Too slow and lots of info dump 😕... 22 chapters into the novel & I am getting myself feeling bored. Well it's just the initial foundation of the story so I hope it gets better.
Also, please share your thoughts about Volume One—what could have been done better, what you liked or disliked, and what you're looking forward to in Volume Two.
Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World
Games · _Drakon
exactly...
His golden eyes burned with killing intent, and in a chilling tone, he shouted, "Die!"
My Love Debts Are Everywhere!
Fantasy · ManipulatorsOne
"Bro, you really have that much gold? Verify in-game, ID: Ritchie."
Online Game: Starting with an SSS-Level Plundering Talent
Games · BigWhiteGoose
not*
"Wait? Why is the IAmTheStrongestReader writing anything?"
Aetheric Chronicles: Reborn As An Extra
Fantasy · Peace_in_Chaos
her* ---> his
Azariah feared her mother more than anything in this world.
Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Arlott knew the castle was big from the outside, but when he entered inside and looked above, his jaw slammed on the floor.
Hero To Overlord: Arlott the Unfettered!
Fantasy · Eminent_Vellichor
thanks for the chapter...
Nah... It's better
Sorry guys, a long chapter again.
Not-So an Extra
Fantasy · Admirably_
4
2. How would you rate the characters? (1-5)
The Survival of an Inferior
Fantasy · S_Takeshi
In the next chapter..It is mentioned 24 years old ... Please fix it
Starting With an SSS-Rank Swordsmanship Talent
Fantasy · CoffeeKeepsMeSane