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In my opinion, I really liked this fic so it deserves those 5 stars. The beginning is a bit slow but then it becomes decent and the ending is very interesting. so I recommend reading this fic
The story is good, but there are three points that I think destroyed the work a little (Spoiler), firstly, the protagonist always gets stronger versions of his abilities through fusions, leaving the old ones obsolete, it would be better if the old abilities improved to stronger forms through level increases, the second point is that the protagonist's harem is very poorly developed, he has almost no romantic involvement with them, giving the impression that it was somewhat forced, apart from the girl's leaving and returning, which was very unnecessary and it happened off screen most of the time, third point is the final fight which was very disappointing he went there and only hit killed both of them,very disappointing
Fantastic read, it started a tad bit slow but i read from begining to end and couldn't put it down at times. It also had crossovers i would have never seen coming (that is a good thing). I will watch the authors career with great interest.
Honestly, a Gamer System that doesn't have Gamer's Body and Gamer's Mind isn't a Gamer System...Gamer's Body not only makes it so you can't lose limbs, and I'm okay without that part of it, but it's also what gives the Gamer his unlimited growth, without it it's just a normal system.I don't even mind him not having Gamer's Mind, because I've read stories without it that I've liked.
The story can be honestly divided into two different stories 1. chapter 1 to 100ish - it basically a improved rewrite of his past 50 chapter fanfic that I came here to read 2. past chapter 100 / justice league, it basically started merging in dc and other storylines into their world that honestly makes no sense and he could had just developed a way to go to the dc world instead 3. I suspect that ai writer was being used when the massive change in writing quality appeared (ch 100)
It was a very good read. There was definitely some room for improvement but overall I liked it.
your writing is good dont listen to others the flow is of the story is amazing good work 👍
If you're a fan of fan fictions with systems I do recommend this book, even if at the beginning it may seem hard to read it will be a worthwhile experience.
honestly if your looking for a great story I recommend this one give it a try I bet you will love it
I loved it, you did a great job here, hope your next novel had this one's MC as the ROB . ........................................... ..
Magnificent a good novel i hpe there's more jokes in it more refrence bot overall good novel man waiting for the next one
The progress is a bit slow at first but I think it’s well worth a good story to read as you may find it enjoyable as I have as it looks. Not too op at start as the mc start as nothing to a fighting force of a character and love to see what new in chapters or updates the author will bring next. P.S the memes and joke about SMG4 video and humor reminds me of his work too brings happiness and laughter nice one dear Author
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One of the best rwby fanfics I’ve ever read. I would have loved to see a Nora meets Nora but hey it’s your book write whatever you want. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
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Well... i will give this a try since you have NEVER written something past 100 chapters before. And after doing.... 5? failed RWBY fanfics. Lets hope you succeed in this one. To bad you dont write Lemons/goodstuff/Segs
It's a good and entertaining fic that sadly lacks a lot of logic. The MC makes tons of whacky decisions, which have little to no negative consequences. The Mc also gains basically every gamer ability after copying others with his semblance which makes him way too Op to ever create tense scenes. He abuses this but at the same time wastes its potential to an infuriating degree. For example: - he knows that he gets a powerboost when his stats get to 50 or 100 but doesn't use his free stats to do so before a fight. (or on Int or Luck to improve his skills and circumstances outside of battles) - he gets an ability to fuse his skills and later on an ability to keep said skills but doesn't go wild by combining every skill he has - he has tons of OP abilities but barely uses 5-7 in a fight against strong opponents or uses their potential - he has the ability to copy abilities but only does so with "important" characters whe he could have hundreds of abilities already -there were time skips but somehow he barely improved his stats/lv at that time And still he is already way too Op for this world and as mentioned doesn't have to fear any negative consequences. Then there's somehow a crossover with DC out of nowhere after 80 chapters or so. This just breaks the immersion (as little as there was) because they didn't have an influence on the story up until this point although the mere presence of those characters should have changed canon events way earlier. To sum it up: Interesting premise with little logic, Gary Stu MC with no negative consequences.
