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Hello to all the readers who decided to stop by and gave my book a look. I am thankful for all the support and blessings of the reader who decided to spend time on my book. With this review, I wanted to point out some things. 1. As you saw in the title, it will be a harem and the mc will have five wives I will assure you that there will be no more addition. It will begin with five and end with five wives. 2. Some readers may find that interaction is quite less between mc and his wives and some feel that it had been late since mc wives are introduced. So, I wanted to tell you that Mc wives will be introduced one by one slowly. It was done so that Mc can grow up and before meeting his wives, he can at least have some achievements and strength. I don't want to write a story where mc runs after chasing girls where girls run after mc thinking he is so cool and wonderful and every hundred chapters another female lead is introduced which is making the story with harem quite bad. So, even if you dislike harem, I ask you to give you a try and judge with your own eyes how different the story is from other typical harem. 3.By the time, I write this review it hadn't been 6 months since I stated as an author.Reader may find some grammatical mistakes. Since I am not a native English person and I write on an old smartphone which hangs a lot while typing so I ask you to pardon me on that. But I will assure you that the story would be readable unlike my first books whose beginning grammar was quite bad.Even mtl trash grammar is better than my other book beginning. That's for all know and I hope you like it and support my WSA work.
it was a good book. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for all the hard work.
Pretty bad dude makes no sense story jumps around all the time and the author tries to make the mc smart but he’s still an idiot
Language needs to be improved and rest of the story upto ch 37 is good and its worth it to purchase this book [img=recommend]
there is really nothing to say about this novel. if you don't have anything to read, you can read it. the good thing about this novel is that there really isn't that much about to say this. I have read 500 ch of this novel. things I didn't like in this novel are characters and their development. Mc is quite an irritable character his bandit, like nature, is too much sometimes. and the most important thing is that the development of his relationship with his wives is non-existent. I think only Riaa's relationship is good with him that we can say they love each other and you can add athena too if you want. he has five wives other than those, and the other are really non-existent in most of the story. most of the time, they are just their own things, and they also don't show respect to him many times he just ignore it, at least according to me all in all, harem part is not good and most of the harem novel have this same problem that is they are doing their own things they are not fighting together they are not getting stronger together. next is his relationship with his father and five goddesses. Even after reading 500 chapters, I am not sure what their relationships are. I mean, he said he doesn't hate his father. I mean, how can he can he not hate his when most of the time his father doesn't do a thing when his son life is in and due his own decisions and that same goes his wives I really couldn't comprehend their logic as to not hate his father as most of them lose their status , lives due to him yes their may be a reason behind all of this but they don't know about this. and the same goes for goddesses. In one chapter, he said hate, and in another, he said he is grateful to them, and that is illogical. he is doing their bidding and his father . and that goes against his character.
I was flabbergasted by first few chapters. Does it that good? No, it was horribly confusing. The plot just jump out of nowhere and left me confused. You see at one point the MC see a group of children with talent at the end of chapter, but in the next chapter he suddenly in the forest hunting. And when Riya refer MC who is still disguise as Rex the bodyguard as "lord", Morden who walk next to them didn't show any significant reactions especially when they act like couple. Normally anyone would surprised when a King's wife suddenly talk affectionately with a mere guard.
The story started in a very good way but it lacked intimacy between the protagonist and his wives on the account of more battles and some of them are elongated too much and the ending is not complete ,it should deal with aftermath and also the wives ,very dissatisfied of the way the story ended .
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Author i love the story so far, This is masterpiece I love it this novel made my hole week so thanks for your hard work and as a person who doesn't love harem story and believe in single female lead. I love this story even if this is a Harem I loved it and enjoyed it and i recommended this to everyone even if you are not into harem and love villain stuff i recommended you this strongly to all of you and again THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK AUTHOR and I have read your other novel also author that is also awesome.
a good novel nor very good nor bad a safe bet if you dont want to lose time to read rubbish and are bored, this novel is for you but dont explect enything it is not a masterpiece as i said it is a safe bet if you cant find a novel to read and have time to read this is for you P.S. writing quality is some time bad
authors should bear these codes in their minds:1. use small letter or lowercase when writing the word GOD in the novel.2. don't touch those religious beliefs like most of the Chinese authors did.3. Avoid racism and senseless nationalism.
