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You know, I could read this if I were 16 years old. The main character is stupid, his character jumps from side to side, sometimes he speaks like a normal person in his position, and sometimes like a complete simp. At my age (30), this work does not appeal to me at all. Lots of logical errors, not to mention other stupid things. If you are under 18 years old, as I am sure the author of this work is, please. If you are older, it is better not to start.
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Awful bro mc personality is the worst man reminds me of Issei too much and an female A.i For what bro its stupid man can't believe this has 100+ more chapters im out at 1
I really liked the story so far Iβm on the second to last arc thatβs currently released please pick up for the Dxd arc and expand in that universe
Sadly never got past dxd β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦
TOP TIER PROVIDENCE!????? INSTANT 5 Star... my most fav novel, and the tags look very promising, im inn
I hope this book will continue. I really love this book. This is my favorite book. It would be very sad if you don't continue this book, but I will hope and wait for you to continue this book.
This webnovel exhibits a satisfactory plot progression and the protagonist's character is endearing as they approach situations with intellect, distinguishing themselves from other overpowered and foolish characters. Unfortunately updates stop..
i can't give this fanfic 10/10 , well whatever full 5 star should be enough [img=recommend]
It's a wish-fulfillment with an MC OP but kinda stupid, slice of life and collecting Harems with no specific purpose. It was a good novel and i really tried to keep going and shut my brain down but becoming SIMP is the worst thing that can ruin a novel for me and it's not my cup of tea ( imagine that you are very powerful and that you are afraid of your Harem... ) @Author, good luck for the future.
Tried to get through the existing chapters, but alas I am here writing a review. The main character feels like a teenager in a kindergarten ruining other kids sandcastles over and over for 70 chapters. Constant flexing with negative IQ and his comedic vocabulary being a 1 paged essay. It's your typical wish fulfilment fic with cheesy lines like "I, Your father" and One liners looking like : "Oh the arrogance". All in all, a good wish fulfilment fic, but it becomes very boring towards the end of the first arc, and to top it off, the main character is so obnoxious it's not even remotely pleasant to read. That said, Writing Quality is not bad, there's a few typos here and there, but not the point reading becomes an issue.
Has a story but not a good one. It's your typical 'Webnovel' quality wish fulfillment. Writing wish fulfillment stories isn't bad but it's on how the writer executes and make it entertaining. Is the story entertaining? In my own opinion, no. It lacks dialogue and details and some common sense. The Mc is not even likeable and I can't feel emotions to him as a reader which is very important if you want to have more audience. I have a lot more to say but in the end I suggest you reading some veteran writers like crossedge, einlion, and other famous QQ authors (Webnovel is filled with 'kids' here so don't bother). If you want to earn $$ as a writer then learn from them.
Really like the story, would have been better without the MC's little masochistic phase right before he left to the marvel verse, but I'm pretty sure it all got sorted out. [img=recommend]
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the story is so good but the updating stability is so slow, we need more chapters autheor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a mess ! in the beginning it was interesting , but then the author I didn 't understand at all what he was doing who he thought he was for me , the golden superman would easily kill him , especially from comics . yes , there are a lot of characters who will kill him with one finger from where he has so much high - speed and in general , where is he in a hurry ? . how did he kill the laser dragon ? in short , he just got the strength and the roof went , it looks like he does not perceive reality .
biased review: i only enjoy how the story flow and the characters, there aren't complicated reviews. I just like the novel, then i will give it five stars.