readers: there's a problem here (like the absurd amount of aura everyone has outside the MC) Author: suck m.. di..k me: take 1 star. no kidding, your fanfic has a horrible rating, it's no use writing 1 million chapters if you don't solve the basics
Overall a good novel but the mc is to weak and the gamer system basically doesn’t exist as it is just a normal system
para mi la 2 es la megor opcion aunque podrias encontrar un megor opcion para tu pokemon inicial y tendrias que tener pruebas para que mohn te crea aunke si presisas inspiracion podrias leer lo naturarl de Isao-Yagami en wattpat aunke es tu historia y tu ases lo que quieres
I find this to be a good fic, sure the gamer here is on the weaker end, but throughout the story, you can just feel this upward climb of power and scale, making it feel earned, he doesn’t get instant dungeons or any form of them either, so grinding away doesn’t present itself until it’s earned, making the journey to becoming op feel more awesome, much like how in solo leveling you could see in the early chapters sung jin woo’s growth into the op being he became, our gamer here feels much the same way, except due to it being a fanfic it allows for more threats and rewards being pulled from other universes aside from its main established verse resulting in a good read that I for sure will recommend to anyone who enjoys power creep. All in all, good fic and hope it continues on until the end of time.
Hey what are you going to use that power armor you found in mt. Glenn, are you going to make iron man armor or make a new design from it. Can’t wait to see what going to happen next and are his clones going to be left behind to protect his island and tech from both Altas and Salem
Aside from the crossovers, I like the plot of the story as it build a proper foundation at the beginning.
Hey when the MC take over the island can MC uses alternative energies to power the island like water, wind, sunlight, thermal, oil, atomic, etc and can he create gunpowder for ammonation or mix dust and gunpowder ammo to make it stronger
Hey if the MC wants to build a robot army in the future, get some ideas from Star Wars, terminator, marvel, transformers, and Godzilla for mecha Godzilla imaged the look in everyone’s face if MC created Mecha Godzilla to fight a kaiju sized Grimm
your novel is interesting but your writing still sucks. really really suck. it's like with all the novel you wrote you never improved.
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In my opinion, I really liked this fic so it deserves those 5 stars. The beginning is a bit slow but then it becomes decent and the ending is very interesting. so I recommend reading this fic
The story is good, but there are three points that I think destroyed the work a little (Spoiler), firstly, the protagonist always gets stronger versions of his abilities through fusions, leaving the old ones obsolete, it would be better if the old abilities improved to stronger forms through level increases, the second point is that the protagonist's harem is very poorly developed, he has almost no romantic involvement with them, giving the impression that it was somewhat forced, apart from the girl's leaving and returning, which was very unnecessary and it happened off screen most of the time, third point is the final fight which was very disappointing he went there and only hit killed both of them,very disappointing
Fantastic read, it started a tad bit slow but i read from begining to end and couldn't put it down at times. It also had crossovers i would have never seen coming (that is a good thing). I will watch the authors career with great interest.
Honestly, a Gamer System that doesn't have Gamer's Body and Gamer's Mind isn't a Gamer System...Gamer's Body not only makes it so you can't lose limbs, and I'm okay without that part of it, but it's also what gives the Gamer his unlimited growth, without it it's just a normal system.I don't even mind him not having Gamer's Mind, because I've read stories without it that I've liked.
The story can be honestly divided into two different stories 1. chapter 1 to 100ish - it basically a improved rewrite of his past 50 chapter fanfic that I came here to read 2. past chapter 100 / justice league, it basically started merging in dc and other storylines into their world that honestly makes no sense and he could had just developed a way to go to the dc world instead 3. I suspect that ai writer was being used when the massive change in writing quality appeared (ch 100)
It was a very good read. There was definitely some room for improvement but overall I liked it.
your writing is good dont listen to others the flow is of the story is amazing good work 👍
If you're a fan of fan fictions with systems I do recommend this book, even if at the beginning it may seem hard to read it will be a worthwhile experience.
honestly if your looking for a great story I recommend this one give it a try I bet you will love it
I loved it, you did a great job here, hope your next novel had this one's MC as the ROB . ........................................... ..