Of all your works, this book had the most collection. But why does it have to be neglected/totally abandoned?Some of us are still waiting for updates though, and I even donate power stones some days.Hoping You will resume updating and keep it coming, please, Author.
I will only say that it is very heavy to read .I won't say anything else 😮💨 .
This is a great Webnovel and i recommend giving it a try. I think it has potential to be great. I really like everything about it. The only problem I have with it is that the writing quality isn't the best in some moments, where a word or two feel like it missing in a sentence which confuses me. There are also moments where there is one or two letters missing from a word and sometimes there are word that shouldn’t be in the sentence making it confusing. the grammar isn't th best but it still good that you can understand what going on. (Just a tiny error but there are just a very few moment like one or two where Alex name is wrote as Aled, you can ingore this) IDK what the author is using or where he is writing their story but I feel like if he were to use some kind of app or software for their device (phone/laptop) that he is using to write. It could help boost the writing quality. To the author if you are reading, I'm not saying your bad at writing, I'm sorry of if my comment come off that way to you. All I'm saying is that it could just be a bit better(this sound a bit mean, sorry)Maybe English isn't your first language. Getting an editor would be of great help to you. I've not written any kind of story before, so I don't know how hard it can be but as a reader I just recommend using some kind of tool to help you out a bit. Idk if you have an editor already, but that would be some that good to have. They could go through your work after your done and see if there were any errors or even recommend some stuff to you. Anyway this review look more like I'm complaining about your writing quality which I'm really sorry about which if it comes off that way. Don't get me wrong I'm enjoying this story. I just want it to improve in the writing quality (is this a bit selfish, sorry) aspect because I'm really just invested in this Webnovel. (It a bit selfish or a bit much but it would be great if you and your editor were to go back through all the chapter and fix errors and improve it because the writing quality might be something that new reader have a problem with) Overall, you story has my interest and support. I only wish success for you.👍🏼👌🏼
I have to say it's one the best novel I have come accross and would recommend the one reading this comment to give it a try. .
Author i am loving the latest chapters can't you release two chapters at a time bcoz the chapters releasing are too short.
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The story so far is good for me. Everything is perfect except the writing (3/5 stars) in some parts it's good writing and in others it's not but if you get past that it becomes a great story. I myself, sometimes get bored reading the story or get mentally exhausted and in those times I distract my mind by doing different things. After that I may get back to reading or I just leave it to the next day./ Currently in chapter 362 (Just give the story a chance and you may like it.)
I really love this novel. I really like that you don't rush the meetings and I look forward to how you introduce the other female leads. I do hope you don't make it so other characters that like his wives makes too much drama out of it. I hope you put them in their place and don't drag it out. Here I might be a selfish (I mean I am), but I would love more frequent updates even tho it's already great
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This novel is good. It also reminds me abit of HAIL THE KING novel.[img=recommend]
beautiful fiction beautiful background the speed of the story's progression is also just a little character development in your taste it's always easier to guarantee the first places
Oh a story about five wives how interesting! Wait what do you mean it takes awhile for him to meet up with all five? What do you mean there's a pointless academy arc that takes him immediately away from said wives. When you've been taught by literal Goddesses searching for knowledge at a regular school is unbelievably tasking to read.
nice..........................................but author, will you ever update the novel 'The Extra's Survival' new chapters choro bhai plz bahot log padhna chahte hai 🥺🥺
Writing quality isnt the best. A lot of words need to be added in some sentences, and removed in others. If the author could get a editor or go back and edit his chapter, i would probably enjoy it much more. Story development is good, but the author never specifies how much time passes, until somewhere around chapter 100 i believe. Ive read to chapter 217 and dont plan on continuing it until the grammar and spelling gets better. I do understand that english is not the authors main language, which is fine, its much better than any MTL you would find, but i do hope the author goes back and fixes those mistakes soon
A pretty good start. We can recommend this to people who are new to system/game type novels especially to those who aren't playing rpg's in real life. It's got good explanation for the basics of mmorpg's. Hopefully this genre will become more popular in the future.