ΠΠ΄ΠΈΠ½ ΠΈΠ· Π»ΡΡΡΠΈΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊΠΎΠ² ΠΏΡΠΎ ΠΊΡΠ»ΡΡΠΈΠ²ΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅, ΠΈΠΌΠ΅Π½Π½ΠΎ ΡΠ°ΠΊΠΈΠΌΠΈ ΠΎΠ½ΠΈ Π²ΡΠ΅ Π΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ½Ρ Π±ΡΡΡ, Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ ΡΡΠΎ Π³Π°ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ½ΠΈΠΊ(Ρ ΡΠΎΡΠΊΠΈ Π·ΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡ Π΅Π²ΡΠΎΠΏΠ΅ΠΉΡΠ° ). + ΠΠ°Π½Π΄Ρ Π² Π³Π°ΡΠ΅ΠΌ. ΠΠ½Π° ΡΡΠΎ Π»ΡΡΡΠ΅Π΅ ΡΡΠΎ ΡΠ»ΡΡΠ°Π»ΠΎΡΡ Ρ ΠΌΠ°ΡΠ²Π΅Π»
A really nice fanfic. Honestly my second fanfic was actually inspired from this and another one, though I only started writing it recently. By inspired I mean just the initial concept nothing else. Anyway I like how the story telling has improved over the chapters but sometimes I feel that I have actually no idea how powerful the MC is. Limiting his cheat was definitely a right choice but I feel like you rushed too much plot development in Realm of the Gods and skipped content that could have been fun. So I really hope you don't just flash over events like that in Marvel too. I do like the style of writing but sometimes you miss some juicy stuff author. I do understand why you did what you did but still. Also MC's character sometimes feel all over the place. To be honest with you sometimes it feels like he has some mental issues but otherwise it's all good. At least you nailed harem characters mostly.
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This novel is amazing, please keep updating it. /β/::-///:-///:/-:-//:-:-/-:-/-////-/:|\|.\|\|\||\|\~|\\\|\\|\\\|\\~|||~~_|\\\||__|\|\|\||\_
Yep five stars for me since it was my first ever book, writing above 100,000 words is no joke but an achievementπ Okay, the fic is amateurish and I know that. I can never call my own work trash even though it was low-quality with little to no major plot development to it. Well there was plot in the first ATG arc and the rest is basically power trip and expansion of the harem as Noah jumps from one verse to another. To new readers, well, read it with little to no expectations. English be like my third learnt language but I made sure to make the story readable... Gosh, it's a miracle I haven't dropped... at leastπ
You know, I could read this if I were 16 years old. The main character is stupid, his character jumps from side to side, sometimes he speaks like a normal person in his position, and sometimes like a complete simp. At my age (30), this work does not appeal to me at all. Lots of logical errors, not to mention other stupid things. If you are under 18 years old, as I am sure the author of this work is, please. If you are older, it is better not to start.
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Awful bro mc personality is the worst man reminds me of Issei too much and an female A.i For what bro its stupid man can't believe this has 100+ more chapters im out at 1
I really liked the story so far Iβm on the second to last arc thatβs currently released please pick up for the Dxd arc and expand in that universe
Sadly never got past dxd β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦ β¦β¦
TOP TIER PROVIDENCE!????? INSTANT 5 Star... my most fav novel, and the tags look very promising, im inn
I hope this book will continue. I really love this book. This is my favorite book. It would be very sad if you don't continue this book, but I will hope and wait for you to continue this book.
This webnovel exhibits a satisfactory plot progression and the protagonist's character is endearing as they approach situations with intellect, distinguishing themselves from other overpowered and foolish characters. Unfortunately updates stop..
i can't give this fanfic 10/10 , well whatever full 5 star should be enough [img=recommend]
It's a wish-fulfillment with an MC OP but kinda stupid, slice of life and collecting Harems with no specific purpose. It was a good novel and i really tried to keep going and shut my brain down but becoming SIMP is the worst thing that can ruin a novel for me and it's not my cup of tea ( imagine that you are very powerful and that you are afraid of your Harem... ) @Author, good luck for the future.
Tried to get through the existing chapters, but alas I am here writing a review. The main character feels like a teenager in a kindergarten ruining other kids sandcastles over and over for 70 chapters. Constant flexing with negative IQ and his comedic vocabulary being a 1 paged essay. It's your typical wish fulfilment fic with cheesy lines like "I, Your father" and One liners looking like : "Oh the arrogance". All in all, a good wish fulfilment fic, but it becomes very boring towards the end of the first arc, and to top it off, the main character is so obnoxious it's not even remotely pleasant to read. That said, Writing Quality is not bad, there's a few typos here and there, but not the point reading becomes an issue.
