed it with a huge cliff-hanger. Also, the author could do a little more polish with commas and some capitalizations, but overall, the writing style is good. I really thought you would spoil too much information about Mei Lin but, thank goodness you didn't go there, you know, leave a little for everyone's curiosity. Overall, the book is entertaining and relatable since the plot was playing around trendy matters in the real world.
The story started interesting but perhaps writer could do a little touch up and then all is good. All the best to you and hope to read more from this book.
Hi, I'm from Indonesia. I just read your story for the first time and really liked it. really looking forward to deeper interaction between lu xia and luo ya
This story is good. I read twice and already keep into my library. I hope that you continue to use simple grammar, because some of them didn't understand if you read first. But that's okay since you'll always improve no matter you got struggling in your writing. I hope you didn't give up early and focus on your own writing.
I love this book already. I always love urban romance with a touch of beauties and billionaires, especially independent women. Li Xia is a very confident young girl and she did stand up for herself when she got bullied by her classmates. Nice work author. ❤️❤️❤️
I fell in live with the synopsis first and then the character's description especially the female lead. It will be interesting to read about a bubbly FL.🥰
very interesting book, good story line, very nice hook to get you reading against your wish lol (in a good way though). The book is very interesting I had to collect it♥️♥️♥️ keep it up author♥️♥️
Your story is good, keep updating diligently to 12k. Do you already have AE? if you are diligent about updating the view changes in your story account at inkstone. Good luck my dear.
The author does a fantastic job of letting the reader imagine what she is trying to show you, which is one reason the story is interesting. You won't feel hurried through one chapter or bored through the next. From what I've read thus far, it's difficult to speculate on what will ultimately happen in the plot, so I assume there's much more to come. In general, I found it appealing since it was straightforward yet intriguing. Interesting enough to keep reading.
I love the story and can't wait to find unravel the story and our stubborn ML am watching with my juice beside me The story look real, it look like real world drama which I have watched and reading it is an opportunity, and our crazy beautiful Fl, hehe😇
This is a great reference for me because I will be trying to write a romance book as well. I will be sure to head here in the future! I like how the author describes the scenes, it made me feel like I am actually inside that universe.