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This story is addictive I can’t wait to read more. Please note the translator uses the wrong names throughout the story you will be slightly confused about who is really being talked about. But if you’re logical you will figure it out.
Feels like a machine translation half the time (because of messing up something as simple as he vs she). There are plot holes everywhere since nothing is explained well. Characters are boring and unoriginal. This is just another poorly written, face-slapping, cultivation, system novel. (And the system feels like it was thrown in just for the sake of having a system.)
The writing is good but the he and she are wrong and i have no clue who is talking. Good otherwise but ill have to drop
Super confusing. Rank in synopsis doesn’t match starting rank. Sorry has potential, but too confusing to continue to read.
A story full of clones. MC is a bit of coward, but the clones do all the work and the system 's upgrades are OP
the story is good and interesting but the translation for names and genders is bad. I don't think this book has a proofreader like their mistakes everywhere regarding gender and names. The currency keeps on being switched to star coins to yuan. Like read what you translate
as others have said, synopsis is off. first few chapters were alright but dropped at chapter 18. The translation gets worse and worse, names get mixed up, things aren't explained well but also use 10× as many words as it needs to, really suffers from the repeating of what's going on over and over. The MC being reborn doesn't matter besides giving him the insanely op system that makes him an elite one man army a week into the storyline. The "only cares about the love interest, is sadistic and aloof to everyone else" thing also is pretty lame. If it was proofread and had some of the fat trimmed it'd be a decent enough to be the kind of trash you can actually enjoy but sadly not worth the read
not sure if it's lazy translation or lazy writing but there are so many little details that make no sense. like when he only has 2 clones but the story keeps mentioning a sixth one. one of the reasons I gave this story a try was there was no romance tag, but there is a huge emphasis on the budding relationship between the mc and the school bell. 🙄
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Basically Amon's ability of avatar clones from Lord of the Mysteries but if amon was a dumb f*** and acted entitled becase his father was god almighty rather than use his own powers. So if you take away everything that makes Amon a fun, interesting and intriguing character to read aside from one of his ability, you get this dumpsterfire.
The first 40 chapters were good but after that the rest of the novel quickly goes downhill to the level of a mtl novel and it is disappointing
Idek what the author is thinking. Huge problems all over. The description and the actual story and totally different, the mc gets b rank ability, and the percentage is 10%. The highest the level the novel says is sss (says f-sss) the system mentions ssss+ (the system created the +). There are people in the MC’s class who got abilities of a lower grade than himself, but for some reason b grade abilities seem to be trash in this world. The fl for some reason singles out the MC staring at her after she gets her ability, and like others said, everyone else should be staring at her too. Someone in the comments said that the fl tried to cheer mc up about his ability being low grade and he just completely ignores it (not the grade of ability that matters, but how you use it and the effort you put in) most of this stuff happens in the first 3 ch.
an average quality CN webnovel, brought down by bad quality machine translation, "translator" just pump out as many chapters as they can and didn't bother to edit, and correct any mistake. Don't bother to pay or vote for this novel just read free machine translated one.
ok novel but bad cause system make mc sstupid as they just mess around and abuse it and its a very slow system with tiny increases each time
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Don’t read It if you want a consistent novel that makes any sense at all. even as soon as chapter two it goes off on its own thing with time skips. The only good part I saw about the novel was the grammar, however, I only got to the second chapter ;) so don’t take my word for it
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Translation quality takes a plunge around chapter 18 and becomes somewhat hard to read. There are many of the classic chinese overexagerations and making things look godly for no reason at all, and the characters have the typical chinese villain personality. I always get annoyed by good concepts being ruined by bad writing like this.
Money must of been paid to get so high on the web rankings. 3.7 stats but is #1 with less than 200 chapters?? 1/) translation quality is bottom of barrel machine quality 2.) Character is irrational and bland and hateable 3.) System is there just to say there is a system. 4.) Plot jumps around and story (if there is one) is hard to follow. 5.) Writing quality even for web novel is AWFUL
How can such a trash story have so many power stones smh --------------------------- -
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey youtube.com/livingwaters
Overall not a bad novel and I like the clones so far but after chapter 40 which was the trial read the translation quality went downhill fast
Excellent story love the system powers and the ranking system the world is fun and exciting. And it almost perfectly mixes fantasy with futuristic sci-fi elements. The only problem is there are not enough chapters and the frequency of the updates is horrendous. But overall would give a 5 if not for the updates highly recommend it.
A good beginning and somehow i cannot understand the story anymore .MC got a clone skill and at lvl3 he already have 100 clones which is stronger than him and then at chapters 80 , I don't care about the plot anymore
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This story is addictive I can’t wait to read more. Please note the translator uses the wrong names throughout the story you will be slightly confused about who is really being talked about. But if you’re logical you will figure it out.