The core idea of the novel is very interesting. A mentally challenged prince son of a powerful Emperor has been abandoned, but has a saving grace in the form of five wives with various backgrounds and talents. It has all the things needed for a successful commercial web novel. Unfortunately, since this is a solo project, without any editors or prompt feedback, the entire story is full of deficiencies. 01. Grammer. This is the least serious deficiency of this novel, and it could've been easily solved had the author utilized any writing tool. For instance, Grammerly or even Google Docs. 02. Conflict between cheats. The MC has two cheats. He has been trained by various goddesses, and he also has a system. Introducing both of these cheats have made the whole 'cheat system' feel conflicted and confusing. Any one of them should've been enough. 03. Confusing character behavior. For me the last straw on the hat was the scene where the MC asks Riya for an instructor to teach him. This doesn't make sense since he has already been taught by the goddesses, who are at the top of the world. 04. Too much cheat. The background setting for the MC is very well-written and extremely interesting. However, after explaining the MC's background, we are introduced to how the MC dies and meets the goddesses. I feel like the goddess part was too much of a cheat... That's just too high of a setting! Also, the wives being the daughters of the goddess was just too much of a cheat. This is a kinda controversial point, since some readers might be okay with it, while others like me might feel it's too much. Despite all these faults, at its core this story is a solid one, a rough diamond. What it needs at this moment is a rewrite as well as a good editor. I'd recommend you give it a shot.
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It is not an exaggeration to say that this story is very promising. I'm very sure that if the author are able to give this novel justice, it will be one of the most sought after novel in this app. May you continue to write this epic tale, and I look forward to seeing its completion.
Hello to all the readers who decided to stop by and gave my book a look. I am thankful for all the support and blessings of the reader who decided to spend time on my book. With this review, I wanted to point out some things. 1. As you saw in the title, it will be a harem and the mc will have five wives I will assure you that there will be no more addition. It will begin with five and end with five wives. 2. Some readers may find that interaction is quite less between mc and his wives and some feel that it had been late since mc wives are introduced. So, I wanted to tell you that Mc wives will be introduced one by one slowly. It was done so that Mc can grow up and before meeting his wives, he can at least have some achievements and strength. I don't want to write a story where mc runs after chasing girls where girls run after mc thinking he is so cool and wonderful and every hundred chapters another female lead is introduced which is making the story with harem quite bad. So, even if you dislike harem, I ask you to give you a try and judge with your own eyes how different the story is from other typical harem. 3.By the time, I write this review it hadn't been 6 months since I stated as an author.Reader may find some grammatical mistakes. Since I am not a native English person and I write on an old smartphone which hangs a lot while typing so I ask you to pardon me on that. But I will assure you that the story would be readable unlike my first books whose beginning grammar was quite bad.Even mtl trash grammar is better than my other book beginning. That's for all know and I hope you like it and support my WSA work.
it was a good book. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for all the hard work.
