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There's a lot of happening across the chapters and it's tiring to keep up, it dulls my expectations with the story honestly. The mystery shrouding the protagonist and the story as a whole was quite boring and lacked some factors that makes me anticipate the next chapters. Perhaps because I'm still in early chapters, but the mystery dots don't connect yet. I also think that teaching divinations in Hogwarts was just a filler.
Quite literally one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The sophistication and world building is incredible. At this point, calling it a fanfic isn't right anymore. This fanfic is definitely better than the Harry Potter series is.
A wonderful story you can truly fall into. I only wish it was already complete as in my opinion it is best read without long breaks to immerse yourself fully into the story. Looking forward to the rest of it author.
great fanfic always felt the books and most fanfics don't utilise the entire point of 'magic' and what is possible in HP but this one is great
I’ve read this book and enjoyed it greatly, I am subbed to the authors patreon and I’ve gotten to k ow him a bit, cool guy. The story is well crafted with some cool magic added so no boring AVAAAAADA KEDAVRAAAAA. I hope you read and enjoy this like I did
All these Harry Potter fanfics are unimaginative. They always end up at the school and never try to do something other than attending school learning or teaching there. It always bored me to death, which is why I stopped reading any kind of Harry Potter books.
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This is nice, although I wanted to read more about HP and less about the angel and devils I appreciate the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this book is top tier for me It's even better then the original materialso if u are a fan of an interesting story with top tier twists and turns and an actual characters with personalities and unique traits and the best thing this story offers is the main character ,my guy is him he have a great motive and his personality mirrors his experiences that the author shows bit by bit in each chapter
I'm not one to write reviews nor am I good at them, but this is a hidden gem, with AU elements but keeping true to the essence of HP. Don't expect it to be all faithful and neither, as far as I can see is Voldemort being the final villain, as there are mythical elements involved. If you expect an HP fic faithful to the books don't read it, but if you expect a good fic with original and expanded world building with mythic elements but without bordering on the absurd, this is totally your cup of tea.
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It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. I like that this story is different from others (like this is AU, there's a god, demon, angel, he's a marauder's teacher, etc).. He also an old people (he even know and friend with Hogwarts founders), that mean he's have so many knowledge from years of life.. It also interesting to see MC/Morpheus is so good at Divination and Rituals (I think this is the first time I read a MC which good at Divination, he even Divination teacher).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍
Quite good grammar, The story has no logic errors and it lacks plot holes. And the best part it is an interesting Story with no Harem !!!
It is a fantastic novel. The background is good and the AU elements are introduced in such a way that still respects the original work, Atleast till chapter 16, which is one of the hallmarks of a good novel imo. The AU elements will need a very slow introduction to fuse into the HP lore The only caviat is the probably the writing style. The flow is confusing at times and it makes it difficult to differentiate who is speaking which lines. Another factor is the excitement and suspense. As of yet, the buildup is slow. I could miss a chapter or 2 and would not care. I would also advice to not bash any characters and not glorify others as many do with making Snape a good guy and James a bully. The novel is also already touching the line of Albus and Minerva mild bashing genre which also a very common theme. Also Please PLEASE. No crossover or Harem
lol. great chapter. and great and unique story so far. hope dumledore is humilated. need more...............................................................................
I am sold. I always thought the prophecy and divination in harry potter to be underrated than it is, and this fic is something I need, please don't drop and make him make prophecies and make them famous author
I liked it, but I won't continue to read it, here's the reason why: Morpheus (mc) is not a lord of dreams, he is just an immortal magician who specialize in divination and rituals. The story is in Harry's parents timeline. The demons and angels are just not hp material. The story doesn't relatable to me in any way, so there's no need to read it.
This novel have great potential. The setting is on point, the writing is flawless and the suspense is gripping. Looking forward to reading more 👍
Wow I didn't expect to find a gem like this, it's only the first few chapters but the world building and the main character are quite novel something that stands out among so many generic stories, for the moment I'm not going to get my hopes up too high because there are only a few chapters, only time will tell if the story is really good or just another mediocre story with a good start.
Honest author review, I honestly think the story and world I am building is wonderful. What I would say Is if you like fights every other chapter this ff isn’t for you. Yes there will be battles and fights but not a crazy amount in the beginning, in saying this i still wouldn’t classify my ff as a slow burn I think it’s more of a medium. I am trying to build a world that you can fully immerse yourself in. I hope you give my ff a try, thank you for reading this if you did!