Feels like a machine translation half the time (because of messing up something as simple as he vs she). There are plot holes everywhere since nothing is explained well. Characters are boring and unoriginal. This is just another poorly written, face-slapping, cultivation, system novel. (And the system feels like it was thrown in just for the sake of having a system.)
The writing is good but the he and she are wrong and i have no clue who is talking. Good otherwise but ill have to drop
Super confusing. Rank in synopsis doesn’t match starting rank. Sorry has potential, but too confusing to continue to read.
A story full of clones. MC is a bit of coward, but the clones do all the work and the system 's upgrades are OP
the story is good and interesting but the translation for names and genders is bad. I don't think this book has a proofreader like their mistakes everywhere regarding gender and names. The currency keeps on being switched to star coins to yuan. Like read what you translate
as others have said, synopsis is off. first few chapters were alright but dropped at chapter 18. The translation gets worse and worse, names get mixed up, things aren't explained well but also use 10× as many words as it needs to, really suffers from the repeating of what's going on over and over. The MC being reborn doesn't matter besides giving him the insanely op system that makes him an elite one man army a week into the storyline. The "only cares about the love interest, is sadistic and aloof to everyone else" thing also is pretty lame. If it was proofread and had some of the fat trimmed it'd be a decent enough to be the kind of trash you can actually enjoy but sadly not worth the read
not sure if it's lazy translation or lazy writing but there are so many little details that make no sense. like when he only has 2 clones but the story keeps mentioning a sixth one. one of the reasons I gave this story a try was there was no romance tag, but there is a huge emphasis on the budding relationship between the mc and the school bell. 🙄
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Basically Amon's ability of avatar clones from Lord of the Mysteries but if amon was a dumb f*** and acted entitled becase his father was god almighty rather than use his own powers. So if you take away everything that makes Amon a fun, interesting and intriguing character to read aside from one of his ability, you get this dumpsterfire.
The first 40 chapters were good but after that the rest of the novel quickly goes downhill to the level of a mtl novel and it is disappointing
Idek what the author is thinking. Huge problems all over. The description and the actual story and totally different, the mc gets b rank ability, and the percentage is 10%. The highest the level the novel says is sss (says f-sss) the system mentions ssss+ (the system created the +). There are people in the MC’s class who got abilities of a lower grade than himself, but for some reason b grade abilities seem to be trash in this world. The fl for some reason singles out the MC staring at her after she gets her ability, and like others said, everyone else should be staring at her too. Someone in the comments said that the fl tried to cheer mc up about his ability being low grade and he just completely ignores it (not the grade of ability that matters, but how you use it and the effort you put in) most of this stuff happens in the first 3 ch.
an average quality CN webnovel, brought down by bad quality machine translation, "translator" just pump out as many chapters as they can and didn't bother to edit, and correct any mistake. Don't bother to pay or vote for this novel just read free machine translated one.
ok novel but bad cause system make mc sstupid as they just mess around and abuse it and its a very slow system with tiny increases each time
Spoiler enthüllen Don’t read It if you want a consistent novel that makes any sense at all. even as soon as chapter two it goes off on its own thing with time skips. The only good part I saw about the novel was the grammar, however, I only got to the second chapter ;) so don’t take my word for it
Spoiler enthüllen Translation quality takes a plunge around chapter 18 and becomes somewhat hard to read. There are many of the classic chinese overexagerations and making things look godly for no reason at all, and the characters have the typical chinese villain personality. I always get annoyed by good concepts being ruined by bad writing like this.
Money must of been paid to get so high on the web rankings. 3.7 stats but is #1 with less than 200 chapters?? 1/) translation quality is bottom of barrel machine quality 2.) Character is irrational and bland and hateable 3.) System is there just to say there is a system. 4.) Plot jumps around and story (if there is one) is hard to follow. 5.) Writing quality even for web novel is AWFUL
How can such a trash story have so many power stones smh --------------------------- -
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey youtube.com/livingwaters
Overall not a bad novel and I like the clones so far but after chapter 40 which was the trial read the translation quality went downhill fast
Excellent story love the system powers and the ranking system the world is fun and exciting. And it almost perfectly mixes fantasy with futuristic sci-fi elements. The only problem is there are not enough chapters and the frequency of the updates is horrendous. But overall would give a 5 if not for the updates highly recommend it.
A good beginning and somehow i cannot understand the story anymore .MC got a clone skill and at lvl3 he already have 100 clones which is stronger than him and then at chapters 80 , I don't care about the plot anymore