Has a story but not a good one. It's your typical 'Webnovel' quality wish fulfillment. Writing wish fulfillment stories isn't bad but it's on how the writer executes and make it entertaining. Is the story entertaining? In my own opinion, no. It lacks dialogue and details and some common sense. The Mc is not even likeable and I can't feel emotions to him as a reader which is very important if you want to have more audience. I have a lot more to say but in the end I suggest you reading some veteran writers like crossedge, einlion, and other famous QQ authors (Webnovel is filled with 'kids' here so don't bother). If you want to earn $$ as a writer then learn from them.
Really like the story, would have been better without the MC's little masochistic phase right before he left to the marvel verse, but I'm pretty sure it all got sorted out. [img=recommend]
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the story is so good but the updating stability is so slow, we need more chapters autheor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a mess ! in the beginning it was interesting , but then the author I didn 't understand at all what he was doing who he thought he was for me , the golden superman would easily kill him , especially from comics . yes , there are a lot of characters who will kill him with one finger from where he has so much high - speed and in general , where is he in a hurry ? . how did he kill the laser dragon ? in short , he just got the strength and the roof went , it looks like he does not perceive reality .
biased review: i only enjoy how the story flow and the characters, there aren't complicated reviews. I just like the novel, then i will give it five stars.
ΠΠ΄ΠΈΠ½ ΠΈΠ· Π»ΡΡΡΠΈΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊΠΎΠ² ΠΏΡΠΎ ΠΊΡΠ»ΡΡΠΈΠ²ΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅, ΠΈΠΌΠ΅Π½Π½ΠΎ ΡΠ°ΠΊΠΈΠΌΠΈ ΠΎΠ½ΠΈ Π²ΡΠ΅ Π΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ½Ρ Π±ΡΡΡ, Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ ΡΡΠΎ Π³Π°ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ½ΠΈΠΊ(Ρ ΡΠΎΡΠΊΠΈ Π·ΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡ Π΅Π²ΡΠΎΠΏΠ΅ΠΉΡΠ° ). + ΠΠ°Π½Π΄Ρ Π² Π³Π°ΡΠ΅ΠΌ. ΠΠ½Π° ΡΡΠΎ Π»ΡΡΡΠ΅Π΅ ΡΡΠΎ ΡΠ»ΡΡΠ°Π»ΠΎΡΡ Ρ ΠΌΠ°ΡΠ²Π΅Π»
A really nice fanfic. Honestly my second fanfic was actually inspired from this and another one, though I only started writing it recently. By inspired I mean just the initial concept nothing else. Anyway I like how the story telling has improved over the chapters but sometimes I feel that I have actually no idea how powerful the MC is. Limiting his cheat was definitely a right choice but I feel like you rushed too much plot development in Realm of the Gods and skipped content that could have been fun. So I really hope you don't just flash over events like that in Marvel too. I do like the style of writing but sometimes you miss some juicy stuff author. I do understand why you did what you did but still. Also MC's character sometimes feel all over the place. To be honest with you sometimes it feels like he has some mental issues but otherwise it's all good. At least you nailed harem characters mostly.
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This novel is amazing, please keep updating it. /β/::-///:-///:/-:-//:-:-/-:-/-////-/:|\|.\|\|\||\|\~|\\\|\\|\\\|\\~|||~~_|\\\||__|\|\|\||\_
Yep five stars for me since it was my first ever book, writing above 100,000 words is no joke but an achievementπ Okay, the fic is amateurish and I know that. I can never call my own work trash even though it was low-quality with little to no major plot development to it. Well there was plot in the first ATG arc and the rest is basically power trip and expansion of the harem as Noah jumps from one verse to another. To new readers, well, read it with little to no expectations. English be like my third learnt language but I made sure to make the story readable... Gosh, it's a miracle I haven't dropped... at leastπ