Pretty bad dude makes no sense story jumps around all the time and the author tries to make the mc smart but he’s still an idiot
Language needs to be improved and rest of the story upto ch 37 is good and its worth it to purchase this book [img=recommend]
there is really nothing to say about this novel. if you don't have anything to read, you can read it. the good thing about this novel is that there really isn't that much about to say this. I have read 500 ch of this novel. things I didn't like in this novel are characters and their development. Mc is quite an irritable character his bandit, like nature, is too much sometimes. and the most important thing is that the development of his relationship with his wives is non-existent. I think only Riaa's relationship is good with him that we can say they love each other and you can add athena too if you want. he has five wives other than those, and the other are really non-existent in most of the story. most of the time, they are just their own things, and they also don't show respect to him many times he just ignore it, at least according to me all in all, harem part is not good and most of the harem novel have this same problem that is they are doing their own things they are not fighting together they are not getting stronger together. next is his relationship with his father and five goddesses. Even after reading 500 chapters, I am not sure what their relationships are. I mean, he said he doesn't hate his father. I mean, how can he can he not hate his when most of the time his father doesn't do a thing when his son life is in and due his own decisions and that same goes his wives I really couldn't comprehend their logic as to not hate his father as most of them lose their status , lives due to him yes their may be a reason behind all of this but they don't know about this. and the same goes for goddesses. In one chapter, he said hate, and in another, he said he is grateful to them, and that is illogical. he is doing their bidding and his father . and that goes against his character.
I was flabbergasted by first few chapters. Does it that good? No, it was horribly confusing. The plot just jump out of nowhere and left me confused. You see at one point the MC see a group of children with talent at the end of chapter, but in the next chapter he suddenly in the forest hunting. And when Riya refer MC who is still disguise as Rex the bodyguard as "lord", Morden who walk next to them didn't show any significant reactions especially when they act like couple. Normally anyone would surprised when a King's wife suddenly talk affectionately with a mere guard.
The story started in a very good way but it lacked intimacy between the protagonist and his wives on the account of more battles and some of them are elongated too much and the ending is not complete ,it should deal with aftermath and also the wives ,very dissatisfied of the way the story ended .
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Author i love the story so far, This is masterpiece I love it this novel made my hole week so thanks for your hard work and as a person who doesn't love harem story and believe in single female lead. I love this story even if this is a Harem I loved it and enjoyed it and i recommended this to everyone even if you are not into harem and love villain stuff i recommended you this strongly to all of you and again THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK AUTHOR and I have read your other novel also author that is also awesome.
a good novel nor very good nor bad a safe bet if you dont want to lose time to read rubbish and are bored, this novel is for you but dont explect enything it is not a masterpiece as i said it is a safe bet if you cant find a novel to read and have time to read this is for you P.S. writing quality is some time bad
authors should bear these codes in their minds:1. use small letter or lowercase when writing the word GOD in the novel.2. don't touch those religious beliefs like most of the Chinese authors did.3. Avoid racism and senseless nationalism.
Of all your works, this book had the most collection. But why does it have to be neglected/totally abandoned?Some of us are still waiting for updates though, and I even donate power stones some days.Hoping You will resume updating and keep it coming, please, Author.
I will only say that it is very heavy to read .I won't say anything else 😮💨 .
This is a great Webnovel and i recommend giving it a try. I think it has potential to be great. I really like everything about it. The only problem I have with it is that the writing quality isn't the best in some moments, where a word or two feel like it missing in a sentence which confuses me. There are also moments where there is one or two letters missing from a word and sometimes there are word that shouldn’t be in the sentence making it confusing. the grammar isn't th best but it still good that you can understand what going on. (Just a tiny error but there are just a very few moment like one or two where Alex name is wrote as Aled, you can ingore this) IDK what the author is using or where he is writing their story but I feel like if he were to use some kind of app or software for their device (phone/laptop) that he is using to write. It could help boost the writing quality. To the author if you are reading, I'm not saying your bad at writing, I'm sorry of if my comment come off that way to you. All I'm saying is that it could just be a bit better(this sound a bit mean, sorry)Maybe English isn't your first language. Getting an editor would be of great help to you. I've not written any kind of story before, so I don't know how hard it can be but as a reader I just recommend using some kind of tool to help you out a bit. Idk if you have an editor already, but that would be some that good to have. They could go through your work after your done and see if there were any errors or even recommend some stuff to you. Anyway this review look more like I'm complaining about your writing quality which I'm really sorry about which if it comes off that way. Don't get me wrong I'm enjoying this story. I just want it to improve in the writing quality (is this a bit selfish, sorry) aspect because I'm really just invested in this Webnovel. (It a bit selfish or a bit much but it would be great if you and your editor were to go back through all the chapter and fix errors and improve it because the writing quality might be something that new reader have a problem with) Overall, you story has my interest and support. I only wish success for you.👍🏼👌🏼
I have to say it's one the best novel I have come accross and would recommend the one reading this comment to give it a try. .