Magnificent a good novel i hpe there's more jokes in it more refrence bot overall good novel man waiting for the next one
The progress is a bit slow at first but I think it’s well worth a good story to read as you may find it enjoyable as I have as it looks. Not too op at start as the mc start as nothing to a fighting force of a character and love to see what new in chapters or updates the author will bring next. P.S the memes and joke about SMG4 video and humor reminds me of his work too brings happiness and laughter nice one dear Author
Spoiler enthüllen One of the best rwby fanfics I’ve ever read. I would have loved to see a Nora meets Nora but hey it’s your book write whatever you want. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
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Well... i will give this a try since you have NEVER written something past 100 chapters before. And after doing.... 5? failed RWBY fanfics. Lets hope you succeed in this one. To bad you dont write Lemons/goodstuff/Segs
It's a good and entertaining fic that sadly lacks a lot of logic. The MC makes tons of whacky decisions, which have little to no negative consequences. The Mc also gains basically every gamer ability after copying others with his semblance which makes him way too Op to ever create tense scenes. He abuses this but at the same time wastes its potential to an infuriating degree. For example: - he knows that he gets a powerboost when his stats get to 50 or 100 but doesn't use his free stats to do so before a fight. (or on Int or Luck to improve his skills and circumstances outside of battles) - he gets an ability to fuse his skills and later on an ability to keep said skills but doesn't go wild by combining every skill he has - he has tons of OP abilities but barely uses 5-7 in a fight against strong opponents or uses their potential - he has the ability to copy abilities but only does so with "important" characters whe he could have hundreds of abilities already -there were time skips but somehow he barely improved his stats/lv at that time And still he is already way too Op for this world and as mentioned doesn't have to fear any negative consequences. Then there's somehow a crossover with DC out of nowhere after 80 chapters or so. This just breaks the immersion (as little as there was) because they didn't have an influence on the story up until this point although the mere presence of those characters should have changed canon events way earlier. To sum it up: Interesting premise with little logic, Gary Stu MC with no negative consequences.
readers: there's a problem here (like the absurd amount of aura everyone has outside the MC) Author: suck m.. di..k me: take 1 star. no kidding, your fanfic has a horrible rating, it's no use writing 1 million chapters if you don't solve the basics
Overall a good novel but the mc is to weak and the gamer system basically doesn’t exist as it is just a normal system
para mi la 2 es la megor opcion aunque podrias encontrar un megor opcion para tu pokemon inicial y tendrias que tener pruebas para que mohn te crea aunke si presisas inspiracion podrias leer lo naturarl de Isao-Yagami en wattpat aunke es tu historia y tu ases lo que quieres
I find this to be a good fic, sure the gamer here is on the weaker end, but throughout the story, you can just feel this upward climb of power and scale, making it feel earned, he doesn’t get instant dungeons or any form of them either, so grinding away doesn’t present itself until it’s earned, making the journey to becoming op feel more awesome, much like how in solo leveling you could see in the early chapters sung jin woo’s growth into the op being he became, our gamer here feels much the same way, except due to it being a fanfic it allows for more threats and rewards being pulled from other universes aside from its main established verse resulting in a good read that I for sure will recommend to anyone who enjoys power creep. All in all, good fic and hope it continues on until the end of time.
Hey what are you going to use that power armor you found in mt. Glenn, are you going to make iron man armor or make a new design from it. Can’t wait to see what going to happen next and are his clones going to be left behind to protect his island and tech from both Altas and Salem
Aside from the crossovers, I like the plot of the story as it build a proper foundation at the beginning.
Hey when the MC take over the island can MC uses alternative energies to power the island like water, wind, sunlight, thermal, oil, atomic, etc and can he create gunpowder for ammonation or mix dust and gunpowder ammo to make it stronger
Hey if the MC wants to build a robot army in the future, get some ideas from Star Wars, terminator, marvel, transformers, and Godzilla for mecha Godzilla imaged the look in everyone’s face if MC created Mecha Godzilla to fight a kaiju sized Grimm
your novel is interesting but your writing still sucks. really really suck. it's like with all the novel you wrote you never improved.
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