There's a lot of happening across the chapters and it's tiring to keep up, it dulls my expectations with the story honestly. The mystery shrouding the protagonist and the story as a whole was quite boring and lacked some factors that makes me anticipate the next chapters. Perhaps because I'm still in early chapters, but the mystery dots don't connect yet. I also think that teaching divinations in Hogwarts was just a filler.
Quite literally one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The sophistication and world building is incredible. At this point, calling it a fanfic isn't right anymore. This fanfic is definitely better than the Harry Potter series is.
A wonderful story you can truly fall into. I only wish it was already complete as in my opinion it is best read without long breaks to immerse yourself fully into the story. Looking forward to the rest of it author.
great fanfic always felt the books and most fanfics don't utilise the entire point of 'magic' and what is possible in HP but this one is great
I’ve read this book and enjoyed it greatly, I am subbed to the authors patreon and I’ve gotten to k ow him a bit, cool guy. The story is well crafted with some cool magic added so no boring AVAAAAADA KEDAVRAAAAA. I hope you read and enjoy this like I did
All these Harry Potter fanfics are unimaginative. They always end up at the school and never try to do something other than attending school learning or teaching there. It always bored me to death, which is why I stopped reading any kind of Harry Potter books.
Spoiler enthüllen This is nice, although I wanted to read more about HP and less about the angel and devils I appreciate the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this book is top tier for me It's even better then the original materialso if u are a fan of an interesting story with top tier twists and turns and an actual characters with personalities and unique traits and the best thing this story offers is the main character ,my guy is him he have a great motive and his personality mirrors his experiences that the author shows bit by bit in each chapter
I'm not one to write reviews nor am I good at them, but this is a hidden gem, with AU elements but keeping true to the essence of HP. Don't expect it to be all faithful and neither, as far as I can see is Voldemort being the final villain, as there are mythical elements involved. If you expect an HP fic faithful to the books don't read it, but if you expect a good fic with original and expanded world building with mythic elements but without bordering on the absurd, this is totally your cup of tea.
Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz ! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !! Goood goood ,keep going plzzz !!
It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. I like that this story is different from others (like this is AU, there's a god, demon, angel, he's a marauder's teacher, etc).. He also an old people (he even know and friend with Hogwarts founders), that mean he's have so many knowledge from years of life.. It also interesting to see MC/Morpheus is so good at Divination and Rituals (I think this is the first time I read a MC which good at Divination, he even Divination teacher).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍
Quite good grammar, The story has no logic errors and it lacks plot holes. And the best part it is an interesting Story with no Harem !!!
It is a fantastic novel. The background is good and the AU elements are introduced in such a way that still respects the original work, Atleast till chapter 16, which is one of the hallmarks of a good novel imo. The AU elements will need a very slow introduction to fuse into the HP lore The only caviat is the probably the writing style. The flow is confusing at times and it makes it difficult to differentiate who is speaking which lines. Another factor is the excitement and suspense. As of yet, the buildup is slow. I could miss a chapter or 2 and would not care. I would also advice to not bash any characters and not glorify others as many do with making Snape a good guy and James a bully. The novel is also already touching the line of Albus and Minerva mild bashing genre which also a very common theme. Also Please PLEASE. No crossover or Harem
lol. great chapter. and great and unique story so far. hope dumledore is humilated. need more...............................................................................
I am sold. I always thought the prophecy and divination in harry potter to be underrated than it is, and this fic is something I need, please don't drop and make him make prophecies and make them famous author
I liked it, but I won't continue to read it, here's the reason why: Morpheus (mc) is not a lord of dreams, he is just an immortal magician who specialize in divination and rituals. The story is in Harry's parents timeline. The demons and angels are just not hp material. The story doesn't relatable to me in any way, so there's no need to read it.
This novel have great potential. The setting is on point, the writing is flawless and the suspense is gripping. Looking forward to reading more 👍
Wow I didn't expect to find a gem like this, it's only the first few chapters but the world building and the main character are quite novel something that stands out among so many generic stories, for the moment I'm not going to get my hopes up too high because there are only a few chapters, only time will tell if the story is really good or just another mediocre story with a good start.
Honest author review, I honestly think the story and world I am building is wonderful. What I would say Is if you like fights every other chapter this ff isn’t for you. Yes there will be battles and fights but not a crazy amount in the beginning, in saying this i still wouldn’t classify my ff as a slow burn I think it’s more of a medium. I am trying to build a world that you can fully immerse yourself in. I hope you give my ff a try, thank you for reading this if you did!