Author i am loving the latest chapters can't you release two chapters at a time bcoz the chapters releasing are too short.
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The story so far is good for me. Everything is perfect except the writing (3/5 stars) in some parts it's good writing and in others it's not but if you get past that it becomes a great story. I myself, sometimes get bored reading the story or get mentally exhausted and in those times I distract my mind by doing different things. After that I may get back to reading or I just leave it to the next day./ Currently in chapter 362 (Just give the story a chance and you may like it.)
I really love this novel. I really like that you don't rush the meetings and I look forward to how you introduce the other female leads. I do hope you don't make it so other characters that like his wives makes too much drama out of it. I hope you put them in their place and don't drag it out. Here I might be a selfish (I mean I am), but I would love more frequent updates even tho it's already great
Spoiler enthüllen This novel is good. It also reminds me abit of HAIL THE KING novel.[img=recommend]
beautiful fiction beautiful background the speed of the story's progression is also just a little character development in your taste it's always easier to guarantee the first places
Oh a story about five wives how interesting! Wait what do you mean it takes awhile for him to meet up with all five? What do you mean there's a pointless academy arc that takes him immediately away from said wives. When you've been taught by literal Goddesses searching for knowledge at a regular school is unbelievably tasking to read.
nice..........................................but author, will you ever update the novel 'The Extra's Survival' new chapters choro bhai plz bahot log padhna chahte hai 🥺🥺
Writing quality isnt the best. A lot of words need to be added in some sentences, and removed in others. If the author could get a editor or go back and edit his chapter, i would probably enjoy it much more. Story development is good, but the author never specifies how much time passes, until somewhere around chapter 100 i believe. Ive read to chapter 217 and dont plan on continuing it until the grammar and spelling gets better. I do understand that english is not the authors main language, which is fine, its much better than any MTL you would find, but i do hope the author goes back and fixes those mistakes soon
A pretty good start. We can recommend this to people who are new to system/game type novels especially to those who aren't playing rpg's in real life. It's got good explanation for the basics of mmorpg's. Hopefully this genre will become more popular in the future.
The core idea of the novel is very interesting. A mentally challenged prince son of a powerful Emperor has been abandoned, but has a saving grace in the form of five wives with various backgrounds and talents. It has all the things needed for a successful commercial web novel. Unfortunately, since this is a solo project, without any editors or prompt feedback, the entire story is full of deficiencies. 01. Grammer. This is the least serious deficiency of this novel, and it could've been easily solved had the author utilized any writing tool. For instance, Grammerly or even Google Docs. 02. Conflict between cheats. The MC has two cheats. He has been trained by various goddesses, and he also has a system. Introducing both of these cheats have made the whole 'cheat system' feel conflicted and confusing. Any one of them should've been enough. 03. Confusing character behavior. For me the last straw on the hat was the scene where the MC asks Riya for an instructor to teach him. This doesn't make sense since he has already been taught by the goddesses, who are at the top of the world. 04. Too much cheat. The background setting for the MC is very well-written and extremely interesting. However, after explaining the MC's background, we are introduced to how the MC dies and meets the goddesses. I feel like the goddess part was too much of a cheat... That's just too high of a setting! Also, the wives being the daughters of the goddess was just too much of a cheat. This is a kinda controversial point, since some readers might be okay with it, while others like me might feel it's too much. Despite all these faults, at its core this story is a solid one, a rough diamond. What it needs at this moment is a rewrite as well as a good editor. I'd recommend you give it a shot.
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It is not an exaggeration to say that this story is very promising. I'm very sure that if the author are able to give this novel justice, it will be one of the most sought after novel in this app. May you continue to write this epic tale, and I look forward to seeing its completion.