Agree
'Yes, yes, yes, yes, this is what I wanted. With this, I will be invincible'
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For the plot I'm putting together, let's say that Chaos doesn't exist. Or it could be The presence
"I had many names throughout history. Mother Earth. The progenitor mother. The mother of chaos. But the name that identified me the most was: Gaea"
DC: Spirit of Vengeance
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Another trivia: It is thought or known that in reality Zeus had only enormous strength. All his powers over the sky were inherited when he married Hera, who had original dominion over the sky.
Good thing it was equitable, as Zeus also wore no armor or weapons. His lightning bolts were launched by his own power, and his clothing was a traditional Greek toga. At least, she could say the test was fair in that regard.
DC: Spirit of Vengeance
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Yuga Khan is dead.... or not?
My recommendation is that you begin to develop in a more descriptive way each detail of the following arc. Not just because Peter is the MC the things should happen. Now that the spider supreme is going to involve him more explain better his powers and maybe make him lose so he can learn and grow.
I've been reading your story for a while and I like it but brother, YOU LACK TO DEVELOP YOUR CHARACTERS. Emma is flat Peter is flat His powers are gary stu granted because it's convenient for the plot and now you bring in the new universe in a 0 explanatory way.
Friday I hope
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"Something that should not be activated. An enemy with the ability to match and surpass the gods themselves. The Destroyer"
DC: Spirit of Vengeance
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